Swallowed Star: My Clone Evolves into a Primordial Chaos Behemoth

Don't believe those who say it needs a female supporting character or a female lead; nobody in the Devouring Fandom reads that.

Simultaneously practice spear and sword techniques, then use the sword to execute the sword techniques! 🙂🙂🙂

I can accept having multiple female leads, but I can't accept a protagonist who's a simp. He clearly has the best talent to join the Ultimate Martial Arts Academy, but he insists on going to the military and being controlled by others.

What's the point of having an Earthling as the female lead? We'll have to waste a ton of resources feeding her, and she'll even be involved in jealousy and rivalry. What kind of era is this writing style?

Will joining the military restrict my freedom?

You can write female characters, but don't write them just for the sake of writing. If they lack originality and are easily forgotten after a few chapters, it seems too contrived. I've only read about thirty chapters, and there are only four or five female characters, and each one is so captivating that you can't help but stare. What are you trying to do? You're devouring fanfiction, not creating a harem bulldozer.

That's too cruel! In chapter 120, when the wife wanted a child, he created a clone to have sex with her, right?! Are you planning to assign three clones to each wife, each penetrating three holes?! And then you'd be standing there telling your clones to go harder, wouldn't you?

Never been in a relationship before? If you can't write romance scenes, don't force it.

Nowadays, there are very few female supporting characters or main characters in Swallowed Star fanfiction, resulting in it becoming increasingly boring and uninteresting to read. Plus, the anime has introduced many beautiful female characters. In Swallowed Star fanfiction, the protagonist is the only one cultivating, to the point of becoming mentally impaired.

Swallowing the Stars also has a harem theme, I'm speechless 🤓☝️