Immortality Begins with Becoming a Master Artifact Refiner

I just saw the first picture. A 6-year-old child has no strength at all. It's a troubled time, and you are still tossing around in several places. What are you doing?

I only read the first chapter and have a few questions. Why did the First Taoist Temple drive him away? A six-year-old child who was raised since childhood was frail and sick but later said he was well. As a direct descendant of the Taoist temple, how can other experienced Taoists not say that they drove away disciples just after their master passed away? Even if this is an evil Taoist temple, wouldn't it be more secure to use the cauldron that you have raised since childhood? Or write about a small Taoist temple with only an old Taoist priest and a few disciples, and kick him out over the inheritance. Second, why can I enter the blacksmith shop? Don't use any dirty tricks. You don't even have the basic physical strength to enter the blacksmith shop. Why would they recruit you? After six years of being weak and sick, and six years of wandering around, if you could tell the protagonist that he was able to survive six years, you would still say that he had a bad life. You will be kicked out of the blacksmith shop at one glance. And with your body, even if you find some connections to get in, what kind of work can you do? Are you kidding me? If you don't last three days, your boss will let you go. Unless the despicable means you mentioned were designed to save the life of his child

After listening to five chapters of the book, I can only say that it is really good, has no goals, and is not fun. I don't think it is as interesting as the traditional fantasy novels from 10 years ago. I can't stand it.

Regardless of chance or not, the moment you see Huilong Guanzhu, you must either kill him or let him go! What are you writing about? Huilong Guanzhu dispelled the protagonist's doubts with two or three sentences. The protagonist felt at a loss. According to the protagonist's psychological description, he felt as if he had forgiven him! You kill him again in the next few chapters! Both groups of people were offended. It was originally a big climax, but it was written like this. I was really speechless! I have never investigated beforehand, so you believe whatever people say. They said before that the human race is so united, but no one pays attention to the human ancestors' heritage, and they were killed by a small seventh-grade man! In the future, when the ancestor of the Immortal Sect of the human race ascends to the throne of the human race, he will ask, how should he answer? A family with such a mascot may be useless, but it cannot live without it!

If you don't take revenge, why would you write about Huilongguan? You wrote the protagonist so hard-hearted earlier, and then you want to treat Huilongguan coldly, so isn't your writing about Huilongguan disgusting? 🙂

The latest chapter is obviously for revenge, but you ended up writing it like this. No matter what the reason is, driving a six-year-old child down the mountain is murder. The protagonist can let go of hatred, and I can also let go of this novel. I have written so many contents in circles, but the result is no longer satisfying. I originally wrote it very late, and you still write like this. The author must think that he has written well, and he has indeed written well. But with my character, I cannot persuade others to be good without others' suffering. If you have gone through my suffering, you will be buried in the coffin. No matter how hard it is, I will still choose to kill him.

The creativity is okay, but there are reasons why your book is not popular. First, the title of the book is "The Master of Weapon Refining." As a result, the setting of the weapon refining part is too superficial. The protagonist is just like a mechanic who keeps forging iron to earn contribution points. The uniqueness of different magic weapons is not reflected at all, which makes it boring to look at. Second, it is similar to the setting of "Weapon Refining". You have to develop a system by yourself. You can choose different names at different levels, but the difference is that No, there is nothing special. I can't see anything special. I only see you talking about theories all the time. I feel that only the mana has increased, and nothing else has changed. Third, it's too watery. Why talk about so many cultivation processes? In more than ten chapters, I only know that the protagonist has taken pills, the protagonist has practiced, and the protagonist's cultivation has improved. Then there is basically no plot advancement. What is there is that it just passes by without ups and downs. The writing of the fighting scenes is really a bit abstract. If you read 5 chapters a day, the number of words is basically equal to 2 chapters, but the content is not as good as 2 chapters.

It's so boring. What's interesting about it is that it's very bland. I don't know if it's my fault. I felt reading this book was a bit depressing.

The prefaces of many chapters do not match the subtitles, which greatly affects the reading experience.

In the previous chapter, humans and monsters were at odds with each other, the requirements were very strict, and the protagonist was very smart and intelligent. Why did he suddenly give up killing monsters because of a mortal? According to the previous chapter, just grab it if you change it. If it doesn't work, hurry up and complete the task and go back.