
Go: the Queen of Live Broadcast Launched a Gorgeous Rebellion Against the Dog
围棋:直播女皇向狗发起华丽叛逆
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He was poisoned to death 9 months ago and became addicted to watching 9 months later
Nine months ago, before I removed this book from my bookshelf, I posted a special post to encourage the cute author. To be honest, at that time, this book really poisoned me. However, I didn't expect that after such a long time, I still haven't found other more interesting meal replacements, so I ran back to read it again and unexpectedly caught up with the latest one. It was really enjoyable. (Do you think I'm mean or not? 🔨) To be honest, I like this book very much and recommend it to everyone who likes Go or who doesn't know Go but is curious about it. I have read all the other Go novels mentioned in the comment area, so I love this book even more. Only in this book did I see hard work, the so-called failure turned into motivation, and the accumulation of hard work. (It is strongly recommended to wait until the end of one volume before reading it completely, unless you are a hypotensive patient; newcomers should read it) First of all, it is undeniable that it may be due to the major changes. The heroine's character is still difficult to break down, and the separation between the front and the back is relatively serious: the heroine in the first hundred chapters is written as an orphan in her previous life, a young adult who suffered from pressure and controversy, but the subsequent performance is more like a sixteen or seventeen-year-old ascetic who has failed seven or eight times and is ignorant of worldly affairs. So in the later stage, I didn't care about what I wrote earlier. If I just read the packaging of the story as a genius girl who breaks through her inner demons and stands up again, I would actually enjoy it with gusto. (Who can resist the temptation of Xiao Zhaomiao, please step on me hard, thank you😚) Secondly, this is not a novel about a single heroine, but rather depicts the world of Go in the author's mind, and the past and future of generations of Fangyuan masters: whether it is the legacy of the Lei family, Ni Jiuduan's forging swords for the country, Liu Nongshen's obsession with chess... Or the star Lin who has lost his original intention, the prodigal Bai Gaoduan, the naive Sun Jiuduan... Everyone has their own story, and their own reasons why they must never lose. If we were to choose a male protagonist in this book (Stacked Armor: not the kind that has sex but the kind that refers to the one who has sex with the heroine 😜), I think Xiao Lei can be a candidate. He is portrayed very three-dimensionally, and even occupies more space than the heroine in some chapters: As Xiao Zhaomiao's Go idol, after experiencing an unforgettable youth rebellion, the boy learned to take the overall situation into consideration, but his chess intention is no longer perfect. Presumably his biggest enemy in the future will not be South Korea, but himself. However, if the idiot Xiao Zhao were to choose, I think she would prefer Han Daddy and Liu, not for anything else but because Han Daddy is the strongest now. (What bad thoughts can a girl who only thinks about playing chess have? I can even imagine her asking, "Can we play chess for the rest of our lives?" 😏) If you asked me to find a word to describe the current Zhaojun, I would use "pure" to describe her: pure love, from her day after day, from her constant pursuit of progress; pure strength, from her achievements, her talent, and her efforts; pure greatness. Her actions came to fruition: I only have Go in my life, and if she needs me, I will do everything I can to help her. There is no need to say more about the unity of knowledge and action. In fact, there are many contradictions in the book that are really worth pondering: the significance of human chess players in the AI era, and whether Go is really worth it in the next life... These authors all have their own unique thinking perspectives. In the end, I still follow what I said 9 months ago, come on, little sister who plays Go, come on, little brother who writes good books. . .
In this book, you can see not only a diligent chess player who can make up for his shortcomings, but also a persevering writer.
