People Are Covering the Sky, Traveling Across the World at the Same Time to Inherit the Inheritance of All Worlds

Looking for Aidouka in the first chapter is nonsense. What else is engraved on it is the way of the Immortal Emperor and the way of worshiping the Tao. Aren't you talking nonsense? Is this engraved on the protagonist's future body? When you write a fanfic, just follow the settings of the original work. Especially if this isn't those small dungeons or the main world, are you writing all this randomly?

Chapter 2: Tianlong and martial arts are just the skin of the ten evil treasures that cover the sky? Do you want to see what you are talking about? Although I am not "Zhe Tian Chui", your way of writing is very likely to be called "Tian Long Chui". The ten evil treasures are almost related to (or already are) the laws of the world, which is the Tao of the world. The fur must be 0.0...1, But no matter how many The 1 after the zero is also Tao. The strongest Tianlong can only release a three-foot wall of energy. At most, it can be considered as internal energy being released externally, not even skills. You can directly upgrade Tianlong from low martial arts to medium martial arts. This middle martial arts may have been downgraded from high martial arts or immortal martial arts.

How much do you like Naruto? Basically every book has Naruto

I think you have chosen the wrong world. You should not write about Zhetian. You should write about other things, such as the Tomb of Gods. Because Zhetian has pearls and jade in front of it, no one will see it. The road to eternal life is highly competitive. The Supreme Being is indeed a good place, but the operating space is small. Choose the Tomb of Gods. Blue and White Society is the best, because there is no room for it in the Tomb of Gods. It's easy to die. Even if you die, you can still escape from the skills, the blood of your descendants, etc. This mechanism is simply invincible. Although the enemy is also strong, there are top figures planning it. The protagonist can try his best to stay behind, even if the world's energy level is low. The Blue and White Society is also a mechanism. After all, it is useless if you can't fulfill your wish.

Things in the world of martial arts can be transformed into the perfect ten evil methods. Although it is superficial, it is a bit far-fetched. There are only three protagonists, and they are all just starting out. The most powerful Dou Po is a Dou Shi. The Dou Master goes to refine the alien fire. Xiao Yan can refine the alien fire because he practices Fenjue, and Yao Lao protector provides elixirs and things to contain the alien fire. Moreover, they do not swallow the alien fire at the beginning. They first eat the beast fire skill and then they swallow the Qinglian Earth Core Fire. Why does the protagonist refine the poisonous fire and rely on the swallowing attribute fighting skill transformed from the martial arts world? There is also the poisonous body of disaster. There are also the runes in the bronze coffin that cover the sky. The protagonist can understand it just by looking at it. What kind of wizard is the protagonist? Will Zishan still be able to understand Wu Shi Sutra later on?

There won't be a heroine like the previous one, right?

Don't write about Naruto in this book, there is no desire at all

I hope it won't be like the last book, which was so inexplicable that I couldn't even finish reading it.

Do you want to collect all the beauties? Many novels in the "Look at All Worlds and All Realms" genre are about collecting all the beauties.

Why do people want to fight for Wuhun Palace? Do you know what Bibi Dong is? He wants to destroy the entire continent, including civilians. Why should she destroy the continent? Because she can say that everyone in this world is evil, except Yu Xiaogang. If Yu Xiaogang wants to be emperor, he can be emperor. And her set of divine logic, regardless of the facts, aren't people on the entire continent evil? Because Bibi Dong herself is evil, everyone else is evil except Yu Xiaogang. There are three gods and women of Wuhun Palace, but you still want the common people to fight for Wuhun Palace? Help Wuhundian kill himself? Who controlled Wuhun Palace at that time and didn't have any points?

Write about the Ji family's bloodline returning to their ancestors and the Jiang family's bloodline returning to their ancestors and adding a chaotic body, directly becoming the invincible emperor.

Don't watch it with your brain in mind, you can still watch it! ! 😒😒😒

The hang-up is too big, the plot is too fast, and the threads are too messy! Can't you keep your composure and write one story after another? You can't retain anything by just looking at the flowers.

How could the author write such a stupid protagonist?