Zhenfusi's Fusion Skills, the More He Practices, the More Evil He Becomes

Goldfinger's instructions are probably the most difficult to understand at the starting point. If the author's writing style were to write product manuals, he would probably bankrupt the manufacturer.

It is best to make a thinking map of the synthesis method and put it at the end of the introduction, or in the comment area outside. It will be useful for people who can't keep up with your synthesis ideas, and you will save yourself the need to explain every day.

The protagonist's ability is actually very simple. The main position is all martial arts, and what comes out of the combination must be martial skills The main position is both mental skills, and what comes out must be mental skills The main position has martial arts and mental skills, and the combination may be martial skills or mental skills, but it is a hybrid level The secondary position is equivalent to a medium, and it also has a certain effect, but it also has its own advantages and disadvantages. This is a cultivation method that belongs to the protagonist. Others use single mind methods and single martial arts. The protagonist has the ability to learn two mental techniques and two martial arts. It can be understood that the protagonist's CPU is running at high speed and the memory is large. You can understand it this way. This is a special way of practice, and it is also the golden finger that belongs to the protagonist.

The person the protagonist traveled through time originally died in the Zhenfu Division, and his face didn't change after that, right? He actually just walked out of the corpse and then turned around and applied for the job again? Moreover, others don't check anything and it's all done after passing the force. What's the point of being innocent? Is that bullshit? And all the people who died were in prison uniforms, right? Why did he change into something other than prison uniform? Why can't the prisoners on death row not wear prison uniforms if they are all corpses? It is recommended not to read

It's quite uncomfortable to watch. It feels verbose.

To be honest, I think the author's writing style is pretty good, but the plot is too tight, and the protagonist's development period is too short or simply non-existent. As a result, the protagonist is hacked all the way through, which is very tiring to read. The author also likes to write about wits, which makes it even more tiring to read.

The problem is obvious in the first chapter. The author seems to be writing it for himself. He can't wait to spit out all the settings and rush to introduce Goldfinger. The writing is too messy. It can be summarized in one sentence. The protagonist's ability is to obtain skills from corpses and synthesize them. I wrote half a chapter, oh my god

You have to look at this thing slowly

Just after you were carried out from the Zhenfu Department, you went back to apply for the job. Are resurrection coins wholesale?

It's really a lot of nonsense, and the martial arts synthesis setting is too nonsense. Is it just water numbers? Why not write it directly as A+B+...=S. As for the state, isn't this thing an accessory of the mental method? Why use it separately? Also, why don't you simply write down how many years of skill you get after acquiring a certain skill? You must know that ten years of true energy is not the same as ten years of skill. Didn't you just skip over how the true energy nourishes the physical body?

The plug-in is too cumbersome, but the author still likes to self-argument, which is speechless.

6. There is a problem. Traveling through the dead body. Or wear it on your body

It's too ink. The writing is too bloated.

Don't you check the household registration book? In ancient times, don't take a note with you when you go out

I thought it was a fantasy novel by Gou Dao, but it turned out to be a detective novel. It's just that the background the protagonist designed for himself doesn't match his actual abilities. No matter how powerful a person with such a big problem is, he cannot possibly come into contact with the things in the article.

The protagonist has an above-average IQ, and the writing is not bad either. The plot has twists and turns, with a bit of suspense and detective work. It may be that the film is slow to warm up and the results are not very good. Maybe most people nowadays like to watch mindless cheating, but don't like this kind of slow-burning cheating. They all like to watch awesome cheating, but don't like to watch mediocre cheating.

One moment the sword, another moment the sword, the sword cannot be distinguished clearly.

The writing is quite interesting, it is a work similar to that of Detective Di Renjie. The author based it on his own opinion, and it's quite nice.

I really can't stand it. It's just for the sake of adding a lot of meaningless dog-licking modifications to the word count.

You haven't even finished reading it yet, and you can't stand it anymore. These settings feel really stupid

Leave the claw₍˄·͈₃·͈˄*₎੭

There is a lot of long-winded exposition, no plot at all, and there is nothing attractive about Goldfinger, just blah blah blah.