Samsara of the Heavens, Starting as Hokage, I Choose Otsutsuki

The heroine is behind the scenes and wants to be killed. What's going on with the phosphorus? The Holy Mother's heart explodes, right?

I couldn't stand it when I saw the introduction. Can these reincarnated people choose their own parents after they are born? So if one person chooses Jiraiya and Tsunade, another chooses Orochimaru and Tsunade, and another chooses Sarutobi Hiruzen and Tsunade, what will Tsunade do after they reincarnate? Forced to be 🐔 give birth to these reincarnations?

Also, your character description is actually a bit too pure. The various inexplicable disputes between the reincarnations, and the ninja world are written for you like a child playing house. Brother, think about how many years they have been fighting? Konan, an orphan from the ninja world, talks to you so peacefully, the ninjas of Amegakure Village approach you rashly when they see you as an unknown ninja, and there are a few little details at the end, the black-haired Otsutsuki? I know that when writing this novel, the protagonist's image and name are basically very free from recognition by the locals. However, you wrote a story about a Kaguya tribesman whose image is close to that of the local people. Later, your protagonist is not a tattooed person. As a result, the image has nothing to do with Otsutsuki except for the white skin you mentioned.

After reading the introduction and reading Chapter 5, this setting is a piece of shit. If everyone could choose their own birth parents and fabricate them at will, the original characters would have lived and died long ago. The key is that this is not a parallel universe. There are thousands of reincarnations. How many can one original character give birth to? The funniest thing is that he even added that a copy of the ninja world has existed for thousands of years. It is really a defense. After selecting the parents, the dungeon space will allow the parents to have a relationship according to the situation so that they can be reincarnated and born in the dungeon. Then choose Sarutobi Hiruzen and Tsunade. They can only be born after they sleep together. The problem is that you, Tsunade, are not the only one. There are thousands of reincarnations. Everyone chooses Tsunade to be their mother and then their father. Parents are all random people, does Tsunade sleep with people all over the world, speechless Choose Sarutobi Hiruzen and Kushina, Namikaze Minato and Uchiha Mikoto, Namikaze Minato and Hinata, Naruto and Tsunade, Danzo and Uzumaki Mito, Chiyo and Jiraiya, Naruto and Kushina, Sasuke and Mikoto, Sasuke and Sakura's mother, etc. How can they be reborn in the reincarnation space? What do you think?

It's quite an abstract setting. Thousands of years. The first point is, not to mention changing the ninja world, it doesn't even have the slightest impact on the reincarnations in the secular world. Not to mention that all human beings are waste, the civilians and nobles you choose must be waste. The second point is the population issue. I believe this reincarnation space was only opened in the past ten years.

After reading the first chapter, I want to say that a great author once said that it is best for authors not to write their own bad taste into novels. Being clever will offend readers, unless what you write is a spoof. . .

5.7 Million words is only level 3. Don't you think about why?

The first three golden chapters are filled with a bunch of my own complaints and personal opinions. You're not a newbie, so how can you write it so poorly?

I ordered two chapters to complain about. When you read Chapter 5, you will know what the ingredients are. In order to make fun of it, Xia Jiba set it up, the world is in chaos, and there is no logic.

This introduction is quite abstract. You can freely choose your ancestors. The paternal line is the kage of each village, and the maternal line is the famous name of each country. The ninja world will be unified here. This small wishing machine makes me unhappy.

The three golden chapters are all about quarreling. Is it necessary? You can continue writing the introduction from the first chapter, and insert a story or something in the middle to throw out your setting. There is no need to have such a quarrel and dialogue at the beginning. It is unattractive. The only clicks to come in are from your introduction. It turns out that the first few chapters are all about quarreling and so on.

Good news, a daily guide. Bad news is daily poison.

The introduction is outrageous. It's just a blurb. Author, you might as well write a cool article without using your brain.

