Lay Priesthood

The writing is quite good, but it's a bit messy. There's a feeling of neither being up nor down. The boss of the Decaying Grand Duke is not handled very well. At the beginning, the protagonist's power is stolen for no apparent reason. There's no clue as to why the power can be stolen. It feels like it's just a plot. The author is a little anxious when writing, and after winning the small rotten world, there is not much development before going out to fight the new BOSS. In fact, we can slow down the pace, first develop the paper man in the rotten world, refine the paper man system, and write what the surveillance paper man is called. What kind of abilities does it have, what are its limitations, how can it be destroyed, and so on, the rushing paper figures, the offensive paper figures, the auxiliary paper figures, can obviously write a lot of things, and then they are taken over by the author, resulting in this inexplicable mess. System, Another one is the part about the burning man. The protagonist is inexplicably asked to light the first fire for him. What is the first fire and what is its use? It is suggested that the author can refine some things, even if it is said to be watery, he still has to do it! Otherwise it would look really messy.

The writing is very good. In fact, my level may be limited, but from personal experience, I don't feel many of the problems mentioned in the comment area. I was completely immersed in the story. The level of weird and depressing atmosphere is actually pretty good. The deeper it is, the more it makes me watch and take a break. If it's shallower, it won't have the same flavor. Overall, it's a good book. Maybe the author didn't do a good job of balancing the fun and the restraint. It's true that Wu Zang Gong could have been more fun, but it was suppressed.

How to put it this way, the scene when Shou Xishan loses his memory is not handled very well. After all, readers have a sense of immersion when reading a book. The section from the girl in the white skirt to Shou Xishan is actually very smooth. But when you return to the earthly world, you tell me that you actually lost your memory and skipped a lot of things during the amnesia. There is a sense of fragmentation here. The sense of immersion in reading is interrupted here, and then you are confused and unable to read everything.

Nowadays, a dangerous start is popular, which makes me vomit after reading it, but this book is even more extreme. From the beginning, various things happen one after another, one after another without finishing, and there is no time to spare. It is depressing and boring to read.

Like the title, the protagonist's golden finger, those data descriptions are really ridiculous.

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that the author doesn't have a lot of writing experience, so his writing style is not good! System flow is not equal to genius flow. If the writing is not enough, don't let the world revolve around the protagonist. Like those great masters who have been doing the same routine for decades and still remain popular, you will die every time you learn it. This is the difference between writing, narrative, characterization, plot elaboration, outline, and world view. Do you think you can compete with the great masters in this aspect? How many novels with over a million words have they written? How many books have you written? See below to see how many mistakes you made! 1. The world view is huge, but you have introduced too little. Once your plot advances too slowly, many readers will be confused. For example, a large number of people are dying all day long, but you haven't said anything about the size of the world and its population. There are monsters running rampant outside, but you didn't explain how humans survived and built a nation. 2. There is no comparison in occupations. Almost all the extraordinary professions are reflected in the protagonist, and it is not a behind-the-scenes flow. Without strong contrast, it is easy to get bored and confused. 3. The collision between professions is not prominent enough. The protagonist is an eighth-level character fighting against a group of eighth-level characters plus a seventh-level character (blood bull + berserk warrior type). The key point is that you write that the protagonist is simply awesome without relying on tricks.

According to the author's writing, I feel that they should have perished long ago. There are so many civilians there.

Are you broken at writing? . . . What is the significance of the Master's profession? ? ?

It's really tiring to read half-text and half-text. The key is that often after a long paragraph of half-text and half-text, the author explains again, why are you doing this? Author, you are tired and the readers are tired.

When telling a story, you can't tell it completely. You have to tell half of it and insert it into the other half. It doesn't feel good at all. It's like spitting and getting half stuck in your throat.

It's all settled, and now limited exemptions have started 😢

The Ping Jun Mo Wen Feng Hou Shi in the comment area is either the author's trumpet or an acquaintance of the author. Whenever he says the writing is not good, he pops up. It's like living in the comment area. No normal person would stare at the comment area of ​​a book. Is this book well written? It's hard to say that you haven't finished watching it? Can the author make money by continuing to write such standard books?

The idea is great, but the writing is poor. Also, the creativity is a bit weird. According to the author's idea, career synthesis breaks through the limits. There is a panel and I think it is very simple to obtain skill points. Why can't I add skills to Conferred Gods? I feel like the excitement of Goldfinger was not captured, and the fights and some weird scenes were not well written.

