Demon Daoist: Starting by Feeding on the Essence of the Five Organs

Indecisive, talks too much nonsense, bad review

Actually, it's quite well-written! Upholding principles is good, and she didn't do anything overly saintly. She has a chivalrous spirit reminiscent of Uncle Nine's wandering ways! She's not pedantic or anything! So many negative reviews? Does this mean that nowadays, you can't be a protagonist without playing a bad guy and doing some bad things?

Killing a robber with such indecisiveness, leaving it to the authorities to handle—if you kill him, who will know? It's practically a waste of time in a time-traveling world.

If you're an honest person in reality, then disregard what I said. If you're not, then shut up with this nonsense about being a good person. May everything go as you wish. Reality is nothing but shackles; without a gun, there's no way to fight. With a knife in hand, the urge to kill arises naturally.

Chapter One: Where is he talking to himself, rambling on and on, and even revealing his secrets? 😒

The protagonist is indecisive, has too many inner monologues, and his actions are unworthy of the title "demon."

The writing is immature, the plot is clichéd, and there's nothing new about it. 😎

The book is mediocre. The characters, plot, and cultivation progression are well-written, but there aren't many highlights or anything particularly exciting. The title, "The Demonic Path," is missing. The main plot revolves around the protagonist's ability to kill demons and level up, which is what I came for, but you focused your attention elsewhere.

Are you going to cut up that other book? Are you going to let it die while you're trying to raise it? 😒

The plot feels too contrived; something happens in every village they arrive at, and the protagonist immediately steps in to right wrongs.