After looking at the setting and the choice of the protagonist, I found that in World War II, with this kind of strength, I could hang up the entire ninja world and fight. Forget about being immune to everything. The non-six-path seal is basically useless. At this time, Madara also gave Nagato his eyes and directly killed Nagato. Even if Madara is imprisoned in space, he can't beat the protagonist. Not to mention Black Zetsu, all Otsutsuki can restrain Black Zetsu. At this time, if you don't get the tailed beast directly, you don't know what to do. It is actually set to the shadow level. Each of the three eyes is at least super shadow base when taken out alone. So if you want to be invincible, just be invincible. I don't know what you are asking for. I'll move over the settings of Otsutsuki Shibaju and play with them.

There are at least more than 1,000 private goods in a chapter of 3,000. I don't know what the water is used for. Are you writing the reincarnation scene or are you planning to finish writing Naruto?

Couldn't you include less private stuff? 1/3 Of the text is private stuff, and the plot is too slow.

Author, why don't you use AI to polish the content 🙂

What should I tell you? It's not that there's a problem with the setting, but that there's a problem with your writing. First of all, except for the basic laws of the world, which mostly default to the laws of real physics, all other settings in fantasy literature can basically be said to be fictional and unrealistic. Then these original settings are unreasonable, just like the ghosts and spirits in ancient my country's Liaozhai and various other myths. They are actually unrealistic and unreasonable, but why do we recognize it now? Because they made up a whole world view that makes it reasonable. After death, souls will be produced, and the souls will go to the underworld. The underworld will reward good and punish evil, distribute the souls to reincarnation, and then become life after reincarnation, and then continue such a cyclical process. There is aura in the heaven and earth, that is, certain energy can make people absorb and become stronger. If they are strong enough, they can become gods. Something like that, right? It is simply imaginary and unrealistic, but they have made it a process that can be accurately deduced and reasoned with logic. People will not believe any of the setting lists. Who will believe the statement "There are immortals in the world"? They all think it is unreasonable, but if we put it into an overall analysis, the human body can absorb energy and become stronger, and it can become stronger to a certain level. For mortals, it is like an immortal. This logical reasoning can be realized normally, so we accept it. As a reincarnator, you can freely choose your parents and the settings of the Reincarnation Tower that have existed for thousands of years. Just like a single setting in it, it is really unreasonable to single it out. But you can construct a worldview so that its internal logic can be consistent. If you choose parents arbitrarily, but some parents will not have any communication at all, then it will be impossible for the people who choose these two people to be parents, and those who are impossible to be born in your article are born. You have changed this setting from an unreasonable choice of two parents who will die to a possible birth. This is the irrational internal logic. Thousands of years will naturally produce countless impacts, which will make the world change, and you have not shown these changes in it. This is also an irrational internal logic. If you write down all the changes in this millennium, reality has produced professional analysis and operations, exploration and research, and the ninja world has therefore produced political changes, technological progress, cultural evolution, and so on. And then the reality and the ninja world do show the influence of these thousand years, then the internal logic is reasonable. Any single setting is actually unreasonable, but we can combine it into descriptions and derivation to make it reasonable. But you failed to do that. You just put a single setting in completely, and then did not make any supplements, improvements, reasoning and evolution. In this way, why don't you ask us to spray this abstract setting?

When will Naruto end? I've read the table of contents, chapter 190, and it's still Naruto.

Do you want to take photos of Meiming?

There are cartoons and TV series for the time without children, such as Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit and The Magic Boy + Bad Guy and Miss Beauty.

Will Simei and Shenbing Xiaojiang write about it?

The Empire of Qin series and Princess Diaoman + Changfeng Escort and Seven Fairies of Joy + Searching for the Qin and Long You Tianxia + Love History of the Tang Dynasty and Celestial Master Zhong Kui, will you go there? They are all TV series for children.