What does this book say? The author has his own writing ideas, and he may know the direction of the plot very well, and the writing is exciting, but for me as a reader, it is really a headache to read. It's not that I can't understand the plot, it's just that the author's writing is too fragmented. The way the narrative is broken up in the past is tiring to read. The small plot at the end of each chapter is cut off and not fully written, and then the scene is skipped at the beginning of the next chapter. It feels like it is not a transition, but that a part is missing and not written out. This is quite criticized. However, although it affects reading fluency, it is still bearable. Until the Shouxi Mountain plot, I felt that the author's writing method was completely out of touch with the reader's perspective, leaving only the author's own unique narrative style. It was too blurry, all kinds of blur, because the map switching was too abrupt, which caused a strong sense of separation from the previous text. I had started to scroll directly through the chapters. I don't know if the author also felt that this plot needed to be transitioned quickly. It has always been a big chapter of seven or eight thousand words. This led me to feel that this plot had no contribution to the reading experience except for the author's own digging and burying of clues. Ten chapters passed without any plot left in my mind, and the subsequent plot of returning to the secular world completely made me give up. It lasted for two years, and then I wrote down what happened in an outline style. One chapter review said that this plot is actually false. I don't know if it is, but I almost lost the motivation to follow the next plot. I felt depressed and unhappy.

I think it's okay, but the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. There are a lot of monthly passes,

If the Master is really as important as what you wrote, how could he be exterminated? He doesn't even have the most basic logic. It's boring.

The writing is very good, but the updates are too slow.

I've finished watching it, but I don't recommend it. The author doesn't seem to know what the readers want to see and is just intoxicating himself. I hope there will be improvements in the next book.

It's not pleasant to write at all, there are cheats, and it still looks like it's going to die at any time. That reader liked this

The author's self-reflection, the whole process of analysis, self-explanation, it's a complete mess

After seeing Chapter 23, a sense of déjà vu came to Chen Dong like crazy. Forced passion. It's okay for Chen Dong to write like this, and Chen Dong will provide a lot of foreshadowing. It's so embarrassing for you to write like this from the beginning. It's really a bit disgusting.

This book is very interesting until the end of the Shouxi Mountain. But when the setting of the Immortal Position is introduced later, it loses its flavor.

Is this the finale? One thing to say, after the protagonist knew that the world was destroyed, I felt that the book was useless 😰

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. There is only one word that runs through the whole book, crazy. After reading it, I don't know whether it's me or the author who is crazy 🙂

It's okay in the early stage, but it will crash later when I get high.

I personally seldom write my reflections, but I think this book still makes me want to write and read it First of all, let me mention how I came into contact with this book It was an ordinary afternoon, when my colleague and I were discussing what novels to read, he recommended this secular priesthood to me Although he did not seem to have read the end, it was generally recommended by colleagues out of respect. I will read it all I am a person who doesn't like to abandon books, and I don't like the author's eunuch. I think the style I like is not good in the eyes of some people To be honest, when I first read the beginning of this book, I actually felt a full sense of abruptness (I personally feel that this problem is also a little bit in the author's new book) because the beginning directly deals with the incident. Who is the protagonist? How did he come to this world? The speed of his introduction was a bit fast, so I was pulled into the world of this book before I even invested in it However, the subsequent upgrades began slowly, and the golden fingers with appropriate benefits, as well as the upgrade conditions of some resistance systems, kept me here About when the Flame Man first appeared, due to work reasons and the style of this book, I did not become a follower, but stayed there for a long time before coming back to read it. This work Things progressed very quickly after that. I really like the calculations of the first Tanshou and the second Tanshou, as well as the stories behind them In order to fight against the evil evil spirits, Xie Cao finally became evil spirits. After all, the deceiving scum cannot fool himself. They are all crazy and driven crazy by this world. If the world is not like this, will they gradually become what they are in the corresponding titles in Shouxi Mountain? ， ，，""，， …… ！ Fake? Wrong? Did this really happen? That happened? Which one is true? Am I crazy? Am I crazy? It turns out that I have already gone crazy! Overall, it is probably the above feeling, but this kind of feeling cannot be fully experienced until the protagonist really returns to reality. If there is any missing part in the middle, it will not have such a feeling. Perhaps if the author's writing style is better, the feeling here will be much better The last part is to watch the author slowly accept and accept the truth of the world, step by step Step by step towards the ending and ending I am personally satisfied with this ending. As I said elsewhere, what needs to be accepted is really received Okay, it's time to talk about the sad part Junior sister, my junior sister, Xi ah ah ah, and Jiang Shou, this guy is really unlucky, just forget about being pulled into this world, do you want to live quietly with your junior sister? No, you want to stop and not waste your life? No, he is just a common man. His request is very secular and very simple. He just wants to live a good life and the world should not be so bad. Even if Jiang Shou in the end has the ability to save all this, as he became a secular god and knew the truth, he was destined to be unable to be with them with peace of mind There are still many... Many regrets... Alas! That's roughly it. Thank you to the author, I hope you can do better! Give us better stories! Come on!

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What can I say, the writing is very good, although it is a bit messy, but it is very powerful, but I really can't appreciate it 😅

Let me first ask, is there no heroine? Or a single heroine?

The first book has over 100,000 words. This one has reached the final volume. It is getting stronger bit by bit. One book has more words than the other.