Admittedly, this is a novel that is not so in line with the current mainstream trends in the market. In today's fast-paced world, if a little-known writer cannot continuously output a sense of "refreshment", it will indeed be difficult to survive. Five years ago, a book like this, Slowly Fighting and Upgrading Cloud Raising Daughters was really popular, and many people were willing to pay for it. But now that the pace of life is getting faster and faster, their tastes are becoming more and more sophisticated. If you want to seize the wallets of most readers, you must continuously output "pleasure" from the beginning. Once there is a little stagnation, they will definitely not give you time to grow. So, this is really a pity novel. Starting from the golden three chapters, to the nearly 50 chapters now approaching a climax, careful readers will definitely find that there are many fatal problems. For example: System 0 has a sense of presence, the image of the previous protagonist is not pleasing, the pace is slightly dragging, etc. The loss of a large number of readers is inevitable. But the advantages in the book are actually very outstanding. Starting from a seemingly niche subject like Go, this is actually an advantage. After all, niche readers are not too picky and can filter out loyal book fans, who will have thicker filters. So, even if your grades may not be satisfactory now, if you write slowly, you will be able to correct your mistakes, and one day spring will bloom. Writing a book about Go, it is impossible to immerse yourself in hard work and silently cultivate, and then suddenly enlighten and reach the pinnacle of life. That is unrealistic. Every outstanding celebrity cannot be achieved overnight. They also need to learn and there will be a process of growth. I caught up with the progress and read the comment section. I feel very good about this book. After all, a hard-working protagonist makes progress together with a hard-working author. Isn't this a good story? Come on, young lady learning Go.
There is no Go article that is most suitable for making outsiders fall into the trap so far.
Let's get straight to the point, this is Xiancao, the title is my evaluation of this book. I saw this book in the QQ novel recommendation. After reading it, I went directly to Qidian and ordered it. I am generally not used to reading books at the starting point, but this book by the author made me feel that I would be sorry for his hard work if I did not book it completely, so I broke the convention. Then tell me what you think about this book. First of all, the most important point is that the author's writing style is very solid and even excellent. The writing level is humorous but high-level, instead of just relying on gags to cover up the quality of writing like many novice novels. Secondly, in terms of plot, whether it is the use of suspense in the first three golden chapters to arouse readers' interest, or the degree of grasp of the contradictions and development of the subsequent plot, the author is of excellent quality. The plot after it was released can be said to be fascinating, which is the biggest reason why I, an old reader who has read online articles for 15 years, can finish it. As for the controversial volume, I think it is one of the greatest charms of this book, so I won't mention it here for now. In terms of character creation, except for the author's lack of experience at the beginning, the characters of Xiao Lei and Xiao Ai were slightly facial-shaped (named Xiao Ai backwards), but in the later stages, they obviously became more and more comfortable. Each main character has a distinct image, rather than the typical characters in ordinary online articles that are easy to forget after reading, which greatly enhances the reading experience (the author is a master at naming each character, which greatly enhances the memory of the characters). Secondly, the biggest highlight and core of this book is competition and Go. To be honest, before I read this book, I didn't know much about Go. I can say that I was a complete novice. I only knew about Go because Ke Jie was from my hometown, so I was attracted to read it for a while. After that, I read Go Boy. But this book describes the game process. The sense of competition where you come and go, swords and swords flash, situations change in an instant, and success or failure can be achieved in just a moment, really made me, a novice at Go, feel it completely. Maybe I don't understand a lot of terminology, and I don't understand the ingenuity of some situations, but the feeling that it comes from the same source as other competitive events has firmly captured my heart. The author completely displayed the charm of Go competition in front of me, a novice, just like when I watched s8 IG fight kt hard and s11EDG reverse three to two in the final. In order to have a better reading quality, I have begun to learn some common sense about Go. Perhaps what the author hopes to achieve in his article, Zhao Tianhou, has already begun to make a difference in his works in reality (laughs The last and most important point is also the volume where the author apologizes. Although the protagonist of this article obviously has With talent, many situations were successfully solved, but the author