Expert in Anomalous Containment

I never expected it to be a harem article. It is rare to open a harem now. I made a mistake. Alas😮‍💨, I strayed into a precious place. Fellow Taoists, please continue (I forgot to read the comments. Damn it. It's uncomfortable. Tonight's fairy white repair is done)

The front row reminds me of the harem in this book 😏 and the late game

The emotional line of this book has always made me feel bored. Neither my sisters nor my boss liked it very much. Now I finally figured it out. What feels strange to me about the emotional scenes in this book is that they are all about daily life, all about going to bed, and they seem to have nothing to do with adventure or climax. Going to bed was a blur, the daily routine was brushed off, and the mood was extinguished before it even got up, and I had to repeat the phrase "you haven't watched it after watching it". The length of the emotional drama is not the key, the emotion is. All the emotional scenes in this book are taken for granted, step-by-step, and without passion. Just like the daily comparison between Shangguan and the protagonist in the book, the Red Duke's lineage fights against the Beast King. The story of the fight against the Beast King is obviously shorter in terms of length, but it attracts me more than everyday life, which is really dull and boring.                                                                                               It is all about having sex. To be honest, I just want to laugh. Whether it is Su's confession or the hotel, it is like a farce, writing about having sex in a fog. Rather than counter-cleansing, I care more about the author's writing style to avoid review, like an extra that has nothing to do with the main text. The summary is that the emotional drama in this book lacks a touching plot. Or to use the terminology of this book, there is no desire, there is the desire to go to bed, but there is no desire to fall in love. Su Weiyu is cautious, Su Yue is cautious, Xia Shou is cautious, Shangguan's daily life is leisurely, the logic is there, where is the desire? Whether those who are good at sensationalism are Ji Cha, Tingri, Fengyue or Jiangnan's classic dragon clan, the sensationalism is reflected in the climax of the plot. The emotional drama in this book has nothing to do with the plot points. This is probably the reason why I don't like it.

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I rarely write long reviews, but this book is worth it. I have fully ordered this book. To be honest, I like it very much. The emotional plot is a bit flat, but you can see that there is a lot of thinking by the author in it. On the one hand, it is about the world setting. The whole structure is quite good. On the other hand, it pays attention to some ingenuity, whether it is the recently published mark of measuring people or thinking about desire. As for the entire book, it is considered excellent. I hope people who read this comment can support the author more

