Sword Master's Girlfriend Returns After Rebirth

I came in as a daily guide and read 62 chapters in one night. Personally, I feel that the pace of this book is relatively comfortable, and it is an above-average book in my eyes. Recently, the author responded that this book has multiple female protagonists, and suggested that the author change the name. Some people who like to read harems simply ignored this name. People with a single female protagonist will also want to curse after seeing the latest chapter. You can try to ask netizens for their opinions. According to the available information, the world view of this book should be set two thousand years later, similar to the ancient world, but with a pollution setting similar to Cthulhu. The protagonist is a time traveler, has a sister and a house, both parents are dead (not necessarily, it is not specified at this stage whether dead or missing, the default is dead). Three spaceships were witnessed before the time travel. Due to unknown reasons, the current world only has a history of nearly two thousand years, and with the aura technology (fog), all modern spaceships have become useless. In the ruins, when the protagonist followed a gang for the first time to explore, he accidentally broke into the land of opportunity left by his ancestors to another person, and happened to win and obtain resources. He also rescued the gang leader's daughter, thus gaining the qualification to enter the academy. There are some contents that have not been written, please feel free to add them.

After reading it, as far as the story is concerned, it is okay. The author obviously has a certain outline. However, the background or world framework seems strange. For example, since the protagonist, as a time traveler, does not feel any obvious difference from ordinary people when he goes from the original world to the current world, or it is shown that the status of being a time traveler can affect the protagonist's behavior and purpose. It is really just mentioned, and it is not much different from other indigenous people. Also in terms of characters, the transformation of the supporting character Li is a little stiff, and Wu's goal seems to be single-mindedly just to hug his thigh (although it is also to repay a favor and save himself). There are also a few poisonous points, such as why there are always inexplicable people targeting the protagonist. Just like the novel ten years ago, there are always inexplicable people provoking. But the problem is that the world in which this book is created is a world where the people at the bottom need to work hard. It is obvious that there is no hatred, but it has to be fought by real people. It is meaningless, but it still has to do something to make people hate it. It's obvious that no matter how big the matter is, it will be done randomly to kill the Nine Clan. The purpose of creating bitterness and hatred is to create conflicts, but conflicts arise from conflicts of interest, not from dissatisfaction at any point. . And why the author likes to spoil the future development (it won't have much impact if you can grasp it, but it will be a poisonous point if you can't grasp it). However, it is still worth reading without paying so much attention to it.

My feelings after reading the first fifty chapters: Overall, it's passable, and the author has put in a lot of effort. However, there are certain problems with the genre and the style of the article. First of all, this kind of fantasy article has been written badly for a long time. Some people may read it after posting it on Tomato, but at the beginning, I don't think many people will read it; Secondly, some current readers want to read harem articles, and some only want to read single female protagonists. The title of your article is single female protagonist, but the first fifty chapters are nondescript. No matter what you say, it will disappoint the people who came in because of the title. ; Finally, your title is ordinary, and such titles often correspond to those who write about emotional lines in large lengths, but you focus on the career line. This is the most fatal problem. The fantasy career line is nothing more than upgrading and fighting monsters. It is difficult for you to break away from this framework when you write flowers. People nowadays simply don't want to read the same old story about upgrading and fighting monsters. Even if your writing does have new ideas, is it still the same? It's just a more detailed description of how to upgrade and fight monsters I give the author a few suggestions: 1. (The most critical point) Out of the framework of upgrading and fighting monsters, if you look at the popular fairy tales before, which ones are about upgrading and fighting monsters, most of them borrow a layer of the fairy shell to carry out their own narratives and emotional expressions. Of course, there may be great masters who can still write traditional fantasy, but you have to understand that you are far from that stage yet, and there are not that many readers. I have an idea, which is to use fantasy to reflect the world, just like Journey to the West. Every sentence mentions monsters and every sentence talks about people (of course, this requirement is too high. Over the years, no online text has reached this level, and only one Journey to the West has been handed down for hundreds of years) Or it may be good at style, such as "Journey to the West" "My Senior Brother is Too Steady", mainly with one characteristic, wrapped in a fantasy shell, talking about emotions (in a broad sense) 2. It is important to make it clear whether there is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists (although it is also reasonable in the emotional line at present) Don't let people who read the introduction feel that the article is not right. If you want to pave the way, put some recommendations first and write more articles Personal opinion: I still like this book very much, although there are many fantasy problems. I hope I can keep it up and continue writing (If the author has ideas, he can discuss the plot)

