Doupo: Emperor Yan, Please Exercise Restraint, You Are Really a Simple Brother.

Being a fan can be fun, but this can no longer be said to be fun, only embarrassing. 1. First of all, there is the issue of time travel. The protagonist and Xiao Yan are both time travellers. To make the plot not awkward, the world view of time travel cannot be the same. At the very least, it must be a parallel world. Didn't you see that Xiao Yan has never played in the original novel? It can be said that Xiao Yan's memory of his previous life has been blurred for a long time, otherwise the contents of the martial arts and fairy novels in his previous life would have given him a clue about combat skills. The two time-travelers were stunned when they saw their fellow travelers recognize each other. 2. The protagonist cheats. Generally speaking, fantasy novels have to be written step by step. You can reach the top in one step, unless you don't plan to write many words of plot in the first place. Fighter, Fighter... This kind of reward for each realm is so big even in the first few, how do you want to open up the plot after that? I used Ling Ying in the novice village on the bright side, and it didn't feel like a life-and-death battle experience. This plot can no longer be called a Dou Po Sang Qiong fan, it should be called the return of the God of War, the Dragon King's son-in-law... 3. The problem of the female protagonist. (Choose an example without reading) Qing Yanjing? As we all know, the Eight Divine Veins of the Ancient Buddha Clan appeared in Dou Qi Continent and became associated with the protagonist. Your physique is stronger than that of the ancient imperial clan, and even many people other than the protagonist know that it is poison. Even if he stays in the lower world and does not return to the ancient pagoda to be reincarnated and conceived, from the reverse deduction from the Great Master, we know that the protagonist still has a lot of time to intercept Hu Qingyanjing before he reaches the world. Knowing that Tudou has given very few details in this regard and is still vague, and he has to bite the bullet and write, problems are bound to happen. Is there no other woman in the world? You have to rely on a woman to forcefully get involved with a pagoda who will definitely not be able to defeat the protagonist in the future. Is this taking advantage of the situation? 4. There are too many ambiguous plots, too many scheming elements, and too few combat experience plots. In this way, you can't even expect the climax of the plot. It has become a driving, funny, humorous and light-hearted, Dragon King II novel. I think the author wrote less and read less. As he wrote, he couldn't help but feel more and more weird. 5. There are many beautiful female protagonists and supporting characters in the plots of Fighting Continent and The Great Master, but it feels inappropriate to involve Wu Dong. Crossing the plane barrier and using Wu Dong to cut grass and become the king of the mountain? Lin Dong's character design is still very good, so Wu Zu will be completely gone? As I write, I feel like I am daydreaming about doing whatever I want.

This is the first Dou Po fanfic I read. In fact, when I first started reading the first part, I felt it was okay. With a sense of anticipation, the further I read, the more I felt it was getting worse. In the end, it even sucked. The pace was accelerated, as if on an airplane, and it also stretched my hips. I didn't write a harem very well, so overall I felt like I was under-booked.

I have a question, if Zhang Yuan and Xiao Yan are really from the same place on the same earth. So what year is the timeline? 😒After Xiao Yan traveled through time? ? ?

Although there are spoilers involved, it doesn't hurt to fan the book. The author likes Xiao Yanzi very much, so there will be no malicious suppression or slander. I write fanfics because I like the female characters in the work. I'm sorry for traveling back in time, otherwise I would just write original works. This is the main tone. No matter how much you like Xiao Yanzi, it doesn't mean you will give her away. 1: Xiao Yan definitely has a wife and is not a bachelor. Now I can confirm that one of them is Huo Zhi (a member of the Yan tribe, one of the eight ancient tribes, the leader of the younger generation, possesses a kind of strange fire, the Honglian Yehuo ranked eighth on the strange fire list, often wearing a red skirt, He has a veiled face and has a good impression of Xiao Yan. ) 2: The protagonist will not be a nanny for Xiao Yanzi. Both parties will shine, and Xiao Yanzi will be the protagonist and assist the protagonist to a certain extent 3: Originally, Xiao Yan would not take advantage of the opportunity. Although I have just started writing the book at the starting point, I have been writing it for several years, and it is not that I cannot write without the original work. You can rest assured that a reasonable growth path will be designed for the protagonist 4: The world view and various systems of the book will not be changed. The principle of the second design is not to change the setting of the original work. A reasonable derivation of a blank area 5: We will not follow the plot for the sake of following the plot. Some important plots will be involved, and the fans will feel better. If you can accept these settings, please read this book vigorously. It will definitely make you feel happy and not feel aggrieved or depressed. If you are die-hard fans of the original work and die-hard Xiao Yan fans, just pretend you have not seen this book and please block it. I will delete any comments about this aspect. Please do not read if you disagree with each other. If there is a conflict between the second setting and the original setting, some settings are unreasonable, and some stories are unreasonable, you can speak freely, and the author will definitely accept it with an open mind. In addition, if you have any suggestions and ideas, everyone can speak freely. Although young authors may not always reply, they will definitely read it. Basic good suggestions will be incorporated without violating my original setting and outline. Thank you for your support.