Personal rating: 7.5-8/10 (non-spoilers) To summarize my feelings for readers who don't want to read a long story: the writing style generally makes some plots that should be sensational a bit awkward to watch, but the author can use his strengths and avoid weaknesses, and the plot and world view design are quite exciting. So far, there is no big problem with the self-consistency of the logic. This is better than most works, male and female. The character design of the main character is also very good, and I can feel the obvious arc of the character. In terms of emotional scenes, emmmm, I can only say that the writing is very similar to that of Little Chu Nan (pure praise). The pulling part is a bit rushed, but it is very sweet to taste. The psychological activities are quite good (it is really little Chu Nan, I admire the face). Unfortunately, it is limited by the world view, and there are very few daily parts. It is understandable, but I personally feel a little regretful. By the way, the author has said that there are many female protagonists, so don't enter if you don't like it (The following will involve spoilers, so be careful) Let's talk about the shortcomings first. They are quite obvious. The author even said it himself. The writing style is a disadvantage, but I think the author is still good at it. It's improved. There are a lot of plots in the past that I can tell the author wanted to write, but they actually look really awkward. When it comes to the recollection of the unknown hero, I think it has obviously improved. The simple words really convey the tragic feeling that I want, which is a section that impressed me deeply. Fortunately, I think the subject matter chosen by the author will require far more plot design than writing style. This is also a way to maximize strengths and avoid weaknesses. Once there are loopholes in the plot, the entire book will easily collapse, so I hope the author has a complete design. Now I can start boasting, there are still many advantages First, let's talk about the characters. My favorite in this book is probably the female protagonist. Because the male protagonist also has a large part of the mystery plot, I think the male protagonist is not as three-dimensional and complete as the female protagonist. This kind of shaping is multi-faceted, including Su Weiyu who wants to protect her sister (sister control), and Su Weiyu who is a transparent person who seems to be very happy (actually it is quite cool) But Su Weiyu is very strong and endures loneliness (Gouzi and 678 have made great contributions), and Su Weiyu is a girl who has just started to fall in love and is carefully pulled by the person she likes. Su Weiyu's character is very complete, and the charm value is full. I hope that I can see the sweet daily life of Xiao Su and Xia Shou in the future. It can be in a different timeline. Please, this is really important to me 😢😆. Then there are the three parts of "Wolong and Phoenix Girl". Brother Bai has more ink, but the effect of the revenge scene is really poor, so bad that I even think the author did it on purpose, otherwise there would be such a frustrating revenge (probably not because of poor writing skills), but Brother Bai's character design is still okay, and the design of the Rubik's Cube is also very handsome. I still recognize the author's creativity in abilities. I hope that the subsequent subplots of the supporting characters will be a little more interesting and refreshing. The other thing is that many people are a little disgusted with my sister, but I still like her very much. She is an "ordinary person" who is trying to keep up with Xia Shou. The process of my sister's transformation from the ordinary world to a finisher is actually not easy. Since the sister is mostly "fighting for men" with her sister, she seems a bit of a vase. In fact, she is as strong as her sister, which can be seen from her powers, including the few words she has revealed about the so-called "future". But at present, I think there is a lack of a "personal return" for her to shine, so she seems to be much less attractive than her sister. I am looking forward to the possible follow-up Shura Field plot. The sister who controls the sister wants to compete with the sister who can't see her sister. This kind of thing is great to think about. 😌 Okay, the character design is almost covered. Let me talk about the worldview and plot design that I think are the essence. The two are bound. An excellent plot is inseparable from a good worldview. The setting of this book obviously has a lot of elements related to esotericism. I don't know much about this aspect. I only know a little bit from the comments when I read the book. However, it does not affect my understanding at all. Instead, it makes me want to play related games. The plot can basically be divided into small dungeons. At the beginning, the Blood Demon dungeon was an introduction, leaving countless foreshadowings and leading to the heroine. My favorite later was the dungeon in Yuezhuo Village. The design was interlocking and the solution corresponded to the previous foreshadowing. I thought it was very clever and had an unexpected and reasonable feeling. It can be read as a separate short article. Others, like the movie chapter and the "One Hour" City chapter, all feel more or less incomplete. The former had too little space for the game with the "Butcher", Revenge was even more unpleasant to watch, and it ended very suddenly. The key setting of making a movie had no sense of existence after watching it. It's a pity that I lost my expectations before watching it. The latter is more interesting, and the actual perception also highlights the characteristic of "retaining one hour of memory". The process of solving this obstacle is well grasped, and it does not affect the progress of the main plot. However, the final ending of the main plot still feels too sudden for me. Although it makes sense, the perception is that the next step is a climax battle, and the villain suddenly appears, which is kind of beautiful. There is also a copy of Blood Dynasty, which is my favorite plot. At least it is very complete and it is very enjoyable to watch. The hallucination of the Beacon of Fear makes people come back. The writing is really great, and the inner activities are so delicately written. The copy of Underworld is also good. It has a feeling of getting better and better. The design of the time traveler who thought it was a game is also quite interesting. It is a very good profile description tool that can make the acquisition of some important information look less like deus ex machina. The other world line also looks very interesting. I wonder if I will have a chance to check it out. It's a pity that only the protagonist remembers the 15 years in the book (? I can't remember, probably that many). I hope my sister can remember it in the future, just like I hope my sister can see my sister one day. In general, the whole plot is logical and self-consistent. There are still many mysteries about the protagonist. I believe the author can handle them well. After all, the look and feel of this book is getting better and better. On a whim, I wrote whatever I thought of. I really like this book. I have recently been nominated for a masterpiece. I just hope that more people will read this book, and I also hope that the author will write better and better. Come on, author! 🤓

After reading too many books like this, I always want the protagonist to create an organization or force of his own, and I don't want the protagonist to join a national organization or other organizations. However, there is no book about the protagonist creating his own organization. Instead, they all join other people's organizations.

