
Immortal Immortality: Starting from the Entry of Longevity Krypton Talent
仙道长生:从寿元氪天赋词条开始
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- Completed
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- 293k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
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- Cultivation Civilization
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- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Please clarify the logic of the first five chapters, and don't blame the author for anything.
First of all, the story of his father exchanging his children and eating them is not the author's promotion of bad values, but a very common phenomenon in ancient times. Second, the first thing the protagonist does when traveling through time is to stop his father. His father also did not survive Chapter 5 because of murder. Third, the protagonist only killed one villain who wanted to violate his underage sister from beginning to end According to modern law, it was an over-defense at best. The author has also read Zhang San's Fa. Don't talk all day long about how arrogant the author dared to write such a thing, or whether there are stains on the protagonist If there are problems at the logical level, the author welcomes everyone to point it out This is a novel about cultivating immortals, not to mention that it has not yet followed the path of demons, but it is much gentler than the historical profile His father was eaten by the unjust ghost for revenge and did not live past five chapters Butcher Zheng bought and sold people and forced young girls In the author's opinion, he deserved his death. Of course, his father's death does not rule out the author's desire to write less emotional drama As for the protagonist killing a lot of people at the beginning, that is because he is the only butcher Zheng To sum up, the author does not think there is any stain in the logic of the protagonist's behavior. Could it be that Xiuxianliu novels are not even allowed to write protagonists who kill people?
I just read one chapter and asked the author how dare he do this? The background of the main character was written by a great author. . . . . . . . Subsequent episodes.
Carrying a family with you is not as good as a beggar's start. It's better looking than this, at least it's not a drag.
Have an idea
It seems that the preparation has started at a thousand chapters, but even if this routine is perfected, I feel that I can't write a thousand chapters, and the results are not very good. However, the author can easily experience that his brain is being drained step by step, plus the feeling of sweating, until he can't write a word, so he leaves a claw to see if he can write.
What a pity eunuch. Although the plot is not very well written, the setting of Goldfinger is quite good.
After reading almost a dozen chapters, the protagonist feels a bit like Tang San to me
If you are a good person, you are definitely not a good person. He is not a chaotic evil kind of bad person. He is a bit bullying and afraid of the strong. Don't steal money, educate your sister that you can't do it, and then steal it again. The key is to read the description and not attack someone who is rich and powerful. Then, if you want to steal martial arts, don't steal from the strongest one, don't go to the weakest family to steal from, find someone with a good reputation for a long time, and accept it. Doesn't this mean that a gentleman can bully him? Then I had a falling out with someone (one of the juniors bullied someone too much), and I didn't teach the junior a lesson or kill him without saying a word. In the end, I said he wanted the complete book of martial arts from that junior, and if he didn't give it, he would take it by force
The book "Qidian" cannot be written without mentioning the place names on the map of China, nor can it be written without mentioning a few historical figures --I just don't want to use my brain.
I really can't watch it with my brain.
What are you writing about? The protagonist is a loser! To say rubbish is to insult the word rubbish!
The first chapter is about Butcher Zheng giving his daughter to the protagonist and his son. The father killed the butcher's daughter and cut the meat for the protagonist who was sick in bed. The father asked his daughter to marry the butcher. Then the protagonist traveled through time and heard that the butcher wanted to eat his sister's left hand. He immediately disagreed and went to the butcher. He wanted his sister back, but the butcher was unwilling and the protagonist and his son were knocked to the ground. Then the protagonist died that day. Use your golden finger to cheat and knock on the butcher's door and tell the butcher that I owe you too much. Then I killed the butcher. After reading two pictures, I was thinking about why Butcher Deng gave his daughter to the protagonist Why not write that Butcher Zheng exchanged one or two pigs for his sister or a field for his sister. The protagonist wanted to return the things to the butcher, but the butcher was unwilling to beat the protagonist to the ground.
The character of the main character is so disgusting that I have withdrawn it.
Crowdfunding to write a book (mainly for entries)
First of all, I would like to declare and express my gratitude that the source of the golden finger of this book is reference Longevity: Starting from the entry of luck The cute new author scans the list and writes the beginning that everyone understands. But the author has already conceived a story of his own From physical training to qi training, most of the entries for foundation building have been conceived But readers may have better ideas Entry setting: Green: corresponds to the twelfth level of qi training and below, which requires 10 years of life Blue: corresponds to foundation building and golden elixir, which requires a hundred years of life Orange: corresponds to Nascent Soul and Yinshen, which requires a thousand years of life Red: Corresponds to Yang Shen and integration, requires a life span of ten thousand years Black: Corresponds to transcending tribulations and Mahayana, requires a life span of one hundred thousand years Gold: Corresponds to immortals and above, requires a life span of one million years This is written so far In the entry library, you can discuss the upgrade effect and provide some interesting talents [Peach Blossom Tribulation (White)]: Wu Da is destined to commit a peach blossom, and the fate calamity is just a thought away. This entry is mutually beneficial to reading and chanting sutras. [Elder brother is like father (white)]: The achievements and blessings of the descendants of your three clans depend on you. [Photosynthesis (green)]: It can absorb sunlight for recovery, healing and charging. The absorption rate depends on the total amount of chloroplasts on the body surface area and the weight of the sunlight exposure area. Ps: I want to dye this thing green. [Speed reaction power (green)]: The ability to stop leveling reaction when acquiring a fake, jojo: There are limits to human reaction, I don't want to be a human anymore! ! [Bull Demon Powerful (Green)]: Also known as the Hulk's Wrath, the strength can increase as much as it can withstand the force of the Bull Demon's dismemberment. However, the higher the anger, the physical load can be correspondingly reduced and higher blessings can be obtained. [Willow Branch Rope Art (Green)]: Any of your actions can temper the ghost body on the basis of causing damage to the ghost. Ps: If you have a ghost pet, please be sure to set a safe word. Acquired Talent: Smiling Nine Springs (Gray) [Smiling Nine Springs (Ashes)]: The ancestral spirits of the underworld are interdependent with the ordinary people in terms of blessings and misfortunes, but personal encounters are only related to the ancestral spirits. However, with this entry, if one dies and enters the underworld, the locals will be more polite. This entry is a growth entry. When the ancestral spirit has the power to entrust dreams, it is upgraded to [Ancestral Spirit Youzhi (White)]. When the ancestral spirit enters the Tao, it will be upgraded to [Ancestral Spirit Blessing (Green)]. When the ancestor spirit runs out of life and reincarnates, this talent entry disappears. PS: There is someone below me.