You Promised to Practice Martial Arts, but You Have Mastered the Golden Body and Dharma?

Raise your arms and shout: Heaven is dead, Huang Tian shall stand. If you are in Jiazi, the world will be prosperous. This ruined government, all the noble families of this family, all of them were wiped out, and ten clans were killed.

After reading Chapter 2, to be honest, in this case, you should not write anything about fighting for the human race. You are a time traveler, and your sense of belonging to this world is not that strong. And your parents are martyrs, and the subsidy is only enough to attend an ordinary college. When you entered the martial arts class in the third year of high school, you were given a perfunctory and symbolic opportunity to enter the martial arts class. You were not even given a chance in the early stage. , The teacher also has all kinds of contempt for the students, not all of which can be said to be contempt, but simply ignoring, treating the people at the bottom like nothing. If there is a cult, in this case, there should be many people participating, especially the protagonist, whose parents are martyrs. You must not write anything about fighting bloody battles for the human race later on. It will move you and disgust the readers.

In this case, it would be awesome if the human race was not wiped out.

Based on the background written by the author, it is reasonable to have a world-destroying sect and rape half of the people.

First, objectively speaking, the author's writing is adequate, maybe not as good as a master, but it's not bad either. Second, I was not unhappy after reading Chapter 37. Let's not talk about the previous plots. Liu in the core still has enough resources for 6 months and has entered the lucky period, while the protagonist has arrived in two months. As a person with a background, I can know the talent of pig's feet after a little investigation. So how did she say what's not as good as pig's feet? Third, the reason why I can't help myself here is because the author has said before that the abandoned Zhao is nothing, it is the last time of this kind of plot. As a result, the Zhila conflict is forced here again Fourth, based on the first point, based on the general condemnation of this extremely unreasonable system and status quo in the comment area, I suggest the author to read the plot of the book by Tomato and other great gods. It is not only about internal fighting that can continue. Simply getting stronger and increasing the value of happiness can also make people want to stop. Fifth, internal fighting can exist, but please pay attention to the amount and frequency of description. It can be suppressed, but it is recommended not to describe too much about the protagonist's grievance. At least I skip watching these bloody plots now, which does not affect the plot at all, and there is less frustration and irritability. Otherwise, to be honest, I can't watch it. Chapter 37, if this book was still a seedling, I would have definitely brushed it off and wouldn't have read it. I'm more bored reading the book than reality. What a waste of time.

I can only say one thing, if there is a big enemy who cannot cooperate with each other under the current situation, or if there is still so much bullying internally, then it is impossible to defeat the enemy in this situation, because in this case, the people at the bottom will betray their own race for themselves. After all, their own race does not consider themselves, so why should I think about them?

After reading Chapter 14, this novel shows the dark side of society nakedly. Parents and martyrs can only survive with food and clothing. School quotas are all determined by default. Teachers who are role models target everyone for their own interests. It is too difficult 😭

Conflict creation is too old, and it's quite funny. However, since the author is a new author, I hope he will keep writing. Even if he writes a million words, he is an author who is guaranteed to complete the book. Besides, the character creation is not bad, and he will definitely get better and better as he writes!

I came in after reading the introduction of the title, but ended up reading the free chapter and scrolling through the subsequent title. Where is your martial arts sublimation function? Why did it become an ordinary experience value plug-in? Why do you have some talents and skills that are different from ordinary people? Why upgrade violently? According to the settings in the introduction and the novel, special talents and skills are only available at full level. As a result, when the skill reaches the full level, it is already invincible in the current map. It is basically There is no need for the talents and skills provided by plug-ins. What settings do you have? Give the protagonist some skills that can be maxed out by just practicing, and some extraordinary talents and skills from plug-ins. Your title and introduction are completely disconnected from the content. It is already off topic, isn't it? Author, when are you going to give the protagonist the skills in the introduction? How come you have to practice each skill layer by layer?

I feel like I have been suppressed all the time, and then I was suppressed again after I turned around. I really accepted it. I have always been a pig 🙂. I may change it later, but when I saw that I was accepted by the leader as a disciple and suppressed again, I couldn't stand it anymore. Is it really that bad? 🙂

After reading part of it, I thought that with such a dark background, either Goldfinger would be so powerful that he would break the shackles and flip the table to become a rebel. Either the ideal of world harmony is lofty. Don't hold it in for a long time and then just pretend to be slapped in the face. The oppression of the world has not been avenged, and the bottom class has not changed.

It's a pity that the plot was a bit discouraging at the beginning, but it gets better and better later on.

