Starting from Under One Person, He Started to Fight Against the Immortals in a Retrograde Manner

Section 24: Tongtian Valley was left by the founder of the Jindan Sect. The greatest opportunity is for mortals to enter and clear the level to become very powerful innate aliens through the natural formation. Then there are many murals and texts left in the man cave. Thirty-six thieves learned these eight magical skills after seeing them. It is a pity. What they saw was that Wugensheng destroyed a lot of things, and in the end they were completely destroyed by Wugensheng. The natural formation was also destroyed by Wugensheng. Mortals who entered it and eventually became innate aliens would die without leaving any way for them to escape. Ordinary aliens would die if they didn't know how to walk. , The most disgusting idea of Wugensheng is that people should be destroyed if they take the wrong path. What others leave behind is an opportunity. If you don't think it is good, destroy it. Knowing that the head of Quanxing also drags the elites of major sects to follow him to death, the Thirty-Six Thieves are not easy to clean up and say that they are not guilty. In the end, the secret painting The second son of the family committed suicide and was heartbroken. At that time, he was a person with similar status to the ten gangsters now. In the end, the thirty-six thieves all repented and regretted each other. Each one was worse than the last one. You must know which warlord they lived in, fighting wars, natural disasters and chaos. I have never seen each one regret more than the last one. Being rootless is harmful to people.

Don't insert your own opinions and thanks at the end of the chapter. It's better to put these in the chapter. After all, writing skills still need to be refined. Writing that way will give a sense of collapse and readers will not be able to take it in.

Although Zhang Zhiwei is indeed the ceiling, it is too forceful for you to give the protagonist an invincibility and deprive him of development for ten years. Just because he is old and then let Zhang Zhiwei bully the older one is too strong. It's disgusting.

In the anime, Tianshi Mansion and Trinity Sect have a very good relationship. Zhang Jingqing, Zuo Ruotong, Zhang Zhiwei and Lu Jin, I really don't want them to be hostile.

Tianshi Mansion Niubi Qi:

In fact, Trinity Sect has been passed down for hundreds of years. There must be someone who breaks through to the third level. During Zuo Ruotong's retreat. There are dry bones on snowy mountains. It should be to use the violent wind and snow to tear Nisheng apart and reach the third level. But when he found out that the third level could not reach the sky, he was so disheartened that he never returned to the sect. Going back proved that the third level could not reach the sky. In the end, he chose to die outside without returning to the sect.

Emmmm The author probably just slapped his forehead and wrote too little.

This week! ! ! The power of my life and death is completely handed over to all the pursuing bosses! ! ! An extremely cruel round! As the saying goes, life and death are destiny, wealth and honor are in heaven! ! ! New reader! ! Don't abandon me! ! ! ! Please! ! ! Bang bang bang! ! !

Another Trinity Gate nanny for evil children. Why aren't evil boys called naughty boys? The reason for writing is also quite abstract, as I am afraid of being under pressure to deal with the whole sex. You don't even have the overwhelming self-confidence of a person, how can you even think about becoming an immortal? This Lao Deng has nothing to lose when he flees overseas at a young age. What's the use of having good talent?

Use less exclamation points. Wouldn't it be nice to replace them with periods? Too irritating to the eyes

The province can be referred to as California, for example, Shaanxi is Qinzhou or Shaanxi.

Will Lu Huizhong be the heroine? If I chase her to the end 🥺