After the Simulation, They Traveled from Another World

What makes me cringe when I write this kind of simulation is that I really can't stand it. It was so great in the simulation, but in reality, although I became stronger very quickly, I didn't become awesome all at once. It's normal to be a little timid in the early stage, but if I'm timid in my heart, it's just a useless plug-in, and the gap between simulation and reality is too big, how can it attract people and keep people coming?

The subject matter is quite good, especially the first few pictures. I just don't know why the pace of writing has been slowed down. It becomes a bit strange at the end.

It's okay, but the protagonist is a bit frustrated at the moment.

I suggest the author directly write a prequel about the things he did when he was the emperor, which is inappropriate for a human being. It feels aggrieved to read now.

After reading the introduction, I excitedly thought that the protagonist was going to start a killing spree, but you did it for me. It suppressed the combat power in the early stage, and it was a bit awkward. It was obvious that the protagonist could understand it in one or two sentences. If you insist on doing this, don't give me any foreshadowing. You buried it so deeply, I I can't see it, I just feel aggrieved. Maybe it's my taste. I want to read that kind of fantasy novel right now, where you kill people all the way. But at the beginning, you were chatting with girls, mother-in-law and mother-in-law, and the emotional scenes are not very good. It's tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it.

After reading more than fifty chapters, I feel that the subject matter is quite good, the writing is okay, and the storyline is actually quite good, but there is a big problem, the abusive protagonist! It's so frustrating to read. If the reader is allowed to take it in, it will become more and more frustrating. How can it be possible to continue reading?

The front paving is quite good, but I feel that this system cannot support such a large scene, and the protagonist himself is not very powerful. The simulation only gives attribute values, and the relatively important experience, talents, and abilities cannot be taken away. While the protagonist grows slowly, the simulated world is described in text, so there won't be any big ups and downs. The focus should still be on the main world. The most difficult thing is that the system is also affected by reality. Even the way to secretly work hard and surprise everyone seems to be gone. In this case, the only thing left to enjoy is the interaction with the time-traveling heroine

The protagonist's attitude towards the heroine is too negative. What's there to be afraid of? We have cheats that can make the heroine stronger in minutes. Don't brag about the fact that the heroine is now so strong that the protagonist is very cowardly. As we all know, the speed at which the protagonist becomes stronger is unreasonable. At the very least, the protagonist's psychological attitude towards the heroine should not be cowardly. It should be a bit playful and have the feeling that it is easy to win them over. It's okay to be cowardly on the surface, but judging from the current plot, the plot is destined to open a harem. The protagonist should have a more positive attitude. What's wrong with opening a harem? The protagonist's simulation is so strong (the contrast between reality and simulation is too big, which is also why it doesn't look good, especially if you are really timid in your heart. It doesn't matter if you are timid on the outside. The protagonist can achieve such a big career in the simulation. How is it possible to be timid in your heart? The protagonist's heart should give people a more relaxed and overlooking attitude. After all, there are plug-ins, don't make it too heavy). Several female protagonists have traveled through time and are not monogamous, and their reactions to the heroine are also positive. Who knows who the protagonist is if he doesn't reveal his flaws? It's not like us readers and authors have a God's perspective. In many novels, the author takes a God's perspective and feels that everything is scary and has a lot of profound meaning. Then the protagonist is written in such a timid manner that there is no sense of enjoyment at all.

It's a pity that the main character is too cowardly and boring to watch. I thought there would be a nice Shura field, but it turned out that the main character was afraid of being like that and couldn't move his mind at all.

It is recommended to restart the game. The protagonist is like a chess piece and can only be plotted by others.

I feel that the character of the protagonist in the beating incident at the beginning was not very good. Although he said it was because of someone else's fault, another person smashed his nose and it was all over his face. It was normal for him to return, but the protagonist had no brains to help people who only use violence to vent their emotions. Objectively speaking, there was nothing wrong with the teacher and the person who was beaten, but the protagonist was directly opposed to them. The relationship between the attacker and the protagonist was also very ordinary. It seemed that it was entirely because there were more people on the other side and the protagonist had no brains to help him. I can't see what effect this section has at all, it just feels like it's poisonous.

I originally thought it would be love, simulation, and unparalleled, but in the end... This is it?

The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. There are obviously a lot of cool spots, but they just don't appear. Especially when he showed off his pretense and slapped him in the face, he was almost persuaded to quit.

Did you see the big boss at the end say, does the protagonist continue to be a tyrant who subjugates his country? I came here for this, but when I got to more than 20 chapters, it simulated a three-legged bird. I was afraid that it would change my genre and I didn't dare to continue reading.

The plot is too scattered... The female supporting role and the simulation are nothing. I originally wanted to see how the protagonist pretends to be a human being, but the real plot is too messy... Hey guys, after reading the comment section, it turned out to be a light novel 😅

I think three or four daily chapters are enough, and then the main plot is needed. Unless you are writing a comedy or a novel, don't use chapters that are too watery.

I seem to have read a similar book. After the protagonist travels to the past in pursuit of strength, he is already a subjugated tyrant with only a few subordinates, and is preparing to develop elsewhere. . There is also a book in which the protagonist travels to a modern fantasy world. The simulation game he starts turns out to be the past history, and then historical figures are resurrected. . There is another person who came to the game through time travel or resurrection, and wanted to dig up his own treasures. As a result, the treasures were taken away by others, and they became a strong man or something. These three books are all good, but unfortunately I can't remember their names. Hey, does anyone remember them?