You Said I Was Just Training, So How Did I Cultivate a Heavenly Vajra Avatar?

Is this writing really by a new author? It's indeed a bit powerful, the characters are well created, and the rhythm is OK. I can't find any major flaws, but is this score too low? I remember the one from Baby on the rankings. MD banned me after saying a few words that he was too poisonous. The Qidian rankings are useless. They are all fake. A few people just gave 20,000 votes. How can those who haven't brushed up in the future compete with me? Qidian itself is conniving. Most of the books on the ranking list in previous years can be read, but in recent years, they cannot be read. I have never seen this situation in more than ten years of reading novels.

After reading Chapter 72, I feel a little speechless. Let me talk about the template. First, I listed an awesome person, Li Juefeng, and then his marksmanship transformed, shocking everyone; then I listed the second awesome person, Yang Yu, and then his bow skills transformed, shocking everyone; and then in Chapter 72, I listed an awesome person, Lin Wei. I haven't read the rest yet, but I guess it should be the transformation of his body skills, which shocked everyone again. The traces are too obvious. At present, the only motivation I want to continue reading is Liu Zili. Of course, the author's description in the article is quite good, very detailed, and the protagonist is very powerful, like the God of War! But the routine is too repetitive. Alas, it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless.

Please click on the avatar to view details. That book was very scolding. I have lost my parents many times.

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So far, it seems that the writing style is very good, at least better than that of Gaowu Era. It suffers the loss of newcomers and has no traffic.

It's very stable and the quality is quite high. To me, it's considered a fairy tale. After all, what can I say about the quality of Qidian's new books recently? I understand everything, that's all I can see.

The psychological description is quite detailed, but the characterization is not easy to evaluate. People are of course complex, but you are writing cool stories. Take Wu Shan, for example. In the early stage, he was an image of playing with privileges to take revenge on the protagonist, but later he suddenly transformed into a good teacher, and that Qian Cheng. , In the end, it's like turning back the grass, and it's like having a family together Another thing is that the brain is too small, the system article, and other people can only practice to xxx, but I can practice to the template of xxx, the brain is very important, not only the name of the brain, but also more details, why is the invincible method invincible, what is the difference between it and the ordinary law, these must be written down

By the way, why do people learn to use guns as soon as they start martial arts in school? A stick and a sword will last a lifetime. Among many weapons, guns are more difficult to learn.

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Because the main conflict later is between humans and monsters, and the BOSS is very powerful. I don't need to suppress the male protagonist. The conflict at the beginning is just a normal conflict to promote the plot. The stronger the male protagonist is, the better... After all, the setting is for the demons to gain the upper hand, so there is no need to suppress the male protagonist. It's just that some characters are more selfish, which seems to be detrimental to the male protagonist. Thank you for your understanding