From Titan Corporation to the Human Empire

What's going on in this comment section? Why do I only see one person having a seizure?

The author has the same problem with every book. The highlight of this subject is the confrontation between technology and mystery, as well as the dedication and sacrifice that occur in the dark side of the world for the continuation of human civilization. However, as the author writes, it will turn into a feudal family dynasty fighting for hegemony, especially in every book, a son will appear as a subordinate. The most noble purpose is matched with the most decadent and backward political system.

I have seen more than 300 chapters, almost 400. There are too many shortcomings, and it is constantly developing. The content is too empty, and the character creation is not good, it is all assembly lines, and the war scenes are all in one stroke in Halo. I am more godly than the Emperor, and the characters are not three-dimensional at all. They are much worse than the Emperor. The same is true for the Primarch. The character shortcomings of the Primarch are gone, but where are they gone? There is no description at all. Let's write some grand war scenes like Warhammer 40k. There is no feeling at all, and the various tactical styles of the Primarch's warband are not displayed. They are no different from ordinary legions. This book is not as well written as the previous one. Alas, I hope the author can work harder! And why is the protagonist getting taller and taller? Height = strength! If I'm really convinced, I'll write him as Ultraman Jr.! ! !

I still don't understand why I have read more than 400 chapters. First of all, I found that many of the characters in this book are mentally ill. The mental problems of the original body are caused by the life experience in the Warhammer world. In this world, the protagonist grew up in the care of the protagonist and his adoptive mother as a child. Why does he still appear mentally ill as an adult? It's normal for brothers to have their own opinions, and even to stick together, but why are there still gaps? There are even those who are not on the same path as the protagonist? (The protagonist treats aliens and elves kindly, but one of the original bodies also said that people who are not from my race must have different hearts? Are they discriminating?) There are no conflicts and disputes, but this kind of situation can still happen? Is it possible to do this even if there is a biological father above me? The most powerful thing is that your biological father still doesn't care? What's going on? Does the family still need to play balance? Do an imperial art? Are you afraid that your son will kill you or are you afraid that your son will usurp power? And then a multiverse empire also instituted a feudal system? How? Are you afraid that if your subordinates are too united, the empire will not be divided? One son of the Warhammer family leads an army. The technology of the Warhammer world cannot keep up and it all depends on archaeology. Is this the same for your empire? Even if one person leads a legion, military power, financial power and personnel power must still be in the hands of the central government! It must be unified management! Or should we wait for the split? The legion has just been established and hostility has already appeared, and it was specifically written out, what's the matter? Paving the way for future splits? A lot of the content is really inexplicable, I can't figure it out, and I really don't understand why it is written like this?

When I read the title, I thought that the army was about to launch, but after reading it, I found out that it was not. By the way, I discovered a problem: There is a serious flaw in the existing articles, that is, the narrative is too bland. Beginning - passing - ending, everything is level in and level out. As for the recent chapters, my feeling after reading them is: Oh, I went to the United Nations and then came back. Gone! What did you do after you went to the United Nations? How? What are the consequences? For example, it's your wife, and then you have sex. What about the process? What we want to see is the process. You can definitely write about how everyone was shocked when they saw Guilliman and Sanguinius, and then how they looked after it was made public, how unconvinced the other party was, Sui Yang "suddenly stretched out his hand, psychic energy spurted out, and Senator XX flew into the air and begged for mercy with his big psychic hands." Instead of like now, I was ready to see you pretending to be *, but you stopped. Including the subsequent Astartes soldiers, you can write about a child who was personally rescued by the original body. They were full of worship for the original body and Sui Yang. Although they were in poor health, their will defeated everything and finally became an Astartes angel. I didn't notice this problem a long time ago, I just thought that your overall rhythm control was not very good. Later, I suddenly remembered that the fast pace of the dungeon was entirely caused by the hollowness of the protagonist. The lack of specific deeds of the protagonist would lead to no impression after watching it, such as watching it. Finally, since the setting of Warhammer 40K is used, why not deepen this setting? The subsequent world can be written about the primarch leading the legions to war. The Emperor started the Great Crusade, why don't you start the Space Crusade?

The first and most important thing is the aura! ! ! Some are too obscure to understand! ! ! When I read it, I felt like I was chewing dried wood meat that smelled like candles. I couldn't read it no matter how much saliva I poured into it. Secondly, there were too many interspersed chapters, and they were all relatively main plots. You wouldn't know it if you skipped it. Then you will find a lot more things you don't know. Reading the whole book felt like a lot of things were compressed, because it felt too uncomfortable to miss two chapters while reading, especially because there were too many halos. To be honest, I have played one, but There are many plots that I still can't understand. When I saw Night City, I felt like I finally didn't have to eat dry wood. But it was interspersed with me again. It was so disgusting, really disgusting. What makes me feel better now is that there are too few protagonists that I haven't seen. The whole process is just the vampire vampire, 414 and Li Zhuangbo. The role of the protagonist is to pick up children, shine them and then only appear in other people's mouths 😭 It's too abstract

I'll see if I've finished writing the mod for the stars. Can you write in which the Primarch takes the Astartes to other worlds🙂

I strongly recommend that the author's pace should not be so fast. It gives people a very grand but lack of flesh and blood feeling. Reading your book is like looking at dinosaur fossils put together in a museum. The last book also felt like this. There is essentially no difference between this book and the previous one. It is like the relationship between Fighting to Break the Sky and Yuan Zun Martial Arts. I hope to make adjustments, otherwise it will really be meaningless to see the middle and later stages.

How about going to the Star Trek world line? Go and get curvature and other technologies to avoid swimming in the sea like 40K when the subspace becomes larger.

Can it be a little different from the previous one?