still gave her a lot of setbacks. Some readers may feel unhappy, but in my opinion, this is where this article can make a difference from Xiaobai. As a result, there will be nothing to write about, and most authors will not be able to do this for the sake of pure enjoyment. Of course, it is inevitable to lose some readers. After all, realistic novels still depend on the audience (although the protagonist of this book is already quite bad), but I think that the author must lose the game he said. The words are undoubtedly correct. Whether it was the defeat in the game against the Ice Queen in the Zhao Tian Hou Wu Yue Cup or being targeted against Sister Xia Chuan, it can be said to be one of the growth points of the protagonist. It reminded me of the thrilling game when chess went from 16 to 8 in junior high school (although I almost lost by one step) and the apex game last week. The master's last roll hit three successfully (and then he was persuaded to fight and the master did not go up). When I saw Zhao Tianhou's two defeats, I remembered Xiu Shen's words: Failure always runs through life, and this is life. This sentence applies not only to e-sports, but also to Go. In the author's writing, the protagonist Zhao. Although the queen is strong, her strength is limited and reasonable. She will lose to opponents who are obviously stronger than her, and it will be difficult to win because of her fighting style. But at the same time, she is constantly improving. Her progress comes more from her hard work, her seriousness, and her purity. It was through sweat and time that she stepped up to the throne. It can be said that the whole book is the author's confession to Go. If you are not a true lover of Go, you would not be able to write such a book. This kind of book is full of love, victory, frustration, and royal blood. Even outsiders will inevitably have an impression of Go. I am curious. It can be said that it is a masterpiece that can attract people. In my 15 years of online writing history, the last book about competition was "Who Will Fight"?
After reading the ending today, I wanted to write down some thoughts. This is the first review I have published in many years of reading. (I am a foreign Chinese and don't know much about Go. If I use the wrong words or have misunderstandings about Go, please let me know.): (1) This book made a Go veteran (I dare not call myself a novice at my age) interested in Go. My Go skills were only limited to capturing pieces and raising pieces like the Thai players in the Asian Games in the book, but the author added changes in the game records, which allowed me to clearly see the development process of the game, and even had a basic concept of some basic names such as breaking, digging, etc. Thanks to the author for uploading a lot of chess game pictures for this purpose, which made me even more interested in learning about Go in depth. Unfortunately, I cannot even log in to many Go apps overseas. But it cannot be denied that this instinct allows laymen to continue to read smoothly in unfamiliar areas. I hope it can also have a positive impact on spreading Go knowledge (at least Lao Bai is interested). (2) I have read several Go novels. The protagonists use the post-AI era's playing methods to "bully" the pre-AI era chess players, and then win all the way to win the game, and use the knowledge gained in the post-AI era to negate various contemporary chess players and playing methods. These seemingly "cool" passages can only make me feel temporarily interested, unlike this novel, which makes me read it again several times without getting tired of it. The protagonist in the book, Xiao Zhaomiao, only had low-level professional chess skills when he traveled through time. As the content unfolded, I felt Xiao Zhaomiao's growth and chess ability increase. There are some controversies in this book. One of them is that the protagonist Xiao Zhaomiao lost many chess games, and even some key games caused the author to change some chess games. I personally think that one of the good things about this novel is Xiao Zhaomiao's spirit of striving for the top. If he loses, he will only pester his opponent to review the game, and next time he will face his opponent with a higher quality of chess playing. So what if you lose a key game? Losing is the only way to grow. Xiao Zhaomiao lost to the little witch in a chaotic battle at first and later became the Dragon God. He held Ni Jue's flying shoulder in the amateur competition and dug into the "Ni Knife" skills that even the original knife maker felt inferior. (3) It is rare for a male author to publish a novel with a female protagonist on a male channel, and it is a competitive genre. Another controversial point in the article mentions the cancellation of the rules for female chess players to participate in men's Go competitions, which seems to be a redundant article highlighting the differences between men and women. Inequality is something that everyone will face. Women, children, the elderly and the weak face more obvious differences in social treatment. Therefore, customizing laws and regulations can only make the disadvantaged relatively equal, but more is not enough. Men and women are divided into men and women in the arena because of physical differences. Xiao