Surviving the Apocalypse, I Become an Immortal on My Own

I see a lot of understanding guys in the comment area, so I'll explain it a little bit here. First, the subject matter of this book. It is an attempt at a new theme, reverse travel + doomsday + immortality. It should be difficult for you to find a second completed book with the same theme for the time being (I didn't find it anyway). I won't say any layman's words. My creative philosophy is to keep exploring. If this book hits the street, I may write a work that I have created on my own. But to be honest, the Abyss Alone Space Opera has an average order of 17,000 to 17,000 from 3,000 on the shelves. The copyright of the fairy father's attempt to double-cross the father and son is also more than 20,000. They are all small classified works with high completion, short update cycle, and no traffic support. There is still some way to go before they become popular. So I will not repeat my successful routine just because I am short of money. I like to explore areas that others have not explored. This is a writing concept that took shape ten years ago, when the trend of online writing was to attack homogeneity. Now you are blaming an author for trying to innovate? Actually, before I used this vest, I was one of the first pioneers in the field of original light novels in China. The first fairy tale work was "Take an Angel to Cultivation as an Immortal." Later, I became the pioneer of the steady flow. So, those guys who are pointing fingers and saying how this subject matter is. Don't come here to show off your shallow knowledge of Internet literature. There is no book that everyone likes. If you don't like it, just don't read it. Maybe my next book will be to your liking. You think so? Second, why double opening. Two reasons. First, after writing the plot of Wei Na's shooting, I was completely inspired by this book and couldn't hold it back. My double-booked works include "My Senior Brother is Too Steady" and "Walking Alone in the Abyss". Old readers will naturally know the quality. I clearly know the importance of inspiration to me, and I would be very sad if I didn't write this story, so I just opened it up. In fact, the main story of the Immortal Father has been written, and the chapter on the Conferment of Gods is being added. Second, control sugar. I have no other hobbies except coding, animation, and playing games. I am a homebody and don't like to go out. The high sugar content required for coding and the high pressure of my creative brother during his solo journey in the abyss made me weigh more than 300 pounds in a few years. My blood sugar exploded, so I had to control my sugar. The only thing that can make me forget to control my sugar hunger is immersive writing. So I intentionally schedule enough writing tasks for myself. Believe me, controlling sugar and losing weight is extremely uncomfortable. So, those of you who deliberately set the pace, don't force me to spray you when I'm having a sugar tantrum. I am an elegant author and cannot scold readers. Another: I have lost 34 pounds by controlling sugar.

"Name?" "Fu Jian." "Where are your adults?" "... I'm the only one left." Looking at the child in front of him who looked to be no more than six or seven years old, the young man responsible for applying for registration fell into silence. A nameless rage rose in his heart, and he wanted to rush into the battlefield and tear those bladed beasts apart, but in the end he could only swallow his anger. Released his clenched fists, Chen Ming shook his head at Fu Jian, and said hoarsely: "Sorry, we can't have you. We adults are not dead yet, and it is not our children's turn to go to the battlefield." Fu Jian lowered his head in disappointment, said nothing more, turned around and left the recruitment office with a red sign. 'It doesn't matter if you don't want the army, I can do it myself! ' Fu Jian encouraged himself, his lowered face full of stubbornness. "Hey Fu Jian, Fu Jian, wait a minute." Chen Ming put down the marker and register in his hand, and jumped out from behind the table. Fu Jian looked back at him, feeling a little confused. Shouldn't you accept him? Chen Ming knelt down and looked at Fu Jian's dark pupils, and said seriously: "The army can't want you now, but if you really want to become a soldier, you can go over there." Chen Ming pointed to a building in the distance, which looked like it had just been built not long ago. "That is the newly built youth training camp, which can also be regarded as our reserve force. In addition to daily physical training and the use of various firearms and equipment, there will also be commissioners who have been removed from the front line to explain how to deal with different bladed beasts, but..." Fu Jian asked: "Just what?" Chen Ming closed his eyes, took a deep breath, and looked at Fu Jian's serious look, as if he saw himself ten years ago. Ten years ago, his father died in the line of duty. His mother could not bear the blow and passed away soon after. The huge family fell apart in an instant, leaving him alone. Someone once gave him a chance to inherit his father's legacy, and now he also wanted to give the young man in front of him a chance. "Once you enter the youth training camp, you can no longer voluntarily quit. Either survive on the battlefield or... Sacrifice." "It doesn't matter, I'm not afraid." Fu Jian nodded vigorously without any hesitation. "Okay, take this." Chen Ming took out a dark red card from his jacket pocket. It had the number 06712 on the front and an exclusive QR code on the back. This is a recommendation card issued by