Little Medical Fairy

Xun'er (childhood sweetheart/Bai Yueguang/the first Bai Fumei) Medusa (the wise wife who manages the power) The Little Doctor Fairy (the good wife who develops the power) Ya Fei (the good wife in the business sector) Yun Yun and Nalan Yanran (the wise wife who recruits disciples/cultivates talents) Qinglin (the maid) Qing Yanjing (the heroine of great luck/destined encounter) There will definitely be no shortage of the above, but the protagonist will not be a stud (if you see a beautiful woman, you will accept it) In the future, you may add a few more, such as Lin Qingtan and Ling Qingzhu. It all depends on the plot development and make sure you don't accept them randomly, but you can't miss or give away girls (a big taboo among fans) The protagonist will be the Great Qian Emperor in the future I hope everyone knows it

It's just a slap in the face. Your Aunt Yun was not even a second-rate character in Dou Po before. Yun Yun was very popular when I was chasing Dou Po novels. I used to vote on forums and stuff, and even Zi Yan's popularity couldn't be beat (I posted screenshots when I was ten years old, and I have been following Dou Po for many years). The most popular Dou Po during the novel period was Xun'er, the queen. None of them can compare to her, her popularity is ridiculous, and then there are the Queen and Little Doctor Fairy. Aunt Yun is just a passerby. The animation production team brought private goods to modify the plot and sell meat in the World of Warcraft Mountains. They only saved her by modeling. I didn't see you coming out back then. It's hard to reconcile.

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After reading 60 chapters, I just feel so bored. I don't understand the protagonist's thoughts at all. Is it because I have lived in modern society for too long and doesn't understand the rules of the extraordinary world, so I want to go to the army to earn resources? To be honest, at the beginning of the Xiao family, there are no guardians, systems and alchemy skills. It is basically Canaan College. Don't say it is the same but it is the best way. Yunlan Sect has the Soul Palace. Without alchemy, you cannot enter the Alchemist Association. It is better to join the army than to enter the academy. Canaan Academy's skills, opportunities, connections, and resources are better than those of the royal family, so I really don't understand the benefits of joining the army. Even if it is to form a force or recruit people to fight against the Yunlan Sect, it doesn't take that much trouble. If I am strong enough, how can the royal family not help? And Yunshan didn't have to kill him. I have been playing army games with the royal family, and have to deal with the beast tide, make suggestions, and put myself in a seemingly very high position. However, people are just afraid of the possible forces behind it. Therefore, the layout for the protagonist feels boring and small. Of course, I may also be worried that going to Canaan College is not strong enough to suppress the senior students, so I stay in the army to play house and wait for Xiao Yan to grow up.

The writing was not bad, but when I saw the target brother Xiao Yan poaching his wife, he was very unhappy, so he prostituted himself for nothing.

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I gave up after reading Chapter 50 The reasons are as follows 1. I can't see the exciting part of experience, seeking opportunities, becoming stronger, and cultivating Emperor Yan. There are not many words in the whole book, one million words, and I have to write about the vast world. It took a full 100,000 words to write about a small Wutan City. , One-tenth of the page, I wrote about some insignificant things, using power and intrigue to destroy the other two major families in Wutan City. This was not necessary at all. When I became stronger, I could destroy them with just one hand. I calculated dozens of chapters to destroy two small families. Wouldn't it be better to find opportunities to become stronger as soon as possible? 2. Gu Xun'er has been arrested since childhood, and the little medical fairy has already established a relationship. Why are you still in the army? What time is wasting in the Jiama Empire? Why not go to Canaan College earlier and cultivate a relationship with Zi Yan. Zi Yan's talent can also be treasure hunting. Can't you look for opportunities while cultivating relationships? A short space can describe the emotional drama. I have no objection to Gu Xun'er, Zi Yan, Little Doctor Fairy, Medusa and Qinglin. Don't you think Xiao Yan should accept Nalan Yanran? Does Yun Yun have any talent? The most outrageous one is Ya Fei. What's the use of this kind of vase? Not to mention the Queen of Gold, it's just for the sake of others' eyes. Otherwise, just a beauty fighting for the emperor, isn't it just a toy for the strong?