Su Weiyu was born with the greatest wealth in the world - the ability to rationalize everything she does without being noticed by anyone.        ，，，，，，，， Occasionally she feels lonely, but those are all minor flaws brought about by her abilities. They are the embellishments on the road to becoming a strong person. Human beings cannot share the same language with her, and weirdness keeps her company. She was born to stand above everyone. The way she walked was the way of heaven, and the people she punished were the punishment of heaven. Due to the nature of her abilities, she sees herself as the master of humans, simply because they cannot disobey her. Her goal is to transcend humans and monsters. She regards this as her birthright mission, or as an inevitable outcome. After she reached the top, the world continued as usual, and humans and weirdness continued to be entangled. They have no way of knowing that there is still a person named Su Weiyu in the world, and the fact that humans and weirdness will always exist is engraved in time, because she has become existence itself.              ，，，， Notice! Frequent use of the power of existence will also lead to the reduction of one's own existence. It is said that this is a ritual He uses to collect people to accompany Him in the eternal years, but no one can confirm it. Because so far, the phenomenon of frequent use of the power of existence being reduced and causing disappearance has not been recorded! ! !        （

My personal opinion is that there are more and more questions, and there is no explanation. The protagonist is very busy. The power system seems to be obvious at first, second and third levels, but the reality is not clear. For example, the professional titles and positions. The level division of the administration is only the professional titles, but the strength is divided by the position. This is not clear. The plot arrangement is too compact, and there is no smooth transition in the plot, causing the protagonist to be almost pushed along. In the previous plot, there is no "what should I do" by the protagonist, but only "what should you do". When reading, it feels too passive, which makes the whole plot too depressing and makes reading very tiring. Finally, there are too many riddles in the plot. Many of the questions at the beginning have not been solved after hundreds of chapters. These questions do not have simple and clear solutions like the revenge of the father's murder, such as Edward's life and death. It is obvious that the book cannot be answered in the early stage, Mermaid. I think this is a radio novel, and it's hard for me to get into a book with so many unsolved mysteries.

It is quite interesting to see this analysis of the concept of love at the beginning of Chapter 1479. By the way, I would like to talk about my personal experience of this book. Personally speaking, there are roughly four aspects to watch in this book: ① Occasionally stunning plot designs, such as Yuezhuo Village/Eternal Purgatory; ② Desire system settings, such as the current paragraph and the diary law, which may seem deviant at first glance but are inexplicably convincing; ③ Characters, thanks to long-term investment The accumulation of pen and ink and the desire system make it easier to highlight the characteristics of the characters. Many characters in the book are impressive, such as the protagonist team and Split; ④Emotional drama and daily scenes. Compared with the unstable copy, the author's daily plot quality has a higher limit. The emotional drama also has a performance above the standard due to the distinct character image and the desire system. Personally, the first thing that initially attracted me to this book was the first one, but as the consumption of ideas/inspiration continued to decline, the results of subsequent attempts were far from ideal; On the other hand, as the content accumulated, I gradually developed feelings for the characters, even if the story experience was not good enough. Jia Ye can continue to pursue; Later on, I gradually discovered that the seemingly rough abnormal system, but the author can give tricky interpretations and ideas from time to time, which is not a big surprise. Coupled with the emotional drama and daily life that are always online, the inertia of reading has regained a certain sense of expectation. The biggest problem in my personal experience with this book is that besides the above points, other contents are tasteless and the copy is a failure. In fact, I have always had the idea of ​​​​rereading it again to summarize and sort out the wild and wild ideas in the book, but it has also ended in regret many times due to the large amount of uninteresting content between the exciting sections. For readers who have been following updates, they are faced with unknown plot developments. Even if they are not satisfied at the moment, they still have certain expectations. In addition, the longer reading time allows these readers to have a deeper emotional accumulation of the characters, so they can persist in reading; The author seems to have chosen to focus on daily content for his next book. This decision can be regarded as exploiting strengths and avoiding weaknesses. However, I personally hope not to completely give up on imagining wonderful puzzle plot designs and unfettered ideas. After all, there are many authors who can write about daily life, and your unique advantage is that you can not only write about daily life. Readers like me are first attracted by wonderful puzzle solving and original ideas, and then gradually transform into daily readers as the story develops. I still remember the sudden introduction of two dummy characters during the preparation stage for the Yuezhuo Village dungeon. Quite a few readers were dissatisfied, but the author confidently stated that there was a reason for writing this way. I hope everyone can believe the author's plot design. Sure enough, the Yuezhuo Village dungeon became the most dazzling peak of the book. Maybe later Many failed attempts have affected the author's confidence. I have never seen the author confidently announce that a good show is about to take place. However, this experience has convinced me that the author has a clear understanding of the quality of his plot. I have seen the author say before that he thinks the ending of the book is well designed, and I am looking forward to the book having a stunning ending. Finally, I hope that the author of the next book can go further on the basis of this book, and don't give up on his core competitiveness because of some unsuccessful attempts in this book. Your writing skills and maturity of routines are not ranked high in the Internet literary circle, but your eye-catching inspiration and eccentric ideas are rare among the countless authors. Come on!