the army some time ago. The function of the card is very simple. Children holding the card only need to undergo simple registration to enter the youth training camp for training. It is said to be a recommended card, but what behind the card represents not only skill teaching and survival guarantee, but also the foreseeable blood and fire, which is the inheritance of fighting will and the light of hope for the survival of civilization. "The youth training camp will open in a few days. You can pay attention to the situation there. When it opens, you can register with this red card." "Okay, you go back to eat quickly, I have to go to work." Chen Ming touched Fu Jian's head, stood up and walked to the recruitment office, waving his hand gracefully. Under the glow of the setting sun, Chen Ming and Fu Jian walked opposite each other. Their shadows stretched and lengthened after a brief contact, like the transfer and continuation of some kind of idea. Under the scorching sun, a group of children in various clothes, ranked according to their height, stood neatly in the open space in front of the youth training camp training base. Fu Jian stood at the back because he was very fast. In front of him was a tall girl with a ponytail. A middle-aged man wearing a camouflage military uniform with a resolute face stood at the front of the team, his majestic eyes sweeping over the faces of each child as he walked back and forth. "I don't know why you came here, and I don't want to know this. I only know that this is a youth training camp, a reserve for frontline warriors, and the main force that will face blade beasts in the future!" The middle-aged man pointed to the door of the youth training camp training base and said word by word: "Now you We haven't crossed the gate yet, and there is still room for regret. If you want to quit, please stand up and hand in your red card. Someone will send you back to a safe place. " "I only give you a minute to think about it." After saying this, the middle-aged man turned and left, disappearing from Fu Jian's sight. Without the instructor's deterrence, commotion began to spread among the crowd. Some familiar children asked each other about each other's plans, and some closed their eyes and remained silent. Fu Jian saw several people looking hesitant, as if they wanted to give up, but under the persuasion of their companions, they did not leave after all. The girl in front of Fu Jian suddenly turned around and asked him: "Are you leaving?" Fu Jian was stunned, and he did not expect that someone would take the initiative to talk to him. Before his mind could turn around, he had already said: "I'm not leaving." The girl got a satisfactory answer and turned around without any hesitation, and the tip of her swaying ponytail brushed the tip of Fu Jian's nose. Um... Looking at the girl's back, Fu Jian suddenly realized that his answer didn't seem important. Maybe the girl, like her, only has herself left. She just wants to gain some recognition by asking him casually. It is best to stay, and leaving has nothing to do with her and will not affect her choice in her heart. One minute passed quickly, and the instructor appeared in front of everyone, nodding with satisfaction. "Very good, you are all good!" Taking out a list, the instructor continued, "Now I will check the list of personnel. Those whose names are called will be called. Enter through the youth training camp gate in order and go east. Someone will distribute basic supplies such as clothing and accessories over there." "Zhang Huanying." "Here we come!" "Wang Mingqi." "Arrived!" "Xiao Qiang." "Arrived!" "Fu Jian." "Arrived!" (To be continued)

"Damn it, how did these blade beasts get here!" The heavily armed soldiers held machine guns and fired wildly at the blade beasts that suddenly emerged from the ground. "I have reported the news to the superiors. Support will arrive soon. What we have to do now is to annihilate them as much as possible here and protect the people behind us." "You kid again I'm showing off here, what do you think? My wife and children are in the city, and I have to keep these damn blade beasts out even if I'm trying to save my life!" The sound of fierce gunfire was mixed with the sounds of soldiers shouting for communication. Chen Jisheng deceived his brothers. The call was put through, but the Sixth Military Region was also attacked by blade beasts, even on a scale far greater than theirs. After just a few words in a hurry, the call ended abruptly. Now in the entire hinterland of mankind, bladed beasts emerging from the ground are attacking raging everywhere. Those in better condition are still resisting tenaciously, while those in worse condition have long since had no survivors. This is a premeditated invasion of civilization. The blade beasts on the coast attracted the attention of high-level human beings and made them mistakenly believe that the blade beasts came from the sea. A large number of armed forces were dispatched to the coastal city to build a defense line. Just as human civilization stabilized its position from the sudden attack and gradually suppressed the cannon-fodder blade beasts on the coast, a large number of mimic blade beasts and basic blade beasts followed the pathways drilled underground by the earth-boring insects and penetrated deep into the hinterland of mankind. At the Joint Defense Force Command Center, Commander Zhang Jingteng punched the table hard and cursed the quintessence of the nation. Just now, another city sent a signal for help. So far, traces of blade beasts have appeared in almost every city. The guard strength in the city is