This Paladin Is so Despicable!

I would like to give my opinion, there is too little dialogue and plot. I often push the narration to introduce a few sentences. The narration is very boring.

Concept map of Lilith after unblocking

Concept map of St. Joanna, AI map found online.

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Damn it, this book has the potential to become a fairy grass, 😅

I was diverted here. I felt that I wrote it well in the early stage. I shouldn't have such poor results. After I finished it, I realized that there was no clear main line to build expectations. At the same time, it often felt like an expository essay. Starting from the Elf chapter, I jumped from one glance to a hundred lines.

I saw 58. It is currently non-toxic, but there is a lot of water. I have a feeling that the pig's feet seem to be very powerful. The gods and demons can come and go quickly, but they don't seem to be very powerful. Many chapters describe trivial matters that are not very important, that is, there is water but there is no water, like water.

In the desolate and dark underground, there is an endless unknown, and what I see is a race with shining eyes of hope and spiral noises from time to time The first sound is thanks to the recruiter who brought a vast and lofty teaching building to hold the precious critical weapons. The second sound is to let the seeds containing merit tightly embrace the abyss. The third sound is to thank you for your grace, allowing us to have the sacred spiral horns. The fourth tone is to allow us to have a deeper understanding of those cruel, paranoid and selfless philosophies. The fifth tone is to let all the foolish things that are not enterprising be purified by our sacred infinite desire. The sixth tone, thank you boss for granting us emergence and allowing our talents to die out and grow uncontrollably. The seventh tone, I appreciate that blasphemy allows us to have thoughts, so that our madness can be truly and vividly displayed. The eighth tone, thanks to the shining dark gems in the abyss, gives us the original capital of production and reproduction. The Ninth Tone, in order to allow employees to feel the supreme ambition, have courage and wisdom. The tenth sound, in order to make the omnics whose death is insignificant feel the dignity of life. The eleventh sound makes the zombies carrying mycelium wander around the world and keep looking around. The twelfth tone, let death and survival become our eternal illnesses. The thirteenth call, the big boss is among us! Tai Sui Tian, ​​supreme spiral, yes, yes, yes Gate of truth, lèse-majesté die, die, die

It's obviously a story about Le Zi, but as soon as the heroine comes out, she instantly turns into a licking dog. Her style suddenly changes, just like shit is put in the cake. Moreover, the heroine's appearance is too sudden and forced. It would be better for the succubus to be the heroine.

This writing style should be from SF? After all, Brave Demon King has the most western fantasy romance light novels over there, and the settings are very interesting, but I just feel that the writing style is a bit uninteresting and not rigorous enough. It should be similar to the fact that there is no in-depth description of the characters, and there is no foreshadowing in many cases, which cannot leave the reader's impression.

Maybe a little thinner, but this is more in line with my impression of Wright

Dedicate everything to the Amber King😢

It is an above-average work. The main character is lively and enjoyable, but the rhythm of the plot, especially the emotional line, is slightly poor. It cannot withstand scrutiny. It feels rather abrupt and has little foreshadowing. For example, the emotional development between the male protagonist and the saint is particularly abrupt. , Suddenly determined his feelings for the saint, but the previous descriptions have always avoided him like a snake and a scorpion. It would have been much better if the two were foreshadowed in the early stage as happy enemies, including the princess's love for Chimera's sister. There is also a lack of foreshadowing. But this book is worth reading just because of the protagonist's saucy actions. It's very enjoyable and probably an above-average book.

In the novels I have read, except for the Holy Light Church in Sword of the Dawn, the rest of the Holy Light Churches are either rigid or villainous. In this novel, the Holy Light Church is the most lively and capable. It seems to tell me what age we are in and still play the traditional church.

Hahaha, I watched the animation in AB. Come on, author.

(As for the number of female protagonists, it's okay as long as the author doesn't give away any female protagonists.) For those who kidnap the author and insist on having only one female protagonist, I want to say that there must be more female protagonists, and there must be more female protagonists😋

I looked at a few pictures and this is definitely a fucking trumpet. The one who successfully pulled off his vest, remember to come and give me some incense, don't think about it, don't go to Sanjiang to die,

Before the advent of the Holy Light, it looked okay, full of humor and fun. Let's just talk about the plots of the two heroines: The first heroine Lilith, including the female supporting characters who appear in the first hundred chapters, are very nice in every aspect. But the plot of the other heroine Joanna, hiss... Was it because she used too much force... It looked a bit uncomfortable and it was difficult to stretch.

Without further ado, I highly recommend it. It's enjoyable and philosophical. It's worth watching again and again.

It doesn't look like it was written by a newbie, it's too smooth 😍

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Please continue to update the author. This book brings me a lot of joy. I hope there will be a complete and good ending.

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I would like to make a comment. Although it seems that it is for the sake of tone, some of the sentences are broken up so awkwardly. Do they have to be separated by commas?

I rarely comment on it, but this book is really fun

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All 5 monthly votes have been cast, can you write faster? The fun I was watching suddenly disappeared. I was so upset.

I looked at the update time. I've been keeping it for almost a month. Why are there only more than 20 chapters? I remember you didn't update it three times a day 🙂

The New Year is here. May your life be picturesque and filled with happiness every day. (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