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My name is Archaon, born in Nordland. He was supposed to grow into a good, law-abiding citizen of the empire. But I never expected... I was drowned in the sea on the first day I was born... Stop! A man shouted from the shadows. Destiny is changed. ------- I am Archaon. I did not die in infancy, nor did I have the sea. I was abandoned when I was just born. I appeared in the church. Pastor Dagbert adopted me and taught me the teachings of Sigmar. I was supposed to grow into a pious, brave, and righteous temple priest. But I never expected... When I was eight years old, I contracted a terrible plague, which caused skin ulcers and body corrosion. The cause turned out to be the aftermath of a forbidden grimoire that my adoptive father was studying in the basement, so I was cursed to death... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. -------- I am Archaon. My godfather asked me to stay away from the church. I did not get sick and grew up healthily. At the age of thirteen, I became the squire of the baron's knight. I should have continued to strive to become a glorious knight's squire. But I never expected that... The baron beat his knight after drinking, and as a squire, I raised a sledgehammer to the baron in order to protect the Lord. Then, the two of them joined forces to take down, and were kicked to death by their horses... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny was changed again. -------- I am Archaon. I did not stop the Baron from beating the knight. He was drunk and hunting, and fell into the night goblin's trap. The Baron and the knight were all killed. I killed the night goblin and took back their corpses. I was adopted by the Baron's wife, inherited the family, and became a noble. I originally thought I would become a good lord as brave, upright, and powerful as Sigma. But I never expected... After I conquered a tribe of beastmen and saved the love of my life, Sister Giselle, I was seriously injured, and my right eye was pierced by a rune stone. "The stone needs to be smashed, the corpse needs to be burned, and a warning needs to be issued. Our empire is not a place for their chaos!", I just finished speaking the heroic words and took the initiative to cut off, and I stopped... Stop! A man in the shadow shouted angrily. Destiny is changed again and again. ------- My name is Archaon. I successfully defeated the beastmen, but I was seriously injured and full of corrosion. A new army of demons came after me to snatch the forbidden grimoire. Godfather Dagbert and Sister Giselle took me to Altdorf, the capital of the empire. I originally thought that when I arrived at the Temple of Sigmar, the great priest Heydrich would save my life and expose the demonic conspiracy hidden in the forbidden grimoire. But I never expected... The Knights of the Temple of Sigmar blocked our way, killed Godfather Dagbert for no reason, and snatched the Forbidden Grimoire. I am stunned again... Stop! There was a man in the shadows who smashed all the cups in front of him. Destiny is changed again and again. ------ My name is Archaon. My adoptive father Dagbert and Sister Giselle and I escaped pursuit and returned to our hometown castle. What we saw was the destroyed castle, the massacred citizens, and our adoptive mother who was hanged on the city wall! I didn't cry, only endless sadness. I looked at the scars left when I fought against the devil, and then at the Sigma pendant in my hand, and my faith began to collapse. My adoptive father told me that he found the reason in the Forbidden Grimoire: "The Forbidden Grimoire reveals the end of the world, and the person who destroyed the world is named Archaon. And that person is you." I didn't want to admit this fate, but my adoptive father's words forced me to believe that I didn't want to bring darkness to the world, so I chose to commit suicide by throwing myself into a well. Stop! There was a manly man in the shadows, cursing and modifying the timeline. Destiny was changed again. --------- My name is Archaon. My adoptive father, adoptive mother, lover, and subjects were all killed by the Temple Knights. Grieved, I sneaked into the Great Temple of Altdorf and knelt in front of the golden statue of Sigmar to pray for guidance, but received no response. I killed the guarding Temple Knights, captured High Priest Heydrich, and asked him sharply why he did this! "The Forbidden Grimoire reveals the end of the world. The person who destroyed the world is named Archaon. And that person is you." The great priest said. "Just because of this ridiculous prophecy, you are going to kill my whole family?" I turned dark, full of disgust for Sigma's hypocritical light, and vowed to destroy Sigma's temple and make him pay the price! I broke through the Garden of Nurgle, walked through the Demon Palace of Tzeentch, withstood the temptation of Slaanesh, killed the Great Daemon of Khorne, and finally dragged my scarred body to a place of shadow to be crowned by the Eternal Chosen. "Stop!" The man in the shadow stood up and said happily: "My name is Bilak, and I am your father! Everything you have is given to me, now it's time to return your body to me!" --------- My name is Archaon, the Lord of Doom, the Three-Eyed King, the favorite of the Chaos Gods, the last High King of Norsca, the 13th Eternal Chosen God, the Commander-in-Chief of Chaos, and the boss of the bad guys. With the help of a friend who was holding a warhammer, I killed Beelak who was playing tricks on me all my life. I beat Sigma to the point where he hunkered down in the Kingdom of God and did not dare to go out. But he told me that this should not be my fate and that we should go back to the original starting point. Should I believe him?