Raging Fire Squad, 1990

You're just here to make a living, don't change. Hong Kong drama is enough to write for a lifetime 🙂. If you can't switch to Infinite Stream, it's fine. At least it's much better than turning to Xianxia or Fantasy. Those are completely two tracks.

Gangs are not like gangs, security is not like security, and mercenaries are not like mercenaries. Doing things is still the same as gangsters, it looks embarrassing and below the standard.

Haha, Mengjun, Hong Kong TV series is still your base. I really can't stand your demon sect. Hidden Dragon in Yihai

How come no one writes about hunting down the protagonist who can't cheat? When the protagonist says that rebirth is the biggest hangup, because he is the protagonist, it is the biggest hangup. At night, I directly put a sack on him and said in his ear: What age are we in, time travel and rebirth, don't cheat, I'll take your ass.

To be honest, it would be better to stop. Tell me what you think of this book. First of all, it started well, but the protagonist rose too quickly, and the relationship with the star was not handled well. The protagonist's status is actually quite high, but he still pretends to be humble in front of celebrities, which makes me feel very disconnected while watching it. The second point is the handling of the protagonist's company team. The black and white team is indeed a bit awkward. People who are not sophisticated enough do not understand the protagonists at all. For people who are not sophisticated enough, what is the point of dividing them into black and white? After all, they all belong to the same company. As long as your hands are dirty and your whole body is black, and outsiders want to deal with you, there must be evidence. Without evidence, you are white. So it makes no sense to distinguish black and white in your own company. Then there is the development route. The author probably wants to do security business in HK's basic market and do PMC outside. The main thing is that I still don't distinguish between the development of security and the development of PMC. The author wants to do both. So it will look like a hammer in one place and a stick in the other. Also, the author still doesn't know enough about PMC. After all, every PMC is a product of ZZ. This thing cannot survive without relying on the five major companies. So if you want to develop PMC, you definitely don't have to be able to fight it. If you can fight it, you can withstand a few rounds of hellfire. Moreover, all the large-scale tasks of PMC are linked to the international situation. If you don't understand the game between countries, it will be useless to write it down and it will not stand up to scrutiny. If the protagonist's main line is to develop security, HK's basic base is not qualified. After all, HK's most chaotic period is almost over. Without terrorists, no one robbing banks, and without constant gunshots every day, how can you develop the security industry. The future development of the security industry will not require people to be bodyguards, but will need to have joint law enforcement powers to provide security for major banks and financial institutions. When necessary, you can perform tasks such as urban anti-terrorism. But the city of HK does not have such conditions and does not support the protagonist to continue to develop the security industry.

Let's not step out of our comfort zone, okay? Let's go back and continue writing Hong Kong variety novels. I want to read Hong Kong variety novels. Let's not break through ourselves, okay? People have worked hard to transform. They have carefully checked the information. What about you? I'm still writing in the same old way, taking it for granted. I still want to transform. I've been fooling around and fooling myself. Since I can't put in the effort, let's go back to the comfort zone. PS: If I keep writing like this, I will lose all my old fans. There are several books on Eunuch, and soon all the casual fans will be defeated. Your writing career is about to be over. Are you sure? ? ?        😅😅

Do you know why your grades are not as good as before? Because it's unreasonable, brother! Then dance without a golden finger and still step on shit! No matter how you look at it, there will be drama! Nowadays, readers are not making up their own minds in the ancient times. I only watched half of it without paying and couldn't stand it anymore! How do you ask others to pay? I paid for Sir Zhuang's book all the way to the end!

The previous book failed to make a big splash, so it was cut off and no one said anything. This book is a small change from the original track, and it seems to be a bit of a loser. When I cut it last time, I said it was shameless and I wanted to open a small account and start over. Everyone also advised me not to do this, which was understandable. If this book is cut, I feel that I will really have to open a small account. At least I personally will not pursue new books. Even if you just force yourself to complete dozens of chapters and finish the book unfinished, it would be better than just cutting it off like this. Writing poorly is a small problem, not taking readers seriously is a big problem. If the author can read this book review, I hope he will consider it carefully.

Writing about Hong Kong variety shows is just a few stories. It's okay to write one, but not enough. I haven't seen anyone writing about Korean and Japanese variety shows now. Besides, there were only a few people in Hong Kong in the 1980s. It was such a small area and there were so many unfilled projects for reclamation. The underworld is just about fighting and making trouble. To put it bluntly, the underworld on TV is LOW. What kind of street knives are there? It's okay when you are a teenager. But when you are older and in the Internet society, you feel that there are N ways to kill people. So why is Lifeng's score so good? What kind of knife is used in the era of guns?

If the author doesn't know how to write, let me write it. The plot is advanced like this. The mainland is used as the plot to recruit talents, Xiangjiang is used as the hometown to work intensively, and it is used as a window to achieve cooperation for the mainland. At the same time, PM Defense Company participates in international affairs such as Africa and the Middle East. It can also be written as a military-themed novel to contend with global terrorist organizations. Don't say that it will not work, it is too bad!