far from enough to deal with the tide of blade beasts launching sneak attacks from underground. Those blade beasts on the front line seemed to know how to cooperate, attacking the human defense line regardless of the cost, using their own lives to hold back the human fighting force. Because of this, the blade beasts in the hinterland of the city cannot be cleared away in time, but this is not what Zhang Jingteng is most worried about. Although the number of blade beasts is extremely large, the human artillery reserves cannot be underestimated. The positional warfare on the front line has actually gradually stabilized. But these bladed beasts suddenly appeared in the rear, making Zhang Jingteng feel a little bad. The currently known blade beasts include cannon fodder basic blade beasts, larger high-priced blade beasts, violent female worms, and ground burrowing worms that open underground passages. Without exception, the fighting methods of these blade beasts are very primitive, but their bodies that are as strong as steel and their powerful vitality allow their physical attacks to roll towards human positions like a tide. The firearms and artillery fire of human civilization and the biological body of blade beast civilization are like two colliding torrents, which can barely maintain a certain balance. But what if there is a blade beast that releases poisonous gas? Zhang Jingteng had to consider the possibility of this situation. If those bladed beasts that penetrate deep into the human heart can release poisonous gas, it will cause great damage, and even the entire human civilization may overturn in an instant! Zhang Jingteng was anxious in his heart, but he had no good way to deal with it. He could only keep issuing orders, asking the defense forces stationed in major cities to stop the blade beast at all costs, and at the same time dispatching a small number of armed troops to support. 'You must, you must hold on! ' Pingnan City. The 127th Regiment stationed here is on the verge of destruction. The mutilated corpses of countless soldiers and the remains of blade beasts lie on the ground. Scarlet blood and dark green blood merge together and flow slowly. There are only a dozen people left in the entire 127th Regiment, including the second battalion commander. Their defensive positions have long been destroyed by the blade beasts, and they can only huddle back to back to deal with the blade beasts attacking from all directions. "Batalion Commander, retreat, we are the only ones left, we can't hold on!" Liu Dabiao didn't say anything, he just silently pulled the trigger of the heavy machine gun in his hand and fired at the hole where the blade beasts were pouring out a few meters away. Of course he knew that they couldn't hold on, and he also knew that the humans were in chaos now, with bladed beasts emerging from the ground launching sneak attacks everywhere, and there was no spare power to support them. But they are soldiers. From the moment they put on this military uniform, they had no option to escape. Behind him are tens of millions of unarmed people. Even if he dies, he must die at the forefront of blocking the blade beast! The young soldier's eyes were full of despair, and a few tears could be seen on his blackened face. Liu Dabiao knew him. He was a newcomer who had just graduated from the military camp a week ago and was assigned to Pingnan. He was a child from the north and had not yet adapted to the environment when he came here. He had not even visited Pingnan City... If nothing else, he would not have a chance in the future. Liu Dabiao looked at the young man who was clearly talking about wanting to run away, but his body was trembling with fear, but his hand holding the gun remained steady. He smiled. Perhaps they will all die here today, but they died to protect the people and to resist alien invaders. They died without regrets and they died with glory! "Don't say such depressing words, one head saves one life, even if you die, just kill a few more bladed beasts for me!" "Hey, then let's compare who can kill more!" "Who is afraid of whom? Don't be able to beat me when the time comes. Crying! " "Fuck you, I'm sure I'll kill more!" Under the command of Liu Dabiao, the remaining dozen people gave up their defense. They strapped explosives on their bodies and charged into the edge beast pit without hesitation. One by one, the figures continued to fall, and the remaining people continued to move towards the goal. Finally, under the cover of others at the cost of their lives, Liu Dabiao, who had broken an arm, and the recruit staggered into the cave. Boom! The violent roar collapsed the pit and stirred up dust all over the sky. This tragic land fell into a brief calm. But only a moment later, an unknown gray-purple mist floated out of the pit and floated over the city. The incomplete moon was engulfed by thick clouds, darkness spread silently, and gray-purple mist spread rapidly. Wherever the fog went, the building facilities were not affected, but animals suddenly fell to the ground unconscious one after another. They struggled for a while and then lost their breath. Then, there is their owner. In just one night, corpses were everywhere! (To be continued)

