The Talisman I Drew Must Be Banned

It was originally a good novel, but it was ruined by a female supporting character. For me, it turned into a fluff novel. The other serious plots were quite interesting.

I admit that it did bring me a lot of happiness in the early days. Whether it's a fishing charm, encourage the fish to take the bait themselves. There are also some other strange symbols, which are all very imaginative. They make me feel novel and interesting, so I am even more looking forward to the plot that will happen later. But around Chapter 170, the feeling of this book has changed. The intuitive feeling is that the writing power of Sitting has decreased, and the plot is no longer focused solely on making interesting talismans. However, due to the reason of catching up on updates, if you can't see the plot you want to see for several days in a row, and there are plots you don't like, it's like putting the book down. I'm starting to read books now. I'll check back in after a while and hope it gets better.

Alas, when I saw this guy's plot, I wanted to skip it. The author shouldn't let her get entangled in those muddled things. But after reading this latest chapter of the plot, I realized that it wasn't just the characters that disgusted me, but the fact that it didn't lead to any plot. For example, Lin Yao couldn't even make Liu Qing jealous! ! ! It makes me feel ashamed (Is this one of the heroines? It seems that there is a gap between the heroines.) It can be said that in the two lines written by the author, she has no role at all (if she can only draw the lines like a passerby NPC, looking up to the protagonist...) It can be said that if the author does not plan to let her succubus body plot advance, what is placed in front of the reader is a strong guy who can't be killed no matter what, and is still crawling around the screen. However, I have some expectations for the end of Lin Yao's latest chapter. Because the author finally plans to let her change, and there are too many ways to do it. Because just this sentence has almost turned her into a clown who understands reality. With a little polish, she will definitely be able to turn her resentment into pleasure (so the plot that made us uncomfortable before was in The Steel of the Heart?) The most typical one is to become stronger and then get slapped in the face with a backhand. For example, if you awaken the succubus body in advance, your strength will skyrocket, and you will become an "innocent succubus" and master many "ventriloquism". Then when he was being hunted, he came to the male protagonist and asked for reconciliation. As a result, the male protagonist reported back and took out his VCR, indicating that this evil woman in the world has been trying to figure out her body. So Lin Yao faced all kinds of righteousness and looked at the man she loved so deeply, even though she had done so many things for him... But he did this kind of thing, and then broke his guard (here is a ditty about recognizing reality)... In short, with her current character, it is best to turn into a clown moment, which is the most satisfying. Generally speaking, the guy who is not very strong and always loves to force me to do anything is really not likable. In those ancient farming novels, there are also some male protagonists who serve female lords with this kind of personality, but the reason is because when the male protagonist conquers them with his strength, he will not only get the praise of the superior, but also feel the satisfaction of defeating the superior, and can also promote the plot to achieve the above-mentioned high-quality cycle. So we love to watch this kind of scene. Although it is very bloody, it is very comfortable. Now Lin Yao is like a female lord, but she currently lacks too many things, so I was very excited when I saw the last sentence written by the author. Come on, author, I really regret not seeing it so I didn't invest. Otherwise, I could use Qidian coins to prostitute you for free.

When will I be with the snake demon lady?

What should I do if I want to keep it? Or should I keep it?

🙂

I read this book as a romance novel with Liu Qing 😁

The people who escaped halfway are here. I think the first problem with this book is that it is written in the name of cultivation but has little to do with it. The growth of cultivation is not linked to the plot. If the cultivation is increased, it is still a low-level talisman. What is the significance of cultivation to the plot? Second, it's almost 250 chapters, and you're still trapped in a small place. It's similar to a cultivator who is still doing odd jobs outside. Who wants to read it? Third, and the second reason, the protagonist's status has not improved. At best, he has changed from an outer disciple to a valued outer disciple. If he comes to build a foundation, he should still serve tea.       ，，，，，， That's when I started watching it. So, it's almost 250 chapters, and it doesn't open a new map, doesn't mention status, and doesn't practice cultivation. How much more attractive is this book? I want to watch the brain-hole talisman rip off a person, a village, a town, a county, a city, a province, a country, and then rip off the human race and the demon race, the righteous way and the demonic way, and the sky and the air, but I don't want to watch it rip off passerby A and then passerby B, B, and D.

Liu's writing is quite cute. Isn't this a good way to write about women? Just don't mix things into it.

It's exciting, but the grade is a bit low. The level is low, and the things you draw can disrupt the upper market and attract big bosses from all sides. You feel like a concept god, but you are cultivating immortality, and cultivating immortals must abide by the conservation of energy!

