Mythic Manifestations, Starting with Erlang Shen

Author, let me give you a suggestion: arrange the roles of Awakening Dong Zhuo and Yuan Shao together, and have a game between Yuan Shen and Dong.

It's best not to casually accept that Zhuge Yuquan as your teacher. If his disciples practice according to his methods and become useless, he will turn around and expel his disciples from the disciples. This is too unethical. If there is no other explanation, it is completely unreasonable for the protagonist to become a disciple. After all, he can give up on the last disciple because he is useless, then he can also give up on the protagonist because of the pressure of someone who wants the protagonist to die.

It would be better to write about the Twilight of the Gods, where all the immortals and gods died, and then the successors inherited the Dharma. What you are doing now is to cultivate Dharma from beginning to end without any cultivation method. It is too weak. The two saints of Buddhism, the Three Pure Ones and the Six Emperors, are also cultivating some broken Dharma. If you say that you have achieved righteous results and condensed your own Dharma, I can barely accept it. Then there is also a cultivation method. What kind of nine kinds of Dharma are you doing? It's just a show, a cauldron of random stews, mythological fights are nothing more than divine passages, magic and spirit treasure formations, what's the use of having more magic signs, you inherit a monkey magic sign, you can't help but play with sticks, and then inherit a Zhenwu Emperor, then add a sword, then add a Zhen Yuanzi, many local books, add a universe in the sleeve, does it make sense? Do you want to cultivate three heads and six arms to hit people with a spiritual treasure in each hand? I can imagine that if you have multiple Kunpeng Dharma Appearances, you will be able to skyrocket ninety thousand miles away. Damn, just take out one of these top gods and it will be the top Taoist Dharma body, okay? Does Yang Jian only have one Heavenly Eye? Nine turns of mysticism, seventy-two transformations, full-level martial arts, and Yuqing Taoism. It's good if you can write them down. There are still nine. I don't know how you can come back to them in the middle and late stages.

Maybe I'm not suitable for reading this kind of article, or maybe I've read too much. Personally, I don't like this feeling of being unsteady all the time. There are always powerful enemies to fight the protagonist. Maybe I like invincible novels. I'll wait for the author's next book, and I may read this one in the future 🙂

Let me make a complaint I am just complaining. I hope you won't ban me because of this complaint. From a practical point of view Zhuge Liang's greatest strength should be his ability to strategize and strategize thousands of miles away. For the power, this is the most important thing As for Lu Bu, his general number is Flying General, if I remember correctly. In other words, from a power perspective, it is best for him to engage in mobile warfare. He was also surrounded when he died As for Diao Chan, judging from the information on the Three Kingdoms, she should be considered patriotic, right? As for charming others, that's secondary It's better to say that Wang Situ added charm to Diao Chan (I laughed to death myself when I mentioned this)

The recent content is very strange. Starting from Banjiexian, various masters from different levels are coming to the next session. The people who explain the teachings don't know what they are doing and don't want to follow them anymore.

There are only a few people who can survive the Zixiao Heavenly Tribulation. Tongtian himself has only taught Yunxiao, and Hongjun and other such people have also waited for countless epochs to get one. As soon as they saw the stone, they looked as if they could definitely beat the protagonist. Are they so confident in their teaching skills? Isn't this a "bad street" thing that exists in every major catastrophe? Are they so sure that this person can survive the Zixiao Heavenly Tribulation? Isn't this nonsense?

Can you make a suggestion? It would be fine if the author could express the potential and strength of the ability well. I've read a lot, but I can't tell whether the main character is the Dharma or the person who summoned the Dharma.

I feel like the author really has no concept of size. In the early stage, the size of the Heavenly King's Dharma was only 3,000-8,000 feet. When it stood up, it was 10,000 to 30,000 meters. It was over a thousand meters horizontally with one leg, right? Who can see what your Dharma image looks like? Even shrinking it ten times is a bit exaggerated. I don't know how to express it in this game. Do you use a wide-angle lens during a fight?

After reading it, most of the scenes are full of pretense and slap in the face, which is understandable. However, when it comes to themes like the Three Kingdoms, I feel that most readers would rather see wisdom, loyalty, and righteousness. You can even separate three factions to fight each other and then win over the protagonist. Write about the character of Cao Wei and the romance of the Shu Han (Wu 🐶 must not die well) and then push forward according to history. After all, the Han Dynasty is basically the Qin Dynasty, and you can open the mythology volume by searching for immortals.