The World Begins with American Comics

I can read it, but you are so broken that you always cut it off from Chapter 4, and Chapter 5 does not go to Chapter 6. You don't revise it even after you finish the book. Why don't you read what you have written? To be honest, you can continue to read it, but you are so broken that I am really speechless.

I've finished all the things that need to be complained about in the first chapter review, and I'll wait until he updates it to talk about the rest. Although it's pretty cool, it's just as cool as those entertainment articles, which include copying lyrics, jokes, and jokes. I feel like the writing style in American Comics is a bit awkward, and I don't understand what the author wants to express. Although the protagonist has acquired a lot of skills, he is still a waste. At least he has no major or minor, and he creates a bunch of clones because of his good ability, and then relies on his ability and passivity. This is like a series of suspense or conspiracy. Shoulder, and then the writing was extremely awkward. There were no scenes or lines of pig feet after that. Most of them were scenes with the heroine and a large number of supporting characters, and then it ended reluctantly. After entering the world of Tushan, I basically skipped chapters. After all, I had never seen or heard of this movie or anime/TV series. Forget it, I saw the chapter he posted. After all, there were not many readers to discuss it, so I chose the world of Tushan mentioned by a certain reader. I regretted pursuing it. I will wait until he writes hundreds of chapters and skips Tushan.

The author has added too many world background settings in the book, and all kinds of people are mixed together. If it is written well, it will be a sacred book, but if it is not well written, it will be bullshit.

How to say it? Except for not being afraid to check the water meter when the water is flowing, everything else is fine. The subject matter itself is quite attractive. But... Seeing the seven ghost clones with seven names and surnames suddenly appeared out of nowhere, I don't know why I suddenly had the idea that I didn't want to see it at all. . .

Snake masters: Xidu Ouyang Feng, Xu Xian, Orochimaru, Xia Xueyi, Liang Ziweng, Qinglin. Dragon Subduing Team: Qiao Feng, Hong Qigong, Su Can, Song Qingshu, Wang Xiaolong. Kick technique: Ghost Kick Seven. Coolie Qiang Twelve Road Tan Leg, Nie Feng, Fengshen Leg. Ah Xing, powerful Vajra legs. Director Wang used the scissor kick to kill him. Foshan Shadowless Foot Huang Feihong Dragon Tiger Gate. Electro-Poisonous Dragon Diamond, the King of Destruction. Book of Swords and Enemies, Wuchen Taoist Priest, and a chain of missing legs. The man who conquered the demon has his legs damaged by the sky. Lone star evil leg, Wang Xiaohu. Nine Yin Team: Xiao Longnu, Yang Guo, Wang Xiaolong, Zhou Zhiruo, Supernatural Team: Kuang Tianyou, Xiao Wei, Nie Xiaoqian, Zhenzi, Bixian, Kayo Ye. Knife team: Li **, Fu Hongxue, Ding Peng, Kou Zhong, Sima Changfeng, Hu Yidao. Using swords: Ximen Chuixue, Dugu Qiubai, A Qing, Xie Xiaofeng, Ye Gucheng, Zhang Danfeng. Poisons used: Ding Chunqiu, Poison Immortal King Nangu, Ernan Poison Body Little Medical Immortal, Gu Body Holy Boy Chen Duo, Li Mochou, King of Glory Bian Que. Book writing team: Xiaoyaozi, Zhang Sanfeng, Huang Shang, Dou Dionysian Monk. Government team: Orochimaru, Lu Miaozi, Shenji Bailian Ma Xianhong, Qin Shi Mingyue Class Master, Miledy. One yang finger is not enough to make you smelly. Kato Masajun. Fingering: Lingxi refers to Lu Xiaofeng, Kato Ying, Yiyang guides Emperor, Duan Yu, Huamanlou. Twins: Xiao Yuer, Hua Wuque, Mi Wentian, Chu Wanxin, Brother Haier, Brother Haier, Brother Haier. The Blind Man: Hua Man Lou, Ke Zhen'e, Xie Xun, Tian Can Di Que, Yuan Sui Yun, Li Qing, Asura Perverted Killing Team: Ed Gein's "Texas Chainsaw Massacre"; Freddy --- "A Nightmare on Elm Street"; Ya Shenyue " ****Book"; Martin "The Human Centipede"; John Kramer ---"Saw"; Jason League of Legends: Torso, ATM, Salmon, Crow's Feet, Xizhilang, Salmon, Diaper Lion, Shakima , Astro Boy, Gratitude, Big Mouth Monkey. Crow Team: Ink Crow, League of Legends Crow, Uchiha Shisui, Uchiha Itachi These are the teams that have appeared or are about to appear. If you have a favorite self-built team, you can leave a message.

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Poison, stallion, the author has never seen a woman

After reading Chapter 28, I still can't tell who raised their hands from which camp🙌

I was dumbfounded after reading the introduction. Do you fall in love with someone when you meet one? I have nothing against harems, after all I have seen them too. However, just because the heroine in your profile is real, I can't complain about it, do you understand? I'm too lazy to complain about you. There are too few comics about Zhutianliu, and it can be said that there are not many that can be read. Let me tell you, your girl is outrageous to be a heroine. Understand? If you were a ruthless person, would you still understand, nanny? How old are you? I'm not against the harem, but you should be smarter when doing it. This is my constructive opinion.

The first ten chapters are okay, very funny, but the writing style is bad, too white, but what the hell is behind it? It's so confusing, I can't really understand it, and the further I read, the more confused I become. The author has too much to write, and he hammers here and there, but I can't understand the rest of it at all 😅

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This book is amazing, it successfully turned the protagonist into a supporting character. .

I know how to play, I rewarded myself and I earned 2,000

The most annoying thing is that the clone has its own thoughts, and what kind of physical clone is there? ? ? Funny, right? And don't you think the existence of clones is disgusting? Could it be that there is one doppelgänger and one heroine? Does it feel good to green yourself? And don't you think the existence of the clone is too high? I feel like the doppelgänger is the protagonist.

What is this mess? The first chapter was so chaotic that it felt like I was seeing a madman imagining things.

Why is there so much silver today? Tell me.

I read the introduction of the heroine before reading the text. Are you funny, author? Is it possible that the three sisters of the Fox Fairy Matchmaker are all female protagonists? Do you think they are all ** or **, 😅😅😅😅😅😅

It's just a huge battle of characters from all over the world, and I still didn't understand what it was about!

The writing was too confusing and I didn't see the main thread.

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Witnessed the author's single chapter being deleted. The capital of all evil.

The author's writing is too messy, I suggest you summarize it briefly

I just want to ask, do you like the protagonist or do you like the protagonist's clones, those women?

Comments on complaints: I can't understand what the author wrote. It's too confusing. Characters from various worlds jump out one after another. I feel like there is nothing to read. Moreover, the introduction is very inconsistent with the book. If you have complaints, you can come to this thread to complain.

One look at the 6 female protagonists, and you can tell that the author has never had a girlfriend before, so he wants a woman so much.

I tried to resist the poison and read a few of them but I just couldn't bear it anymore. How can I put it, his poison is indescribable, or he should have collected the essence of poison points in all novels, and even saw the appearance of ancient Xiaobai Wenliu.

Is this book a eunuch? The writing is pretty good!

Why don't you read abandoned books on Youriman?

The author is so fucking ruthless, even the ruthless emperor has made arrangements for it, awesome B awesome B,

The writing is too fake and the character is just a borrowed name, which makes no sense at all.