Immortality Begins with Becoming a Master Artifact Refiner

I've only seen the first picture. It's a 6-year-old child with no power or resources. It's a chaotic world, and you're still moving from place to place. What do you have to rely on to move around?

I've only read the first chapter, and I have a few questions. Why did the first Taoist temple drive him away? A six-year-old child who was raised from a young age was said to have been frail and sickly, but later it was said that he had recovered. He was born into the direct line of the Taoist temple.

After listening to five chapters, all I can say is, it's really just action-packed, lacking any clear direction or exciting moments. In my opinion, it's not as interesting as traditional fantasy novels from 10 years ago, and I couldn't finish reading it.

Forget about any serendipitous circumstances; the moment you see the Abbot of Huilong Temple, it's either kill him or let him go! What kind of writing is this? The Abbot of Huilong Temple dispelled the protagonist's doubts with just a few words, leaving the protagonist feeling bewildered. Judging from the protagonist's inner thoughts, it seems like he'd already forgiven him!

Why write about Huilongguan if you're not going to seek revenge? You portrayed the protagonist as so heartless at the beginning, then tried to ignore Huilongguan later. Isn't writing about Huilongguan just disgusting? 🙂

The latest chapter was supposed to be about revenge, but you wrote it like this. No matter the reason, driving a six-year-old child down the mountain is murder. If the protagonist can let go of his hatred, I can also put down this novel. After writing so much, the satisfying part is gone. It was already late when you wrote it, and you still wrote it like this.

The concept is alright, but there are reasons why your book isn't popular. First, the title says "Master of Weapon Forging," but the weapon forging aspect is too superficial. The protagonist is just like a technician constantly forging iron to earn contribution points, and the uniqueness of different magical artifacts isn't shown at all, making it boring to read.

This book is so boring. Where's the enjoyment? It's so bland. I don't know if it's just me, but I feel a bit depressed reading it.

Many chapters are disjointed and lack coherence, which greatly affects the reading experience.

Earlier, the story was about the irreconcilable conflict between humans and demons, with strict requirements, and the protagonist was portrayed as intelligent and resourceful. So why did he suddenly abandon the demon-slaying plan because of a mere mortal? Based on the previous events, it seemed like he should have just robbed the place if necessary, and if that didn't work, he should have focused on completing the mission and returning home.