The protagonist is really a vegetarian and accepts all beauties. I understand that the inclusion of Lan Yanran made her a Dou Zun in the original work, but accepting Yafei, a woman with mediocre qualifications who became a Dou Emperor by taking drugs in the original work, is a bit lowering her own bottom line. I feel like a pervert, and these women are like my toys. I can understand having a harem, but having a harem just for the sake of having a harem is a bit disgusting. Haha, I guess this is the only interesting point of this novel. I want to brush it off.

Emperor Huang Tian was worthy of everyone, but he was only sorry for Yun Yun in the Star Forest. He blamed Yun Shan for the arranged marriage. Yun Ling had to marry Xiao Wu. In order to save Xiao Wu, Tang San snatched Shi Hao's million-year soul ring. Otherwise, Shi Hao would be nine red and one blue gold. In order to save Shi Hao, Feng Qing'er used the Infatuation Curse to block Tang San's magical skills and never return. However, Shi Hao finally inherited Yan Emperor and practiced the Burning Art. Practicing both punishment and protection, he obtained the Divine Seal Throne of Eternity and Creation, and was recognized by the Immortal Killing Sword and the Shura Demon Sword. Mikami Yunlan Sect beheaded Tang San, the god of death, and took back the million-year soul ring. For the sake of all beings in the eight realms, Shi Hao retreated to attack all forbidden spells. He used Fulong Xiangtian to give the fourteen-winged archangel Sariel a dragon head, and then used Ten Thousand Swords to return to the sect, the Angel Holy Sword, the Seven Killing Sword, and the Shura Demon Sword. The remaining swords of the Killing Immortal Sword and Master Gui merged into one and killed the Archangel Sariel. Although the Evil Condensation Pearl was shattered and the demon system was destroyed, there was no god in the world. Finally, Shi Hao peeled off the tenth soul ring, resurrected Feng Qing'er, and created the Endless Fire Domain, realizing eternity. From then on, Wei Young Turtle guarded the Fire Domain and protected all beings in the eight realms. Shi Hao looked at the lower world and left a sentence: Once you are a bad person, you will always be a bad person! :

Xun'er

Pig's Foot went to the world with three thousand beauties from the harem and was fucked by the awesome Western Heaven War Emperor. Pig's Foot died and the harem was enjoyed, and finally

I just gave it up. I don't know what the author was thinking. The first two hundred chapters were okay, but in the end it became more and more outrageous. I won't talk about going to other planes. Are you a hungry ghost in lust? Later on, the harem is opened up. I don't even know how many women are related to the protagonist. Damn it, you can't write without women, right? He is also saying that the protagonist is not a stallion. What is this Taima not a stallion? The one from the Yan Clan who has no sense of existence has to be forced in. I almost vomited when I saw that. Come on, this is fantasy, not martial arts. Why do you accept so many women? Useless? Really, I have no interest at all. I'm afraid I will continue to collect them in the big world, right? I can't walk when I see a woman, I'm really convinced, it's a waste of my money

How much does the author like Medusa? What happened to the protagonist? Before the confiscation, when the relationship was not very clear, it was still only on the level of cooperation. Resources were given away casually, but the attitude was not good. From time to time, the protagonist was threatened, and the protagonist just licked her face and laughed. She was suppressed by Dou Zong, and the protagonist also had what she needed. What was the result? The protagonist hurriedly and almost begged to give her away, fearing that Medusa wouldn't let her go, so she kept trying to show her kindness. At most, she emphasized that she couldn't offend him. She was really lickable, and she had to kidnap her later. Only when the kidnapping was successful would she fully cooperate. It really made me laugh. If Gu Xun'er knew that the protagonist was so easy to control, she would have cried to death. It's better to kill him or become a slave. Of course, the protagonist can also be made into a slave of Medusa 🤫

As soon as I see Qing Yanjing, I can't hold my nerve anymore. If I fight, I'll fight. If I add other characters, it will be very dramatic. Okay, give up.

