I Can Enter a Sailing Game

Has the author figured out the basic settings himself? One moment you are in no-person mode, and the next you want to explore with others? Is it different for just one person or are there many different people? If you enter in person, can you survive if you are attacked by other players with skills? It doesn't matter to you that he's just a game character? A lot of bad design.

Can you add some water to daily life? The protagonist goes from dungeon to dungeon in one go. Don't be too dry. Add a little water to daily life.

Did the author forget the "first launch reward" or the "hidden reward"? The protagonist actually gave up all the tasks in the two sea areas. Do you want me to tell you how the wolf girl, sword master and werewolf came to be? You have to explain this, at least choose a separate reason. For example, the timeline is stretched too far, and the people we should look for are already dead. But to be honest, this is not very reasonable. Unless you want to arrange all future teammates to have S-level talents or even higher, otherwise, as long as you arrange even one A-level talent teammate, I feel something is wrong.

Was the author inspired by "One Person's Game World"?

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 90 chapters. The writing and plot are okay, but they are not exciting. Writing it as a game itself lacks passion. There is a real world without writing and it lacks adjustment. It is no fun to just watch the game keep upgrading. Moreover, the space to introduce things like level skills is too big, and every article has it.

Why are you in such a hurry? You are the only one who can enter the game. Who doesn't want to get all the rewards in the map when playing stand-alone games?

Why! Although the writing is a bit white and rough, it is to my taste. Unfortunately, my mother's heart broke out. I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw the night elves being wiped out, so I stopped pursuing it.

The attributes from lv4 to lv6 were taken away by you. The data was wrong in the first few chapters. I really didn't dare to read it later.

I like it, it's refreshing, it doesn't feel verbose, it's a mature and stylish author, and it's a dubious masterpiece. Take your time, as long as it doesn't take you too long.

The author's writing is very good. These negative reviews are either because of the taste or because of Yunkan's book. Other book lovers who come in suggest that they go in and have a look before considering whether to collect it or not. I feel like the author should consider recruiting more miscellaneous fish as his subordinates later on. In such a big boat, there are only three melons and two people in the boat.