To answer questions from respected book friends: Why don't we recognize each other when we meet, and the meaning of the title of the book. In order to avoid spoilers, several development lines are listed below. You can guess which one is where the plot unfolds: 1 Qinglong is wearing a mask. 2 Qinglong was disfigured. 3 The time span in the real world is too big, and it has changed its appearance 4 Same as above, the speed of time has increased for some reasons, and the abyss has descended and he has become an old man 5 In order to gain strength, he practiced kung fu beyond recognition. (Gul'dan, then what's the price?) (Sigh) 6 This story is about a civet cat changing for a prince, the protagonist takes someone else's role, and the timeline travels. 7 Parallel worlds 8 Several phenomena are combined 9 Others, book friends are welcome to discuss (One of the development lines: girlfriend refers to this life) If she was not my girlfriend in the previous life, how can I be her girlfriend in this life~ And I originally wanted to gradually intersperse the memories of the sword master in the plot, and recall them wherever the plot advances. I wanted to hold it back. I won't describe the specific plot in advance😊. If you have any suggestions, you can discuss them in this chapter~ Please bear with me as a new writer (fist clasping)

Similar to the one in the main palace, there is more than one female protagonist line, and the number is not particularly large. Several lines corresponding to the identity of the protagonist are developed. The biggest line is Wu Hanqiu, which unfolds in the capital. Let me explain here, if there are readers who can't accept it, they can only give it as a gift. I will not explain it one by one in the future, and the title of the book will not be changed for the time being~

I have been reading novels for twenty-two years. The style of this novel is really the same as before.

Why don't you change the title of the book? I've read about seventy chapters. The writing is quite good, but it has little to do with the title of the book.

I have read Chapter 17 so far. The writing and plot are all good, but the author has some problems with the switching of scenes and the connection of the plot. When did this Xiao Yuping appear? There was no foreshadowing. Originally, hiding in the ruins with the eldest lady to find a way out was the main plot. Xiao Yuping's appearance also introduced the male protagonist's life experience, which suddenly made the main plot of this plot very confusing.

The plot design is very thoughtful, but why do you delete the comments? It's good to stick to your own ideals, but you don't have to be so petty.

As the title states, impatient brothers can have some psychological expectations.

The writing is good, and it counts as food and grass, but there is a plot of fighting for body sovereignty with the previous life. Then in the title, the heroine in the previous life is reborn. She admires the male protagonist in the previous life, but she is emotionally closer to the male protagonist in this life. Then in the plot, when the consciousness of the previous life seizes power, it is said that letting her come back in the previous life is actually using the heroine to achieve reincarnation. It is best for the heroine to show that she has chosen the male protagonist in this life. Up to now, the consciousness of the male protagonist from the previous life is still latent in the male protagonist and has not been resolved. Although the writing is good, and many of the supporting characters are also well written, I just felt a little uncomfortable watching this dual personality seizing power, and it felt like I was taking over for myself.

The writing is okay, but combined with the title, it feels a bit like trying to sell someone else's meat.

Come on

I suggest that there be fewer scenes where the protagonist's body is controlled by others.

I advise you not to play the role of the protagonist calling someone else's account, it is a drama where the heroine admits to the wrong person.

As the title says, the author is a bad namer.

The book is really good, but the plot progresses too fast

This name reminds me of a book about a general eunuch. Has the author read it?🤓

It's a traditional fantasy, and it's not a trick, it's not blunt, it's not a routine, it's a poison that I haven't seen in many years: dog blood.