Their Diaries Are Not Serious, but I Really Didn't Peek at Them.

The Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute. Assuming that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type approximately 134 words per minute. Since you are not the record holder, let's calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, 20 minutes to go to the toilet, and 40 minutes to wash up. -Hours of exercise, two hours to get inspired, and one hour of daze fishing, you should have nine hours to type, Linyi typed 435,780 words, based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so much content every day, what's going on? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to take such a rest, the author quickly got up to type!

I feel it is well written and has the motivation to keep reading. But there are three places that feel a little inconsistent when I look at them. I just mention them here without any pointers 😳. First, among the three main female characters currently appearing, they are more or less love-minded and nymphomaniacs, especially Xiji and the squad leader, who lust after the male protagonist. It makes people feel that these jk are a bit of a vase, just like they are just surrounding the male protagonist. The eldest lady is a little better, after all, she can point a knife at her own neck when she is in a hurry, but the role of monitor is indeed a bit stereotyped at present. Compared with the eldest lady and Qingmei, the current portrayal has basically no characteristics, like a simple love brain, but it makes me, who preconceivedly thought that the eldest lady and the male protagonist have locked cp, feel like a third party. Second, the male protagonist is a second-rate human being. Even if he experienced changes in his childhood, can he really not understand the thoughts of adolescent girls? It was raining heavily, and the squad leader purposely shared an umbrella with him instead of the eldest lady. Even if it is just a piece of wood, it should have some flavor, right? The ostrich mentality may be due to the escape from inner trauma, but if it continues like this, it will ultimately hurt others and ourselves. The current male protagonist behaves like a central air conditioner. He is very gentlemanly and Asasi to the girls around him, but he is completely unaware of the girl's thoughts. It feels a bit unreasonable. No matter how much emotional intelligence you see in this book, you should have it. The third is the cheat part of the diary, which has the function of voice and future prediction. It is very interesting, but I feel that relying too much on this cheat has lowered the portrayal of the hero's personality and charm. Without predicting the future, couldn't the male protagonist guess that the eldest lady's father was trying to scare him with a gun? Will he really give in and let the eldest lady go? Even with future memories? And without his voice, couldn't he guess that it was Qingmei who drew the comic? In fact, he could guess it and would knock on Qingmei's door. Now that I write it this way, it feels like Goldfinger made the male protagonist read his mind, so he will further care about Qingmei. Finally, this book can't be about a harem, right? Isn't the male protagonist afraid of being sunk into Tokyo Bay? I hope the author will take his time with the emotional line. I feel that there are too many emotional lines at the same time, resulting in some characters being very thin (the squad leader).

It's unexpectedly good, very comfortable, and the rhythm is just right. This is such a skill! But there are also shortcomings, that is, the image of the father (forgot his name) in the conflict with the Wada family is a bit stiff...

1. I have been born in two lives. I am 33 years old in total. I have read too many books. Don't you understand that the people around you have lust for me? They either don't fall in love, or they are alone, or they start a harem as a scumbag or get killed. At least give them an attitude. You can be a central air conditioner that heats the place all day long. You flirt but don't marry. All warm men have to take a back seat! 2. Although I know that the male protagonist and Qingmei have mental or physical problems, the treatment is too slow, and they are working as Riddler all day long. The specific injuries are not clear. The male protagonist also did not pay attention to the two hints from the female protagonist and the diary. He is too emotionally and intellectually slow. Are slow male protagonists still popular now? Deserters are better than this 3. Another I hope the main palace is Qingmei, and Qingmei was responsible for many rescues. The other female protagonists have no effect at all. Are they too useless? Especially the monitor, who is worse than a vase. She can't even ask for help or ask friends and teachers for things she can't do. She only had a crush on the protagonist when she was in the first grade. She has not grown at all, has not even made a friend, and is useless except for studying. 4. Overall, the writing is pretty good, and the description is relatively delicate. The above is the part that I feel is not good enough for my senses after reading it.

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The author's writing style is certainly good, but the title of the book is too homogeneous and unattractive.

I feel it's okay, there's nothing toxic about it, and the character of the protagonist is also perfect.

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Currently non-toxic, the plot is acceptable, and the characters are good

It really looks like a big river

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

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The writing is very good, but I suggest changing the title of the book. I didn't click on this title several times.

The diary is useful. The interaction with the heroine can also enhance the rationality of the harem. In addition, the Shura field can be adjusted. Originally, when Qingmei appeared, I thought the big one was coming. It was the kind of person who was very happy to see someone guarding a thief. As a result, the whole society was afraid that it would become more serious. Sanwu, there is no dramatic conflict at all, and the sense of expectation is greatly reduced. It is a bit outrageous to wait until later to realize that the family affection in your heart has turned into love 😅 Or you can continue to delay and let Qingmei enter the scene last, and regret that you started late. It is better than this way of handling it.

No wonder there are no posts. Central air conditioning is outdated. Bulldozers are now popular.