Zhaomiao's ability to compete head-on with male chess players after becoming Mr. Wu also proves that intellectual competition does not distinguish between men and women. In addition to intelligence, Go competition is more about rare diligence and persistence. (4) I have read several Go novels, all of which ended with challenging the ultimate boss AI dog. Those stories either had no results or were rushed through in three or two chapters. I personally like the author's arrangement of the ultimate chess game against the AI, which includes the off-game moves of politicians watching from outside the game, as well as the fight between Xiao Zhaomiao and the AI on the chessboard. I believe that in the foreseeable future, with the popularization of AI and robots, Xiao Zhaomiao's view of AI's small inefficiency will also be a profound reflection on the "uselessness of human beings". (5) I personally like the Tiehanhan Xiao Zhaomiao, Ni Jue, Lin Ruixin, Shangbanli, Little Witch, Fat Zenggou and other characters created by the author's keyboard. Not to mention Tie Hanhan, who can only cause all kinds of human accidents besides Go, Lin Ruixin's various operations for victory and his persistence in returning to the chessboard pattern after losing to Xiao Zhaomiao continuously, as well as the fermented bean curds inside and outside the siege, and the female chess players infected by Xiao Zhaomiao make this novel a lot of fun to read. On the contrary, the characters of Lei Qi, Li Jingzhe, and Liu Shixian, who appear to be male protagonists, are not so profound, just like the heroines in many male-video novels. I hope the author can write more extra chapters, especially the story of Qu Hui, Xiao Zhaomiao's direct disciple. (6) I personally like the author's various operations to portray the image of Tie Hanhan, such as calling my mother's name, the crying little crying bag on version 1.0 Li 1.0 Was beaten by Lu Wenjie as a number, online job hunting, picking on Liu Shixian in the first battle, fancy escape Xiao Nie Miao, etc. I read this novel from the beginning several times. (7) The basic operation of recent novels is rebirth, time travel and system cheats. This one has the same elements but is very different. Time travel only turns a fashionable girl who doesn't understand Go into a fool who devotes herself to Go. Xiao Zhaomiao has no use of her later knowledge of Go to "bully" those who came before her. The background of the timeline world is similar to that before Xiao Zhaomiao's time travel, so apart from the second life, it is just a journey of loneliness. After the cheat system clicked at the beginning, in addition to providing a sense of security in Xiao Zhaomiao's final stage, it flashed during the final battle against the AI, and then disappeared. This golden finger seems to be absent in the book, and it does not contribute to the growth of Xiao Zhaomiao, nor does it have any effect on the most critical game of AI. This setting is very rare in many online novels nowadays, but it does not affect the enjoyment of reading. Thank you to the author for writing this novel that I have read several times and always found pleasure in. I look forward to the author's next work🙏.
The beginning was fine, but then the original setting and live broadcast showed that Aquaman was directly destroyed. Nowadays, when writing books, I don't research the preferences of book fans in advance, which is ridiculous Since the protagonist is a chess fanatic, then just cut off the line of Aquaman and stop writing it. Even if it is a funny plot, I really want to see the emotional experience of the protagonist. Who the hell would come over to read a Go article
My feelings
To be fair, this book is an excellent Go novel In male-channel novels, it is even rarer to have a female protagonist The main problem is that as we all know, the exciting points of Go novels are nothing more than the first national championship, the first world championship, the destruction of the country in the group competition, and then the winning streak, killing AI, and becoming the first person in history. After these exciting points end, the novel basically has no vitality. However, in order to prolong the plot, the author delays the plot processing in the early stage, resulting in the protagonist always losing once when he is about to reach the top. This does extend the length and is more realistic, but as far as online articles are concerned. . . . It's not pleasant at all. It's a great test for readers Secondly, the author introduces the thinking of male and female chess players and the rise of female power in the middle and second half. There is also a long section of sophistry. It's not that it's bad, but there are too many coloring strokes, and it doesn't conform to the realistic logic and rhythm of writing. It's definitely controversial. Finally, in normal male novels, the career line and the emotional line go hand in hand. It is perfectly fine for readers to introduce the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. However, the protagonist of this book is a female and the tension between the supporting male characters seems very subtle. It is definitely not in line with the preferences of male readers. But this is still a pretty good book. Good luck to the author.
