Raven's Son of Hogwarts

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I can't watch it. It started with a thunderous start. I just told two people I just met about the time travel. They cried at every turn. I was really speechless.

I haven't read it yet, but I have to say that the introduction makes me confused. I like the setting of the male protagonist's identity, because there are very few stories about the descendants of Ravenclaw, but I don't like the female protagonist, because there are too many about Hermione, and I am tired of aesthetics. But Hermione really fits the preferences of a Ravenclaw, so she is not that childish, so I'll give it a look.

Pretending to be a poisonous person. There are a lot of useless B pretense, which gives people a sense of unclearness. As a result, the plot and character dialogue are very childish. The writing style is extremely childish and perfectly fits all the imaginations of elementary school students pretending to be fake. In addition, a strange little boy hugged, hugged and touched a strange nine-year-old girl many times without any warning or logic. A typical picture that only appears in childish fantasies. When writing this thing, both the real age and the mental age must be no more than 13.

How old is the author? I feel like I am no more than 18 years old at heart, very emotionally unstable, and very eager to show off. A high degree of education should be one of the few things the author has to show off in his life. His self-cultivation is probably not good enough, so it would be difficult for him not to show off.

This book only has two words: "Constructing History"

Before writing private stuff, you must at least have private stuff, pure nt writing

This is a purely self-motivated work. It just floated as I wrote it. The logic of connecting the content before and after is very rigid. I even suspected that there was no outline. And I got so excited for no reason that I started writing quotations to myself.

This book is very interesting as an entry point for fandom, but the author's writing is very impatient, eager to instill the setting and development into the readers, and the content description is very self-indulgent. He writes enough dialogues that he wants to write, and then suddenly inserts the setting and plot advancement. It is easy for people to read it incomprehensibly, and the character creation is not enough, which makes the drama.

The beginning is very toxic, and I can only say that the protagonist is stupid and makes him cry every time.

I can't watch it, I only have one feeling, a pedophile protagonist who is contradictory and messy.

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I can accept selfish protagonists and violent protagonists, but I can't accept stupid protagonists

I can't read a bit. Did the author just come out of the island? She's only nine years old. It's a pity that the other settings are pretty good, so I gave them up.

Audiences who like the movie Harry Potter either don't have a female that they like, and most of them like Hermione. When writing Harry Potter fan fiction, either the heroine is Hermione or there is no heroine. I think there's nothing wrong with that, but what's the situation with you, Stacey Lily Potter?

It seems to be smooth, but I feel a little sorry for the money spent 😅

Why did he self-destruct within two chapters of the beginning? He was a time traveler.