Others have suppressed the pig's feet, but the pig's feet are still clumsy. The author must have never been to work. You must show what you want and tell others that you are not to be trifled with. In my first job, the leader of my company pooped on me all day long. The whole day was very depressing. But a colleague in the company bought a BMW 3 Series, and everyone including the boss was polite to him. Later, I also bought one, and those people who were scorning me all day later changed their attitudes. What I want to say is that everyone is depressed enough in life, but the author, you still write like this. It seems you don't want this book to do well.

Turn to the back and subscribe to a chapter to speak. I wasn't happy at the beginning, alien invasion, human crisis, I didn't teach high school for two years, and suddenly I posted a video before the exam and asked them to practice immediately. Since I thought they were all poor students, why did they practice? If human beings were well-ordered, how difficult would it be to lay the foundation with a simple physical education class once a week? Since you can watch videos posted online, what is the impact of posting videos early? Human crisis, there should be limited order, so this group of people, and the descendants of the martyrs, can simply survive one or two generations, and how can the lower class not have basic training methods?

As for this book, try not to read it in front of it, otherwise, you might not be able to get through it.

The author's writing style is good, and the early plot is quite interesting, but he doesn't seem to be able to write about secret realms. I suggest that newcomers skip to chapter 88 after encountering the curse plot. There are plot adjustments made by the author based on feedback... I have to say that this author's response is very timely. Basically, there is a big problem. He just made two suggestions and started to adjust the plot. He is a new author who listens to advice (๐•̆·̭•̆๐)

I feel that the protagonist's encounter in the early stage is the author's attempt to prevent the protagonist from becoming bonded, so as not to write a lot of plots about me helping this group of people after becoming a talent, and one person becoming a chicken and a dog flying to the sky. The early stage is just to create a dim world view, and the protagonist's success is the result of his own efforts.

Why is it that it's always like cooking cold rice and the plot is always watery?

The hatred at the beginning is very good, but the solution always feels within a limited range, reasonable and legal... Obviously he is a warrior, but he is not wild at all.

There are a few villains in the early stage who are quite disgusting. I will definitely let them all die. It will not be an easy death, yes, it will not be an easy death. And as the protagonist develops, they will not be rejuvenated and come back to disgust the male protagonist. They are just waiting to die!

This book only becomes interesting after chapter 30.

Why is it that the protagonist sleeps for a month and a month so many times... The transitional plot can be summed up in one go, so why does the protagonist always fall asleep...

? No, it was cut off as soon as I came in.

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author! 🙂

Indeed, you can only view them after thirty pictures, and you can skip the previous ones.

The title sounds like a cool article, but the content is slow-paced and the structure is a bit old-school.

I've almost finished reading the awesome stuff in that introduction and haven't seen it yet...

Those who came for the Golden Body Dharma Appearance only saw an upgrade in experience points, and the martial arts system did not develop towards physical training. Let's look at the author's reply. I'm quite worried about the future of this book. I'm obsessed with rigid poisonous points such as curses, colleges, etc. The plot arrangement is abrupt, and I don't know if there is an outline or a detailed outline. However, the advantage is that the author listens to others' advice, is willing to learn, and makes revisions. He always supports new authors. The writing style is a bit immature, but if he can keep it updated and give a decent ending, it can be considered a good debut book. In short, the experience upgrading in the early stage is refreshing, and the ending of the villain is also neat and tidy, which is good. The main poisonous point of the curse is completely unreasonable. It is like working hard for a long time to reach the first place and then being rewarded with a rocket. I can understand that I want the protagonist to have a strong bloodline inheritance and powerful skills for the future, but also to suppress it to avoid being too strong or to induce motivation for the next stage of struggle. But in fact, it can be handled better. It is recommended that the system/hanging can offset the side effects and only retain the benefits for the protagonist, and the compensation from the superior unit can be implemented on the protagonist instead of just to the entire city. In the next plot, the college joins a club and encounters the problem of resource allocation. It goes to learn alchemy, and then destroys a race to support another race. In isolation, it is not a big problem, but it is out of touch with the previous one! Look at the beginning of martial arts training, then bloodline, and then alchemy. The martial arts system is too confusing. If you want to fit the title, the main focus is on the golden body. Bloodline can increase physical strength and body shape; alchemy can promote martial arts and horizontal training. Use one feature as the main axis to avoid having a hammer here and a stick here and there, resulting in fragmentation. Another possibility is to change the title: Martial Arts, Starting from Gan Experience, or something like that, but this kind of title is highly homogeneous and a bit aesthetically fatigued. The author's writing power may not be able to beat those books that can master the cool points of Gan Emperor's writing. Summary: I deceived some people who wanted to learn martial arts to become a golden body, and fed them Xiang with upgraded experience. No wonder the readers are losing. Take care, the author, and I hope your next book will be better.

Looking forward to the follow-up plot, update soon 😡

When I looked at the title, I thought it was the assembly line article over there, but after reading it, I found that it wasn't.