After reading Chapter 20, I can understand that there is a system that generally does not need to be used in emergencies and can be used in an emergency, but I never thought that the protagonist, whose strength is at a low level, and the world champion plays chess with her, and the two pieces say that she is not very sure of winning? Even if it's only 55 after a year? How is this strength divided?
After reading it for a while The title really makes people have no desire to click in. The wording is too feminine, and it is a word used in a small circle. I am a little confused, but the wrong touch point came in The author probably wanted to write that the protagonist is simple and persistent, why is it so old-fashioned and stupid? In addition, the elderly in the Go circle support the protagonist. Young people are discriminating against girls and anchors. In addition, young people also have their own psychological defects. All those who play Go are problem boys and girls. It's too ridiculous Many authors want to write something of their own, but almost all of them force the writing to be in-depth and to fit the main line, causing the plot to deviate from logic Except for some logical problems, the plot is still very interesting.
I like Go stories with female protagonists!
I am a girl, and I also like Go. I am very happy that the author will write a Go novel in which a girl is the protagonist in this environment. It's really thoughtful to take the trouble to attach the chess records one by one. It is Zhao Zhao who promotes Go in the world of the book, and it is the author who works hard to promote Go in our world! I will always watch Zhaozhao hone himself step by step to reach the top, please write at your own pace! Thank you for creating this world, please do the best next time!
Hahaha, I can rewatch it from the first chapter again! Joy! ! !
I took a look at the limited exemption, and I can only say that there is a reason for the poor performance. I don't think it matters if women wear women's clothes. Anyway, chess players don't engage in love, and men and women are the same. But the character of the protagonist is really not suitable for male videos. The original protagonist is a fisherman with a lot of shortcomings in appearance. I can only say that the opening was a lightning strike. Later, after I got the system, I felt that using the system was cheating, which was just a cheat. As a result, I failed to set the segment before crossing many times, so I thought about setting the segment and open it once. What? A small opening does not count as opening, and opening it once does not count as opening, right? Either don't think about other heroines directly using the system to enhance themselves, or you must not break the shackles of the previous life. In the end, who is disgusting because of this? Therefore, there is really a reason for the poor results.
Today there are games that even AI can't win.
The original setting of the heroine is so disgusting. It's not easy to read this article about the heroine of Go. The result is that she is in a nightclub and a fisherman. It's so disgusting.
Drunkenness in a nightclub, live streaming on the sidelines, these settings are very simple to change, but the author said that the outline has already been set, so what subsequent plot requires this setting? This cleansing is definitely not whitening, so it must be that he is preparing to make a big thunder later? All I can say is run quickly
Speechless points: 1. What do you think about the female protagonist and male protagonist? 2. The content of Go is half full, and it is very suspected of trying to criticize War Eagle.
Double standard protagonist
In my opinion, the system is a failure. On the one hand, the heroine is written without using the system, and on the other hand, the flying knife of the senior brother is used. What is the essential difference between this flying knife and the system? It's not all by oneself. In my opinion, the system is at least one's own. Feidao sacrificed his favor, his senior brother and even Lei Qi. What's wrong? Your own self-esteem comes first? Instead, others sacrifice casually? Given the heroine's character, it would be better for the heroine not to win with flying knives or use words to influence the opponent. If you want to introduce the subsequent plot of throwing knives and stealing, you don't need to write like this. It's a pity that the writing style and logic are not good.
