Capture the BOSS Template at the Beginning

If a player is killed by the protagonist once, it will take a longer time to log in to the game, otherwise it will easily crash. Don't give them the ability to infinitely resurrect (extend it with time). Later, you can add the ability to ban the player account to the protagonist. Anyway, this must be handled well.

The typical starting point is no brains and no spirit, and is better than others in everything. I just want to know, if this is really the case, why would anyone choose other professions? Is it true that there are smart people only in Qidian.

Boss template, eat souls to become stronger, master alchemy, start with liquid bomb. Confirmed to be Bai Ye🤓

It is very unreasonable and evil that the arrival of the gods is faster than the progress in the previous life. It is understandable that you alone influence the federation and lead the federation. How do you arrange the progress of the world? The gods have not allowed Shia to speed up the progress of their arrival. As for you, the level of combat power is your personal business. What you hate most is that in order to improve the progress, everything must be slower than the first generation in the previous life. It is like the plot of Long Aotian must appear when the development reaches its peak, and there must be obstacles at the peak. It is impossible to just throw a big one to them.

I don't want to read the protagonist's name when I see it. What kind of unscrupulous parent would give his son such a name?

1. The alchemist profession is very rich in your writing, but other professions are pitifully weak in my opinion. Although you can use the BOSS template to refute me, but as far as I can see in the chapters, neither Mawson nor the clown has any special abilities at all, which seems very inconsistent 2. The fighting scenes are incomprehensible and the special effects are good. But in the fighting scenes, I really don't know what the protagonist and the enemy are doing. This is very fatal! I personally feel that if the novel is good, even if the scenes are not good and the action scenes are good, people will feel that this book is worth reading. You can refer to "The Atlas of Heaven and Man" by The Misguided Person. These are the most prominent points, and I don't write novels, I am a consumer, thank you!

Player group portrait? Or is it a group portrait that went through the game and then the fourth natural disaster intervened? This type of group portrait can be written well, so there is only one for now. God-level mechanic? Others…

It's a bit like a reincarnation paradise + a super mechanic. It's still attractive, but the plot is too plain and straightforward. Then there are inexplicable crazy restrictions in places. You have a high-end AI and undead workers. It stands to reason that you can attack wildly at will, so I don't know why you have to limit the protagonist's ability to attack. It is probably because you are afraid of losing your combat power. Level breakthrough is a bit like an experience bar. If you want to upgrade, just upgrade. If you don't want to upgrade, just save experience. Neither NPCs nor players can do it, only the protagonist can. This is a bit too strong. The protagonist transforms into this. If you want to change, you can change. If you don't want to change, you can stay the same. I won't say it. Then you have to explain clearly how many blood bars you have. Is it one tube of blood or two tubes of blood? Can they be shared? The younger brother next to the protagonist is too strong. There are only two SSSs in the whole continent, or a total of 5. There are only two ss people around you. If there is centralization, they should all go to the central government. If you don't go to the central government, you will hang out in the local area. The main thing is what equipment you have at the beginning to check your talent. Your world prioritizes protecting geniuses, so it stands to reason that all S-level people should go to the central government for secret training, otherwise they will give priority to it. There is also the villain, a secret organization that can rob and kill minors. Not to mention anything else, 55 open. When you meet a highly talented person, half agree and half kill. You can't find out in the first year, and you can't find out later? It has long been destroyed. There is also leveling. If you know the protagonist, you can upgrade by killing monsters. The minimum experience is 1. Can you catch ants all over the map and poison the protagonist to death? Is this okay? I can't say I reached the full level in one day, but I feel relaxed. It is known that taking drugs can break through the limits of the human body. The protagonist is lacking in nothing, and the organization is cultivating him like crazy. The protagonist is about to break through the golden barrier without even taking a single pill. Either you can write a script that is easy to kill if someone discovers it, or you can write a script like Samsara Paradise, half indigenous, half reincarnation. You, the protagonist, have the right time, place, and people. You don't need to show off. You can find a place to raise bees or ants. You don't need to buy materials, and you can directly upgrade like crazy. Upgrade to Legend first and play casually. If you break through silver to gold, if you fail and fall down the level, just keep grinding again and again. Change to a simple one, because you can level up, even if you don't level up, you still have a guaranteed experience of 1, You are not bad at this, you still need to polish the script, and the writing will be better if it is more detailed.