Your harem is just a harem. The key point is that seven of the ten chapters in your novel are about having affairs with women, and you haven't written much serious plot. You don't even understand the basic logic of society, so you just like to engage in ambiguity. As long as you are strong, those women will not be able to get hold of them. Gu Yuan is so powerful that he directly sends his daughter to your bed

Fighting Qi/Dou Zhe~Body Tempering Realm/Earth Yuan Realm~Induction Realm Dou Shi/Great Fighting Master~Tian Yuan Realm/Yuan Dan Realm~Spiritual Movement Realm Dou Ling~Shaping Realm~Spiritual Wheel Realm (condensing into a wheel and condensing Dou Qi into a solid) Dou Wang~Qi Creating Realm~Spirit Realm Dou Huang, Dou Zong, Dou Zun ~ Creation Realm, Nirvana Realm, Shengxuan Realm - Realm of Three Days (the first level of Heaven Fusion Realm, you can integrate yourself into the heaven and earth, thereby controlling the spiritual energy for your own use. The Dou Emperor initially controls a part of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth. The second level of Heaven Transformation Realm. It can make the soul leave the body. , After the soul is freed from the constraints of the body and so on, it can move between heaven and earth. When attacked, it can also slide the body into the world, so that the damage it receives is weakened. It is similar to Douzong's initial use of space ability to defend. The third level, the Tongtian realm, can make the soul leave the body. Travel around the world without being destroyed. Basic ability to control space to travel in the void) Transition Douzun~Death Mysterious Realm~Supreme Little Three Difficulties (the continuous compression and sublimation of Dou Qi has the same purpose as the Little Three Dilemmas) First to third level Supreme~Junior High Level Half-Saint~Whispering Realm Fourth to ninth level supreme ~ one to six star fighting saint ~ ordinary reincarnation to one calamity reincarnation (the broken space of ninth level supreme corresponds to the displacement of six star fighting saint mark space) lower level earth supreme ~ seven to eight star fighting saint ~ two calamity reincarnation (officially entering high-level fighting saint, and ordinary fighting saint That is the difference between the ordinary Supreme Yunni) The Supreme Earth ~ Nine-Star Battle Saint ~ Three Tribulations Reincarnation (can activate the energy tide to instantly kill the junior and intermediate Fighters, corresponding to the Upper Earth Supreme to kill the ordinary Supreme instantly) Earth Supreme Great Perfection ~ Half Emperor ~ Half Ancestor (White Dragon Plane Similar to the plane development stages of Tianxuan Continent, the upper limits of the strongest are Earth Supreme Dzogchen and Half Ancestor respectively. At the same time, because Tudou Live said that Dou Emperor is equal to the Ancestral Realm, it can be obtained that Half Emperor is equal to Half Ancestor equal to Earth Supreme Dzogchen. In a broad sense, the Supreme Realm includes ordinary Supreme Earth. Supreme and Heavenly Supreme, it is correct to say that Dou Emperor is in the Supreme Realm) Quasi-Tian Supreme/Touching Heavenly Supreme ~ Dou Emperor ~ Ancestral Realm (The strength of the Yimo Emperor and Fuzu, who seeks the opportunity of Heavenly Supreme as he touches the Heavenly Supreme realm, is back and forth, equivalent to the pseudo-Demon Emperor) )

There's nothing wrong with having multiple female protagonists. It was Qing Yanjing, who belonged to the Renwu Ancestor, and they had already established a relationship when they arrived in the big world. This can be collected.

The writing is quite impressive, and those who have never written a book really don't know how it feels. Some people only know how to bark. I was almost deceived by these comments. They said it was a bit poisonous. In my opinion, the ideas are not as bad as they said. Some of the inspirations and ideas are quite good. Excellent works.

It's okay. It's worth reading. Although there are some flaws, for example, I personally feel that Medusa doesn't like to wear underwear outside in Chapter 115. There are no other big problems. The content is fascinating and the characters are also very good. Oh, especially the people in the comment area are also very friendly and everyone is happy to read it. The various free comments are eye-catching, such as: The above interesting comments are worth your time to explore. Finally, I have "graduated" after watching it. If you have any interesting ideas or funny comments, you can interact with me. I wish you all a happy reading 😍😍

What's the use of his Jiuyuan Mansion? Without any organizational power and cohesion, he might as well just refine the Jiuyuan Order on a large scale and sell it, making money on the Internet.

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