I saw the author wrote that the protagonist lost to the Korean woman and died of poison because of the poison. I can't imagine how these readers who paid to watch it felt after they spent money to order so many chapters and saw the protagonist lose the game because of a very low-level mistake. Don't tell me I watched pirated versions, I watched them on QQ Reading Limited. Normally speaking, if you can't beat her, you just can't beat her. As for the world's number one female chess player, isn't it normal that the protagonist can't beat her? If you can't beat it, just continue to improve yourself and play other games. Hey, the author of Gossip tells you that it doesn't matter if the protagonist can't beat her. I set up a trap for the protagonist overnight and let the protagonist compete with the world's number one female chess player. Hey, don't say I'm exaggerating. I didn't even count the foreshadowing and the ending. I wrote a total of fifteen chapters for the competition. Let the protagonist cheat and compete with the world's best female chess player for fifteen chapters and then faint. I will tell you later that in fact, you made a low-level mistake yourself in a game that you were guaranteed to win. I don't know what the protagonist is feeling. As a reader, my mentality is shattered. I think people who have limited exemptions have broken their guard. I don't know what your readers who have spent money are thinking, especially the readers who are chasing books. After spending eight days chasing books, you will be told that the protagonist cheated for eight days and spent more than ten chapters but lost due to low-level mistakes. I calmed down for a while. I thought that was the end of it. Let's regroup and win again next time. Anyway, I saw it as a limited-edition ticket. I didn't expect that when I turned back, there was a cake maker behind. The author's summary at the end of the volume tells you directly that the protagonist's cheats have expired, and the protagonist will be a rookie again from the next chapter, and he can't win against anyone. So what kind of flow are you doing, is it just a one-time plug-in to get more words and cheat money? Bengbu live, do you really have no regard for the readers' feelings? I originally thought that this book contains so much, and QQ reading is limited to one day, and I will definitely not be able to finish it. When the limited time is over, I will go back to the starting point and give you a full subscription to read on. As a result, you are not worthy. I feel it is redundant to order a chapter for you and leave a comment.
Go + heroine is a very good setting and very interesting. I came in after reading the title and wanted to check it out, but there were some issues that made me uncomfortable. The problem of character design, many readers have reported that it is very poisonous. It is better to be a otaku than a side chick. Can you imagine the number one female person doing a side broadcast in the past? This contrast cannot be considered reasonable. The author said that it is an outline setting. If there is a plot arrangement in the future, the heroine must have a marginal female background. I don't understand it. This is very unseemly, and Go is decent. The riders who do the live broadcast are funny but not mean. Secondly, there are too many dialogues in the writing, which is terrible. I hope that the writing can be improved in the future. There are many Go writings at the starting point, some are good and some are bad. You can learn from their writing methods. At present, the mainstream is Go + male protagonist. The setting of this book is very valuable, and I hope it can be improved.
I originally thought it was the alien version of Eagle Sauce
It's a pity that the protagonist is a bit too naive. He has a good heart, but he is too naive. His previous life has resulted in him being so ignorant of the world. The main thing is that the pace is too slow. The title is "Live Broadcast Queen" but after dozens of chapters, it is broadcast once and there is only one "fan", and this fan writes it. If you change the gender of Sister An An and look at it again, you will know how outrageous it is.
The author wrote the book at Qidian. He is actually a young man. I was so impressed that I came to the comment section to take a look. I found that I was not the only one who was criticized. I was satisfied.
The author insists that he will read every comment and never listen to advice.
The poisonous points are pretty much covered in the comment section, so I won't say more. The main reason is that the author apologized sincerely, but Gouba did not change at all. This broken system is useless, too many supporting characters have no sense of existence, and the same thing is written and not written. Why waste time writing this? It's okay to lose, lose, lose, but after how many chapters have you written, you don't think it's a feeling of pleasure. You feel unhappy when you should feel good, and you write ink repeatedly when you should hurry up and overdo it. I don't understand what the readers want to see, and it almost gives me internal injuries.