I have a suggestion, that is, the protagonist's golden finger is not very obvious, and can be strengthened. A game will have some bugs from time to time as it progresses, and this game has been around for a long time. The protagonist is from the time when he time travels to the beginning. You can fix some lifelong bugs at the appropriate time, or to permanently improve your strength in several small realms in a short period of time, or to save your life. There are also some small easter eggs in the game that can be arranged 😁

Generally speaking, it's average, the protagonist's character is a bit disgusting, and the protagonist who doesn't know how to refuse is better than Asasi. The inspiration for the full text is roughly based on the book "Don't Fire My Humanity", let's just use it as a meal replacement.

Harem or single? If it's a harem, I'll pursue it.

I originally wanted to enjoy the cp between Jiang Cheng and Liu Qing, but it ended. Judging from the length of the emotional line, I guess the author did not expect it to end so quickly. The emotional change was a bit hasty, and the Dayanzong did not expand, nor did Jiang Cheng's cheap master. I haven't forgotten yet. The protagonist has traveled back in time into a game he made. The main plot of the novel may not even include 20% of what the author envisioned. The protagonist's cultivation level is so high that he can't even build a foundation. Such a grand narrative ended in failure. Assigning Dayanzong to Jiangcheng, the author probably wants Jiangcheng to further develop in the magic cultivator, and even gradually let Dayanzong take the number one position in the magic way. The first stage of Tongtianmen is probably when Jiang Cheng solves the emotional problems between the cheap master and his father. The second stage relies on the relationship between the master and his father to enter the circle of high-level officials. Through his evil talismans, the high-level officials are unable to hold back and have no choice but to let him become an elder. The third stage is probably going out. The plot of Liu Qing should be very late. Emotionally, she and Jiang Cheng will get married, and then explain their identities, and Jiang Cheng will accept it calmly. Then there may be some crisis in the demon clan. Liu Qing in the Mahayana period needs to rush back, and Jiang Cheng also rushes over, and then creates some special talismans to build bridges in the human world, gradually solve the crisis of the genocide of the demon clan, and achieve the great reconciliation between humans and demons. Interspersed in the middle are probably the two or three things about the Dragon Palace Aquatic Tribe, most of which are related to Ao Lian coming ashore again and taking the initiative to look for Jiangcheng. The main problem of this novel is that the ideas are too dense but the follow-up development is neglected. The talismans made by Jiang Cheng are more amazing than the last, and the ideas are clearer. However, after the author wrote it and caused a social sensation, the subsequent plot probably did not have anything to do with the talismans. This is very wasteful and greatly reduces the life of the novel. The author should focus on Jiangcheng's subsequent development and utilization of these talismans, as well as the new interpretation and utilization of old talismans. In the author's background setting, the world of immortality should be very stable, but it is actually a game. How could it be like in the novel, where there are only a few decent confrontation scenes in the whole novel? The protagonist has never fought with others. Without the enemy to force the protagonist, the plot will naturally be as loose as sand. The author will have no goal and naturally have no work to do. If the author focuses on development, why not write about the protagonist using the inventions and ideas of modern civilization to transform the talisman and shock the world of immortality? The plot is promising, but it's a pity that the author has no life and doesn't want to bite the lighter. Reward the author with "high moral praise".

If this book didn't have the beginning, "Green Tea" would have become popular.

Without Lin Yao, this book would be just fine food. It's really hard to write this character because he has diaphragms from time to time. Snake is more fragrant.

Can you please stop writing so many plots about harem faction fights? This part is not very good. Obviously, the pure love between Snake and Snake was written quite well.

It is easy to be happy for a while, but difficult to be happy for a lifetime. It is difficult to write a long Lezi book. The ones that can be written long are usually the normal upgrade process, which is difficult to guarantee fun.

The effects of various talismans are very thoughtful. Just one thing When he is on the right path, the protagonist is duplicitous and says that he respects the law and abides by the law, but he always knows the law and breaks the law and relies on the fact that the other party is a fool to fight guerrillas so that the other party cannot discover the fact that he has broken the law and escape punishment. When he was in the Demon Sect, he knew and acted in unity, never broke the law, and the ideas he gave to the Demon Sect were legal and compliant, and the Demon Sect believed that his ideas were too extreme and should not wander around the legal boundary.

It's very uncomfortable to keep having a relationship with that Lin Yao.

The plot progress is too slow. It has been so long since you were put on the shelves and you are now enrolled. There are five kinds of exams, one per day, and five days of water... The emotional scenes are also written in a strange way.

It's good to watch, but it feels like a harem story. Since there's only one female protagonist, I'll subscribe and continue reading.

Hurry and cum for me

Whatever was written in Chapter 171, I bought the murderous protagonist, and now I'm back to plead for mercy. It is incompatible with the humorous writing style and appears to be intellectually subdued.

Seeking refinement

No, I've been watching it for a long time, and you're disappointed?

Let's commemorate it

Why is this book finished with more than two hundred chapters?

Is the fifth book yours?

The plot is almost enough to make it a masterpiece, but the writing skills could be much worse.