Jianghu Swordsman, Specialized in Killing All Kinds of Eagles and Dogs

After reading 10 chapters, there is nothing poisonous about it, but there is nothing that attracted me either. In addition, compared with the ink mark, it seems very hypocritical to say a few words to be modest.

It's a lot of nonsense, and most of the chapter is about complimenting each other, which is long and boring.

This introduction confuses me.

I know you want to write that the woman is beautiful, but you don't have to write it every three lines, it will get boring.

，； ，      I feel that the author wanted to express and enrich the character's personality through dialogue, but this effect was actually not handled well. Whether the character is impressive or not depends not only on the person, but also on the method and ability of handling events. In this article, the proportion of dialogue is relatively high, and the character wants to reflect the protagonist's smooth and polite behavior. Personality, but it is Moji that makes the most impression; the overall length of the narrative is small, and the description of events is relatively white. The climax of the whole process is not reflected, and there is no tossing and turning plot. There is no outstanding point in the character's ability to handle events, and it cannot add points to the character's personality. It may be suitable for some readers who are reading novice novels or some readers who are new to novels. For some old readers who have been starting from a long-term cultivation, if it is not a book shortage, no one will probably be able to read it.

A bit bland and unattractive

Ye Xiaochai, another crazy swordsman

Does it bother you that you have to write about a woman who looks very beautiful? Every time you mention this woman, you have to write it again?