After watching it for a long time, I have some opinions.
There are not many books about Go in Qidian, so I recommended it in the daily guide. After reading it, I read part of the paid chapter. To be honest, this realistic flow shocked me. The following are the poisonous points in my personal opinion. I welcome the author's explanation: 1. The heroine is reborn (soul travel), but it basically means that she has no social and communication skills. In her previous life, she was an orphan. She has to live so long and still participate in fixed-term meetings regularly. The source of income is always It has to be, Duan is not sure that it is impossible to survive by playing Go, and you have to deal with it in the process 2. Many supporting characters are simply dispensable. The first female supporting character, I don't know whether the author is positioned as a pure tool or an ambiguous object of light Lily, but I can't say that she is invisible to everyone, I can only say that she has no characteristics. It seems that the literary youth is simply adding trouble to the readers, and deleting all his scenes has basically no impact 3. Go was mentioned, but it seems that it was not mentioned. I learned chess for half a year in 2003 or 2004, but I didn't learn it well. My appreciation level is very limited, but I don't know what the author wrote about this battle. I feel that it can be applied to any other competition. In addition, there are dogs in the background setting. After 14 years, the scores for besieging A, besieging B, and various competitions can be used, but the author is keen on letting people lose a few times first. . . 4. There is almost no logic in the growth of the protagonist, and the background is all set with dogs. The heroine's previous life was at an uncertain level. In her reincarnation, she can advance rapidly to the professional level, which is considered a bonus from her previous life. Ke Jie learned chess at the age of 6, and she was born for the first time 11 years later. Guan, Go requires excellent accumulation. Not only the amount is needed, but the amount must also be excellent. The past life is equivalent to a career. Where does this kind of accumulation come from? Without a reasonable explanation, can the protagonist's growth be relied on the hard work of only five hours of sleep and the unique tricks from various senior brothers? 5. The title of the book is about live streaming. In fact, live streaming is more like a burden for the protagonist. There is no positive incentive. I can only say the previous sentence to make more people like Go. The author may want to write something similar to the development type. During the live broadcast, you can watch the protagonist grow step by step into an excellent professional player. However, both learning chess and live streaming are projects that require time and energy. There is no positive incentive relationship between the two. How do you balance it? The system is originally a good intermediary. Controlling the number of fans and conversion rate can solve this problem and the above problem very well 6. The author raised the problem that Go cannot provide sufficient living security for low-level chess players. I have no say in this because I am not in the Go industry, but if I change my thinking, all sports athletes have this problem. So how to solve it? Bai raised this issue in the article, but the leaders of the two chess associations did not consider optimizing the training structure of Go. They are still entangled in the issue of professional and amateur events. It can only be said that the author may not have thought about it himself.
His ability to create supporting roles is really genius, each one is more annoying than the other
No more reading, see you again
The poisonous point of this book
There is no need to use the system, the protagonist is silly and sweet, and the Lei Peixiong is a brat! If you want the book to pop off the street, just say so!
Facing the malicious Neptune man, he was shy and blushed for so many chapters even if he wanted to speak. I'm afraid there aren't enough poison points.
It's a nightclub and a live broadcast. The deeds and character of the original owner of the body are quite popular. To be honest, even if she is written as a otaku, people will not be so alienated 🙄
Do you think you have too many readers? Even if the heroine's predecessor is really a sex anchor, and you still mention dozens of chapters over and over again even though she only broadcasted once, I think you still have too many readers and need to filter them.