[20 Years before the Fortress Era] On the edge of the plateau, there is a training camp. Young children, oh no, they should be called reserve forces now. From the moment they join the youth training camp, they are no longer flowers in the greenhouse. Instead, they are put into the steel furnace for smelting, and will rush to the frontline battlefield at any time to slash the blade of the blade beast. Yang Ming looked at the group of children doing physical training on the playground, his eyes searched, and soon settled on a child with dark skin. Fu Zhenyu's son, Fu Jian. After falling from the Donghai City Research Institute to the northwest plateau, Yang Ming, who learned of the death of his best friend Fu Zhenyu, began to inquire about Fu Jian. He has devoted most of his life to scientific research. He is unmarried and has no children. Originally, Yang Ming planned to take care of Fu Jian as his own son, but before he came to find him, Fu Jian had already applied to join the youth training camp and became a member of the reserve force. So Yang Ming gave up protecting Fu Jian in the greenhouse, and took the initiative to apply to become one of the instructors in the training camp, responsible for teaching blade beast related courses. "Old Yang, we are watching the recruit training again." Yang Ming nodded and looked at the approaching chief instructor Du Yongqiang, who is also the supreme commander of this training camp. "What is the current situation on the front line?" After a moment of silence, Du Yongqiang shook his head, his voice filled with weakness: "Where is the front line? Almost all the coastal cities have fallen and become nests where blade beasts breed." Yang Ming was dumbfounded. At the meeting of the Pan-Blue Star Alliance to Resist Alien Creatures, which was urgently established three years ago and hastily disbanded, the scientific research team he represented once pointed out the threat of blade beasts and warned all countries to prepare. It is a pity that the six months of peace made them let down their vigilance, and what they got in exchange was the complete defeat of the human camp. This is a premeditated invasion of civilization. The bladed beasts on the coast acted as targets to attract human attention. When they mobilized a large amount of military power to invest in the seaside area, the mimic bladed beasts appeared strangely in various cities, releasing a large amount of poisonous gas and wiping out 50% of the human population overnight. Thanks to the fact that humans have been actively fighting among themselves, after the initial defeat, the remaining humans organized themselves in different regions and used the weapons in stock to protect the lives of ordinary people Under the pouring of firepower at any cost, humans once had a certain advantage in local battlefields, and even came up with the idea of ​​​​wiping out the blade beasts and conquering their homeland. However, as time went by, they discovered a bad news. Blade beasts can evolve! The progress of human technological advancement is far less than the speed of blade beast evolution. The bladed beasts bathed in artillery fire have evolved over and over again, and their bones have become hard enough to withstand pistol shots. In close combat, their blade limbs can even cut off sabers developed by humans. Fortunately among misfortunes, they are still unable to withstand the power of nuclear weapons. However, firstly, the nuclear weapons reserve is limited, and secondly, the radiation caused by the explosion will also pose a great threat to mankind, if nuclear weapons are used recklessly to clear the ground. That will only have one consequence - before humans are wiped out by the blade beasts, they will die from nuclear radiation first. Yang Ming wanted to ask more questions, but Du Yongqiang's phone suddenly rang. "Hey, what!?" "Okay, I understand, he is next to me, we will go there immediately!" Du Yongqiang hung up the phone, and without even bothering to explain, he pulled Yang Ming and ran out of the military camp. There was a helicopter parked there, and it had started to start at this moment. Its wings cut the air and made a harsh noise. Yang Ming, who was confused, followed Du Yongqiang onto the plane, and then had time to ask him what happened. "Meeting?" "Yes, the order conveyed on the phone just now is for you and I to rush to the headquarters in the northern plateau immediately to attend the meeting." "But the specific meeting was not mentioned on the phone." Yang Ming frowned, and suddenly an idea flashed in his mind, and he thought of the plan that the head of the institute and his teacher Yuan Zhenning had said. Fortress plan. As the name suggests, it means abandoning the urban buildings on the ground, integrating all the resources and power of human civilization, and building a defensive fortress underground. Once this plan was proposed, it caused widespread discussion within the institute. Most people did not agree with this pessimistic and negative shrinking plan. What's more, integrating the resources and power of human civilization is easy to say, but people's hearts are different. Moreover, the blade beasts had just revealed their traces at that time and did not cause many casualties. Those politicians were still thinking about how to benefit from the war. This kind of plan to change the existing structure will naturally not be recognized by them. But things are different now. The poisonous mist released by the blade beasts when they raided the human hinterland wiped out 50% of the human race, which indirectly wiped out those politicians who put their interests first. Humanity's current situation of comprehensive defense is just suitable for launching the fortress plan! Amidst the buzzing vibration of the wings, the helicopter quickly approached its destination. Yang Ming and Du Yongqiang were allowed to enter the spacious conference room after a brief inspection by the guards. The conference room was already two-thirds full, and among those who came