Do You Use a Gun in a Martial Arts Game?

This book reminds me of "Lazy Bird" in terms of settings, especially the anti-virus software one. The author can go to Lazy Bird to poach someone from the book 🙂

The writing isn't good, it's not fun, the subject matter is pretty good. If you're in your right mind, you'll know if a martial arts game is worth selling guns. After decades of research, it's still in the musket stage, not to mention the extraordinary weapons and equipment of mechas! These items can also be brought into reality, they are no longer simply extraordinary, they can directly reach the stars and the sea.

When I saw the contract to sell weapons, I decided to give up. This contract was a loss of power and an insult to the country. As the only weapons provider, it is a pure seller's market. Can I sign this? Funny!

My grades are so bad

Your value is too much. The actual gold coin ratio is 1.4W soft girl coins to 1 gold coin. If you use pure seller's market props, you can earn 10 to 20 times the profit. Then there is the experience value of untalented people and the punishment mechanism of the game world, which is purely nt. This is not ten years ago, when you couldn't grasp the numerical values ​​well and you couldn't write well. If you want to write cool articles, you can't be too brainless.

The writing is messy, and the protagonist's role has already passed seven or eight chapters, so the protagonist is a technological item and extraordinary item extractor?

It seemed okay before, but after entering the first dungeon, I felt like the protagonist had lost his mind 🤫

. . . It's weird and makes me feel uncomfortable. The protagonist sells things as if he has never seen the world before. The price is too low. The protagonist doesn't consider the risks to which he is exposed. He only counts pure benefits and it's cheap, and he doesn't do any risk assessment. How should I put it, it feels like a kid rushing into the busy city with money. Not that the protagonist can say that he can prepare what he will eat for the rest of his life.

It's like playing house. The subject matter is very good, which made me want to join in. However, after reading dozens of chapters and then reading the comments, I felt that all these comments should be deleted. Yes, yes, yes, I won't listen, I won't listen, whatever you say is right.

The span is a bit big, games, martial arts, and extraordinary. In the latest chapter, it seems that you are already planning to skip the games and martial arts and write about extraordinary directly. There is too much money.

The bug is so big that players ranked 40 or above in the world can still enter the level 30 dungeon. Ranking in the 40s should be at least level 100.

Give yourself a day off😁😁 Happy New Year to everyone

I encourage new writers to think more carefully later, and don't take too many people's opinions, because they are all meaningless. If you crowdfund your book, you will eventually become a real eunuch.

It crashed as soon as I entered the dungeon. Alas, I quite liked it before.

Chapter 77 is still level 17, so what's the use of your level?

It's almost the same if you post urban articles. It's not too much to complain about. The previous ones are mainly about selling firearms and being an arms dealer. Why put this thing in the game area Wouldn't it be okay to post it in the urban area and call it "Selling arms in the martial arts world of extraordinary games"?

It's a good subject, but it's poorly written. It is recommended to go to the bar and ask for an outline to reduce the poisonous points.

I've received the site, so I need to invest as soon as possible.

It's not that I'm trying to be arrogant. What I wrote in the first 20 photos is OK and quite satisfactory. You didn't say anything about your unilateral contract for selling large quantities of weapons. Just treat it as patriotic. I wonder if you have carefully looked at the data on your weapons sales? I really don't know if it's you who have no brains or I have no brains. If you want to write about patriotic feelings, don't treat the protagonist like a fool and write like a normal person. As for where to sell weapons, the protagonist can rent them to relevant units. After all, there is a systematic contract and there is no fear of breach of contract. If the relevant organizations want to study it, they can sell it directly to them, instead of accepting an unequal contract like a fool and then selling it to them at a low price for dismantling and researching You can write with your eyes closed, but we must read it with your eyes open and listen with your ears open. When I first read this book, I thought it was a good book. The subject matter felt quite interesting, but the result...

I thought I was enjoying myself with weapons, but it turned out to be a weapons dealer.

What I wrote in the front is okay, but what is the rubbish in the back?

A bit messy, no central theme

Is the Thunder Armor the leather armor in martial arts?