Shuo Luoning couldn't stand it anymore, thinking he was just mocking himself for being a capitalist. Didn't think so

It's only sixteen chapters, and I'm describing the protagonist as a stingy money-saving maniac. Is it interesting?

Can you not write about a woman in such detail? Why is a female supporting character so meticulously written when the protagonist is not treated like this? I wish I could write out every move and every expression of hers. If you say it sounds good, you are just trying to make it count. If you say it sounds bad, it will be the beginning of a harem stallion.

I haven't read it yet, so I'm going to criticize it first, calling it an epidemic.

(The following pictures are taken from League of Legends: Tyrant Mecha Skin Series) The Tyrant Universe was the development goal of people of that era. For this reason, mechas based on heroes were born... Batian Things The initial No. 0 Monster of the piece: [Deep Sea Cancer-Urgot] The Tyrant Mecha No. 0 Built by the scientist [Explosion Wizard] Giggs, known as the "Ultimate Land Fighter" [Batian Zero-Sion]; Two Tyrant Mechas (old enemies) created by scientist [Great Inventor] Heimerdinger through biomodification and mechanical bionics: They are: Tyrant Mecha No. 01, The first stealth combat unit, composed of insect monsters A mechanical bionic mecha based on the beast, equipped with a flying device and a folding device: [The Tyrant Alien—Kazik]; The second stealth combat unit, specially developed for urban combat, uses large hunting monsters as experimental subjects. After being abandoned, it becomes aware of The biotech mecha that awakens the mechanical transformation module: [Batian Warrior—Rengar]; After the monster crisis, Mecha Zero went berserk. For this reason, [Explosion Genius—Giggs] and [Great Inventor—Heimerdinger] jointly developed the Tyrannical Robot. Tianjia Unit No. 06, The "Batian Behemoth—Malphite" known as the "Land War Fortress"; Subsequently, [Mechanical Enemy—Rambo], who had conflicts with the two, also joined the cause of fighting against Unit Zero, but refused to cooperate and instead used Da Yili independently developed and produced the Tyrant Mecha Unit 13, known as the "Strongest Sword Demon in History - Aatrox"; Since the Monster Crisis and the Zero Incident, stronger and more advanced Tyrant Mechas have emerged. …, They are respectively: The special model ASOL-13, titled [Tyranosaur God-Aurelion Sur], is a huge mobile mothership, carrying tens of thousands of staff, soldiers, and land anti-monster vehicles. Under his huge body there are a large number of weapons. Even if he is allowed to deal with the biggest monsters, it is more than enough; [The Tyrant War Eagle—Gario] and [The Tyrant Chariot—Urgot]; ps: I hope the above picture source can inspire the author😁

I always feel that the writing is not smooth and the reading is not smooth. I often don't understand what the author is trying to express. In some places, the context is not connected, which makes it look very uncomfortable. When I saw the Scarlet Encirclement and Suppression, which quartermaster described his plan, I went back and forth for a long time and still couldn't understand it. I didn't understand the reason. And many things are not clearly expressed, such as the improvement of actual combat power by attributes, the specific acquisition of skill points, and why the skill points are so precious in the early stage and can be used casually.

The number of legends is too small, just two. The legendary class is obviously broken. And there are so many golden people. Even more awesome are the hundreds of legends of the Sea Clan. This is obviously unreasonable. What's even more unreasonable is that the old sword master has almost become a god. But as far as his outstanding situation is concerned, it should be that the old sword master is about to become a god, there are a few competitive legends, and then there are a lot of legends. There were no major disasters before. So the number of legends cannot be so small.

