Enlisting for the Second Time, Starting at the Top

The physical abilities displayed by this protagonist are achievable by humans, but the result is strange. In our unit, the fastest time for a 10-kilometer half-training run is 40 minutes, and the slowest is 45 minutes. The equipment is relatively average. But in an army group, you did 51 pull-ups on the horizontal bar. You call that average? I can't believe it. What kind of unit is so amazing? No word games, just hard pull-ups without rest. How many people in an army group can do 51 pull-ups?

Holy crap, you recruits don't do morning exercises before breakfast? This is the first time I've ever seen this.

This introduction is so awkward. Joining the army for his sick sister? Did you join to get rich?

I really can't take it anymore, all sorts of toxic spots are flying everywhere. I can't even understand your logic. The synopsis says he joined the army because his younger sister was sick. Before even seeing the content, my first thought was, "How much do you earn in the army each month? Enough to pay for your sister's medical treatment?" The content is utter garbage.

My buddy read through the latest chapter in just a couple of days, skipping several chapters at a time, and the more he read, the more he felt like he'd wasted all the points he'd spent. The military story was written like a typical urban romance novel, full of terrible plot points. Yeah, I've decided to quit.

This protagonist is too overpowered! I ran 20 kilometers in 7 minutes at 15, and by 18 I was already doing four-digit pull-ups. At 20, I went to a shooting range abroad for my first experience with firearms and pistols, running 3 kilometers and getting perfect scores of 10 rings every time. On the way back, the plane crashed, and I got out of the cockpit and helped carry the plane back. Can't you give the protagonist some kind of cheat code? It feels awkward watching him.

180Cm tall and 45kg? That's ridiculous!

Is this really the military? It doesn't match my impression of the military at all. Can you just talk freely in formation without calling out "report"?

Writing a book and then engaging in regional discrimination, you're doomed.

You've already enlisted twice, why don't you hurry back to your old unit? What are you even writing while dawdling around in recruit training?