Pull the Progress Bar and Tear Apart the Galaxy Beast with Your Hands

Did you only write so much in last year's book?

The protagonist spends a lot of money to buy the meat of exotic animals. Why doesn't he take back the meat to eat after killing so many? There are dozens of them at every turn. The cheapest ones are worth more than those spiritual crystals and spiritual grasses, right?

Could the author ask if you are particularly young? Why do you feel like you have no social experience at all? Completely like a clueless idiot. The outline of the novel is quite good, but you wrote it too poorly. The main character is too stupid.

Humility makes people progress—— If there is anything that you think is a poisonous point, you can discuss it here. I will learn from experience and try to modify it as much as possible.

Going to the Tiandao Palace might be a failure because the protagonist has a golden finger. Besides, I have already graduated and am an adult who has already worked, so there is something wrong with running back to the academy. It is better to join the Extraordinary Association and redeem the required skills and crystals from it. In addition, with golden fingers and rapid growth, in a place where talented people gather and masters gather, are others fools? Wouldn't you be suspicious? It's too late to hide, okay?

A peak level 1 person can write a hundred chapters.

The plot is also relatively old, too conventional, and has nothing new. Summary: It's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless.

What's the cool thing about this book? As mentioned earlier, the protagonist can improve the compatibility of the fused beast by eating. Now the compatibility has reached 100. What next? What's cool about it, the author will explain, what makes the protagonist so awesome after fused with that frost white dragon crystal, what characteristics does it have, what talents does it have, anyway, I saw the protagonist just tried dumbbells, wow, it's very light, how awesome is it? The most ridiculous thing is that the degree of compatibility is not explained clearly and everything is over. You come up with an evolution value, so why don't you just play matryoshka dolls here?

The setting is good, but the portrayal of the protagonist's strength is too superficial. For example, how awesome this frost white dragon is, you can't feel it just by giving it a ranking.

The current viewing experience is good. The main drawback is that it is almost 40 chapters in. The protagonist still doesn't know anything and is a complete novice. It's not like ancient information is closed and knowledge is difficult to obtain. It's modern. Can't we learn some basic knowledge?

Ask quietly: Is there anyone

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Progress bar × Add points ✓ To put it simply, it can consume physical energy to improve the quality of items

The protagonist doesn't even know how to bring a knife when fighting monsters. As a result, he beats the monsters with his fists for a long time but still can't kill them... His IQ is really worrying.

Is the author reading? Still working? If he works, he must be a rich second generation.

Original title [Everyone is practicing, but I pulled the progress bar] New title [Pull the progress bar, tear apart the giant beast of the galaxy] The reading conversion rate is too low, so try changing the title to another one 🙂

Just use the dragon element to crystallize a dragon, nothing else.

It's okay to watch, but the author is a bit verbose, with too many unimportant scenes and too much text. It's almost 100 chapters, and Novice Village hasn't been released yet.