There are a lot of illogical places, and I am very clever. I am given a task, and each person is given 200 gold coins, and I want to return the money to the capitalist. I am very clever.

The butterfly effect of the protagonist is the biggest loophole. The fundamental reason is that the author does not want the protagonist to have the strongest range nearby at the same stage. Many authors force the protagonist to become the butterfly effect of the entire book. Anyway, he inexplicably encounters a powerful enemy in advance ...... [The butterfly effect of the protagonist directly breaks the bottom of the worldview and creates a loophole that spans the entire worldview. In fact, even if you throw in an ordinary person, as long as you know this loophole, this ordinary person can become a top-notch person in a few seconds. No training is needed, only loopholes are needed]

Has anyone seen a game in which the player cannot clear the level? The most brainless novel is that the player arrives. How can one life be played with countless lives?

(The following pictures are taken from League of Legends: War Mech series skins) Foreword: [Join the glorious evolution together! First of all, the creator of the Battlefield Legion [Mechanical Pioneer-Victor]; Then there are various models of mass-produced Battlefield Mecha series: [Battlefield Legion Arms Generation Number]: 1. [Battlefield Mecha—Urgot]; 2.[Battlefield Butcher—Skarner]; 3.[Battlefield Turret—Kog'Maw]; 4. [Battlefield Cleanup—Vel'Koz]; 5.[Battlefield Terror—Korgath]; 6.[Battlefield Titan—Nasus]; 7.[Battlefield Demon—Zach ; The last is the special model: 8. [Battlefield Mage-Zerath]; ps: I hope the above picture source can inspire the author😁

The description of the battle is too awkward, and the protagonist's profession and his fighting style are completely unmatched.

(The following pictures are taken from the League of Legends: Forbidden Stone Statue Series) The following is an introduction to the units: The first is the famous heroic unit, which was created by the [Construction Faction] of the Durang family: [Colossus of Justice - Galio]; Then there is another heroic unit, which was created by the [Sculpting Faction] of the Durang family: [Shrinker] -Gris]; The following are the unit units [Broadwing Stone Statue] [Hound Stone Statue] [Stag Statue] and [Collider Stone Statue]; Then there is the auxiliary unit [Forbidden Stonemason - Barron] ps: I hope the above picture source can inspire the author 😁

By Chapter 300, the player is dispensable and has completely become a pendant. There is no sense of immersion and it is no longer much different from an ordinary alien world. Is it reasonable for a boss to take risks everywhere and take risks? !

After writing so many words, the evaluation is so low. . Not recommended.

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Come on, iron

Does anyone know what the levels are for bronze, silver, gold, upper, middle, and lower? It seems a bit confusing. How is level 38 calculated as the median for silver?

Hasn't it been cut already? Why did you fake the corpse again🤔

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Just like the title!

You can write about the mystery of a broken fetus, or a civet cat exchanges for a prince, don't come here to occupy the magpie's nest After reading online articles for more than ten years, my taste has become more and more discerning, and I can't read many of them after flipping over and over. It is because of soul piercing and entering other people's bodies. Is it really necessary to continue this tradition? Or you have one body and two souls, merged into one, or the aborigines pick up the legacy of the time traveler Reaffirm the subject in this way, one body and two sides Don't tell me that you don't feel immersed in the beginning of the aborigines, that's bullshit. Look at the good works written by some great gods, but the aborigines have a bad beginning? It's purely due to lack of writing skills, don't blame the indigenous people and time travel As long as the story is good enough, who cares about these side details Just like some people don't mind soul traveling and can read more online articles Unfortunately, the first three chapters have excluded me, I can't see it, it doesn't matter anymore But looking at it rationally, It might as well be a good thing if you don't have to read it Wouldn't it be nice to have less expenditure and more profit Take a look, look at the chicken feathers By the way, some online articles are not good in content, but the non-soul-transformation start It can only be said to be a pity, the author should practice more, there will be people who will pay for your results, including me