The benchmark of Go literature
I am not saying that there have not been excellent Go articles before, but the vast majority of Go articles are about blind chess, with only one or two pictures in the whole article. This is understandable for fans, but it is actually very unfriendly to book lovers who understand Go, because many wonderful features cannot be retrieved from one or two chess records. This Go article serves as a template for all subsequent Go articles. It uses the wonderful chess games as a template to write the content of Go. At the same time, it also attaches dozens of chess scores, giving the opportunity to appreciate the beauty of Go through the changes in the scores. It is a high-quality work that has opened up half of the track for Go articles. Although this article has various minor flaws such as poor pacing and sensitive topics, reading the scale alone and writing in a delicate and easy-to-understand way made me read the best Go article since Rebirth of the Go Dream. I hope the author can use his strengths and avoid weaknesses and write better and better
Wen has seen the second half of the show, and it happened to be free on May Day to talk about his feelings. Old readers who accidentally picked up the game when they were young and then got ran away by poison, and then picked it up again on the recommendation of an acquaintance, can only say that the author has a good grasp of the psychological description of the character. Bai Yinhua, who retired from the profession, went from retaliating against society to returning to teach chess and then becoming an apprentice. Worrying about the future; Inuzengou's popularity has led to doubts about self-improvement to new pursuits; Senior Brother Sun's self-restraint from strength and weakness assessment to trying to change and break through himself are all very exciting parts, and they are also the motivation that supports me to continue watching. Furthermore, it is rare to see this kind of pure protagonist recently. Nowadays, novels wish that the protagonist has 800 ideas, but there are very few that can be written with the feeling of being wise and almost demonic. On the contrary, this kind of naive, has a feeling of being wise and foolish, which is quite likable, that is, the female protagonist is more or less easy to be directly criticized by passers-by. Go, but this article is indeed a story that can even be called a typical male video main line, from sniping Lao Bai in amateur competition, to losing the championship with the Ice Queen; from being studied and targeted, to stepping out of the comfort zone and giving up the women's competition; from being chased by the stars in the competition, to carrying the popularization of Go on his shoulders, and striving to become the number one in history. A brave man is defeated by the devil when he debuts, and he defeats the devil through practice. After defeating the devil, he deeply feels that the greater the ability, the greater the responsibility. Taking responsibility, there is nothing more romantic than this in male videos. There are also problems, that is, sometimes in order to advance some plots, too much emphasis is placed on some embarrassing areas, such as the repeated tug and pull of the master-student relationship between the protagonist and Lao Lei; the content related to the Asian Games hearings is logical, but it makes the reading experience, especially the following reading experience poor. Deleting this kind of content is not conducive to the advancement of the plot, so you can consider reducing the length. While reading, I can also feel the improvement of the author's writing skills. Frankly speaking, if I only write about a competition machine, it will not be attractive. The protagonist at the beginning is a bit stereotyped and not very human. Later, like the human accident with Xiao Nie, and the frustration of encountering the Asian Games contestants from other regions, they enrich the image of the protagonist and make her more like a living character. In addition, the author is praised by name for arranging scores throughout the game. This is a lot of work. I always update the content of the game in the morning and then read the version with scores when I have free time in the afternoon. Although it may not necessarily improve the spread, after all, Go is still a niche, but he must have scores to read Go novels, otherwise it would be better to read other cool articles. Come on, author, I hope I can continue writing and achieve better results.
Why hang up a system?
I've probably read about half of it now, and I haven't even figured out why I need to hook up the system? Simply give the protagonist a reason to live broadcast? After all, the protagonist never uses the system... I really didn't understand it after watching it halfway through. There is a system or even a "live broadcast fan assistance system". The bonus is the main content of the live broadcast. It is not impossible to use it to write Go, but it is more or less a starting point. It is not a problem when playing chess with others, but can't it be used to practice chess in private? It's really disconnected when the system is down and has no practical use... When you write it like this, I don't feel like a chess player... The system is not used in competitions, which can be said to be the basic etiquette of normal operations. The system is not used in private games. It can be said that you have high moral requirements for yourself, but can't you use it when practicing chess? Can't you turn on the system and play chess with the AI to practice your thinking? I think the function of this system is mainly to enhance the computing power. I feel that it is more suitable to assist in improving chess. If a chess player or a person with a target career or even higher level can assist himself in improving chess, it is really amazing...