Is This Mangaka Seriously Crazy?

The paragraph review is limited to 150 characters, so I'll put it here. Why do I feel like it's water? I think there are several reasons. First, the details are insufficient, and key plot points are glossed over too quickly, lacking any sense of excitement.

Author, don't you understand why your last book with the same comic book theme flopped? Hey plagiarist, just give me a proper talk about comics! Everything should revolve around the comic works, okay? Can you please stop writing irrelevant things to pad the word count?

I feel like if the plot could just focus on the comic itself, there's no need for such a long slice-of-life scene; it feels pointless and not many people would enjoy reading it.

As long as the main character doesn't have a romantic subplot, or if the main character plagiarizes from comics or acts crazy in their normal life due to the influence of comics, then this book just lacks popularity.

The protagonist is so ( is a difficult word to translate directly, but it conveys a sense of listlessness, apathy, and lack of motivation). It's clearly a transmigration + system + plagiarism story, yet they still use the decadent male lead trope popular 5 or 6 years ago. It's such a satisfying theme, but writing a protagonist makes me uncomfortable.

My previous comments were even deleted. I even voted for a month before saying anything (lol). There's not much else to say, just to save future readers some data: New author, new book, quite a few flaws, good ideas, average writing, but the future is promising.

I'd rate it 7/10. It was quite good when I watched it. The comic's plot and related events were very well written, and I almost couldn't sleep at night. However, the everyday romance scenes were poorly written, like decorating a chocolate cake with candy sprinkles in comparison. Also, I personally prefer well-written romance scenes, so I'm deducting 3 points.

The immersion was terrible; aside from the cyberpunk aspect which got me hooked, the rest felt really weak.

This huge section left me, someone who's read the comics, completely clueless about what to read. The synopsis even mentions "Taoist Ghost." With this writing style, you might as well just write the chapter number and I'll go read the other book first before coming here, so you don't write too much of the original "Taoist Ghost" and get accused of plagiarism.

I went back and read dozens of chapters, but I really couldn't continue. It's fine to draw comics with a weak plot, and it's acceptable to make movies, tokusatsu, and games, but the author's ambition is too great, or rather, there is no outline. He just writes whatever comes to mind. If you're going to do entertainment, just do it properly. Instead, you have to go on to do high technology and AI.