Mortal: I Seek Immortality by Refining Elixirs

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her mistress Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her Mother Wen Qing, Yin Yue, Bing Feng, Han Zhi Xian, Mei Ning, Wen Si Yue, Liu Yu, Bing Po Fairy, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Yuan Cha Saint, Bao Hua Saint, Dai Er, Black Phoenix Fairy, Jin Yue, Xian Xian, Liu Le'er, Bai Suyuan

I just coded 14 words for you in 10 days. You must read it. Whether the content is good or not is another matter. I must support this attitude. In addition, the stallion harem is definitely a mess.

In the later stage of foundation building, the annual income is 10,000 spirit stones. If you live for a hundred years, you will have one million spirit stones. A magic weapon is only 10,000 to 30,000 spirit stones. In the later stage of foundation building, it is about the same to save hundreds of spirit stones after deducting expenses. You need to form a group to sit in the teleportation array in Luan Xinghai. It is almost enough to save thousands of spirit stones in one year to form pills.

After reading your book, you think the original price is unreasonable, but I think your price is too exaggerated.

In the world of immortal cultivation, if you are strong, you can buy and sell by force. There is no rough market price at all. Prices in the local area basically fluctuate depending on the price range purchased by the local sect. Casual cultivators basically don't want to do business. They will be robbed as soon as they go out, otherwise the chamber of commerce will not make money.

The gold finger is too big, and you have to raise mythical beasts, and you have to farm to get 80,000 thousand-year elixirs and so on. The effect of the exercises is dozens of times, and the spiritual stone system is super high. This is the world of mortal cultivation that has been destroyed by ancient demons. Raising a few gods is enough to reach the sky. If you can't continue writing like this, it will either collapse or fail. It is better to write about the fantasy world.

Every monk who can become a Nascent Soul has his or her own chance, including many alchemy monks.

The setting is good, just like a running account

What's reasonable? Behind Han Li's butt is her future self. This is not the backstage. It's reasonable for Han Li to practice Qi and kill Daluo Jinxian. It's not reasonable to cross a big realm. It's reasonable to hold the Sky Vase. What a double standard.

Haha, Han Li sent me an invitation to form a team. Haha, if you can't do it, let me laugh for a while. Hahaha 😁😁😁

Why do I feel weird the more I read?

If a person like the protagonist arrives in the fairy world, do you know what rules to practice? Java rules😁

What a magical update this is, I love it.

After reading your data analysis, I thought the content could be serious and good. Unfortunately, after reading more than 10 chapters, I still feel that it is very awkward. The golden finger is also quite wide, and it can only be a round yo-yo.

I have to say, Seeking Immortality is really a treasure. The alchemy system and exercise system in it are very good and very expandable. Using it to supplement and improve the novel can save a lot of brain cells😂

The writing style is sophisticated, the narrative is smooth, the structure is grand, and the timing of the arrangement is good. However, the plot is a bit slow, and the emotional drama is not described thoroughly enough. I look forward to a big explosion. If you can persist, this book will have the appearance of a masterpiece. I, Ying Hao, come to the Wild Age with the Gate of All Realms, travel through the heavens, gather endless luck, open the first destiny dynasty in the ages, use the way of the ultimate emperor to make all realms surrender, and become the eternal supreme emperor of heaven. ……………… PS: I am currently writing about The Wilderness, and I may write about Swallowing Starry Sky, Perfect World, Under One Person, Douluo Dalu, Zhe Tian, ​​Wu Dong Qian Kun, Snow Eagle Lord, Feijian Dao, Cangyuan Tu, Eternal Life, Yuan Tianzun, Beyond Time...

I have to say that the pace of this book is much better. There are no long chapters or lengthy explanations, just plot. This is already a big improvement

Ugh, you're such a sucker for naming (name).

How about making it simpler and just giving them finished pills?

I'm not writing, I'm just creating a series of characters and then peeking into their lives and recording them. You can read books by Leo Tolstoy and Dostoyevsky, which may improve your plot telling skills. Don't insist on "fairy-like" writing style, as your foundation hasn't been laid yet. I can't even do last-ditch attacks, so why bother?

After watching two-thirds of the story, the protagonist relied on alchemy to ingratiate himself with a high-level monk as his backer. As a result, everyone else became a god and reached perfection in the later stage. The protagonist is still the Nascent Soul. When the backer sees that the protagonist is no longer useful, he will search the protagonist's soul and force him to find out the skills and golden fingers. This is why novels about loners are better.

Among the mortal heroines, I personally think the one who stands out the most is actually Nangong Wan, because she is an ascetic monk and has a strong Taoist heart like Han Li. When Han Li ascended, she was able to give Han Li the Six-Ding Heavenly Armor Talisman, the most important treasure in her body, for self-defense. This was very valuable in a world of mean-spirited mortals, and it was precisely because of this treasure that Han Li could successfully ascend. Let's talk about the other female cultivators. Zi Ling Yuanyao personally feels that her life and work are a bit transactional. She is more motivated by sex than sincere. As for Senior Sister Chen, she is not far away from Taoism. The only remaining formation genius is Xin Ruyin. Maybe she can make the Inverted Five Elements Formation at this age. It's true, but you have to know that there is no one to guide her on the road ahead. Who knows how far she can go with the formation. In the final analysis, it still depends on her cultivation and longevity. As for Yan Ruyan, there are many women who follow the trend without making any decisions and follow the family's arrangements. Is there any highlight? According to Yin Yue, although being a considerate secretary is good, it would be awkward to be a heroine. She still doesn't have enough Taoism. The last one, Hong Fu, I know there are many readers now who are Cao Cao, haha, but you can have a one-night stand with this kind of woman, but do you use it as a heroine to disgust others or to disgust yourself? In short, after reading a lot of mortals, there is no one that can be compared with these women. Personally, I think Nangong Wan is the best heroine. The other women can satisfy Cao's thief's temperament by being romantically involved. As for the real ones, don't do it. After all, in the mortal world, ascetic monks like Nangong Wan are arrogant. If you dare to mess around, she will dare to put a hat on you.

With your update speed, as long as the content is not a running account, it will be great🔥🤓

Has the plot of Kowloon Sky Thunder Fire been conceived well? Is it a mysterious technique?

I really like this character, and discussing Tao with him is very artistic, but it is a bit strange to appear in the human world in the middle stage of becoming a god, unless the protagonist can refine a large amount of Tianyuan Shen Dan to benefit the entire human world.

Replenish one, don't do it with horse writing, it's almost the same if you collect two or three. I suggest you go to the spirit world and collect again. Otherwise, they won't be able to become immortals after you become immortals, and it's useless to come here.

Just asking, are there multiple female leads?