early, it was obvious that they could be divided into two camps. Research scholars and military generals. They are also the organizers of the human forces that are currently dividing the world against the blade beasts. This undoubtedly further confirmed Yang Ming's guess. Yang Ming waved to Du Yongqiang and sat beside a few acquaintances who had worked together in the research institute to exchange information with each other. More than half an hour later, the conference room was already full, and a tall man with a resolute face, wearing a blood-stained military uniform, stepped onto the podium. "I am Jiang Tianlin, the former general staff officer of the Second War Zone, and one of the initiators of this meeting." "The main purpose of calling you here today is to hold a resolution vote. Please ask Academician Yuan Zhenning to introduce you to the specific situation." Following his words, an old man with gray hair but still strong energy walked onto the podium with a notebook. With a simple operation, after connecting the projection screen in the conference room, Yuan Zhenning called up a map. This is a world map of six continents, but unlike ordinary maps, the surface of this map is covered with dense scarlet light spots. Among the large swaths of red, countless small blue light groups were divided and surrounded. "These red dots represent the blade beasts, while the blue ones represent the human side. Maybe the team led by some of you has achieved a lot of results, and you even want to counterattack the blade beasts and regain the old land." "But you have far underestimated the growth of the blade beasts. All you have seen is Blade beasts are cannon fodder used to consume human beings' vitality. " "Newer varieties of blade beasts have begun to be born in those poisonous fogs, such as this one." Yuan Zhenning switched to the photo, and a huge figure that was enlarged and restored appeared in the center of the picture, still somewhat blurry. But the point is not the size, but that it actually has wings made of bones! This is undoubtedly huge bad news for humans who still have air superiority. Fear spread in my heart, and the conference room became a little noisy. Yuan Zhenning switched to several photos taken by the investigators at the risk of death, showing them the terrifying growth of the blade beast. "So how should we deal with them now?" A noncommissioned officer couldn't help but ask. Yuan Zhenning knocked on the table and projected a document. "This is the only possibility for human civilization to continue amidst the raging blade beasts - the fortress plan." (To be continued)

(The original text contains little description of Fu Jian's emotional aspects, so I personally made a certain processing and design [making sugar!]. The heroine was named Xiao Qiang, which means the warm and romantic red rose~) Bang! A marking bullet hit the corner of the wall, leaving a pool of scarlet paint. Fu Jian gasped for air with lingering fear. It was just a little bit close. If he had reacted a little slower, he would have been eliminated by now. Fu Jian calmed his breathing and raised his hand to look at the watch on his left hand. The upper left corner of the dial displays the current time: 17:49. In the center are light spots scattered in different places. Each light spot represents a student and is also an opponent. It has been more than three hours since the simulated shooting competition started. More than 60 students have been eliminated, and there are only less than 20 people left in the field. Fu Jian is one of the seed players that the instructors are optimistic about, and his performance is well-deserved. He alone eliminated 19 people, and he basically eliminated his opponents with one shot. The accuracy of his marksmanship is breathtaking. 'Looking at the angle of the bullet marks, the opponent should be setting up a sniper attack on... The fourth floor of an abandoned building. ' 'The gunfire just now will definitely attract the remaining people to come over to investigate the situation. If I keep hiding, the sniper will also escape. ' 'If I can get the sniper in his hand and find a commanding height, I can easily harvest the remaining students without having to run around. ' 'High risk and high reward, go for it! ' Fu Jian gritted his teeth, tensed his muscles, counted down to three, and then stepped out from behind the container. As expected, the student hiding in the building and setting up a sniper fell into the trap. Three rounds of bullets were fired at Fu Jian in a nearly perfect shape, almost blocking all his movement directions. But Fu Jian was unhurried. His legs were rooted like iron trees. He twisted his waist and used an iron bridge to avoid the bullet at the top. Then he suddenly exerted force and turned sideways in the air, avoiding two bullets again. Stimulated by adrenaline, Fu Jian was highly concentrated and performed two difficult movements in succession. His muscles were already at their limit, but he gritted his teeth and squeezed out some more strength. Fu Jian rolled forward, instantly took out the pistol from his waist, and fired three shots in succession in the direction he felt. You give me three shots, and I will give you three shots in return. But the opponent obviously does not have Fu Jian's abnormal physical fitness and reaction ability. He only dodged one of them, and the remaining two hit one in the chest and one in the left shoulder. "What a pervert." Huang Yuchen smiled bitterly and shook his head, with disappointment and admiration on his face. In their training camp, Fu Jian can be said to be the top three perverts. This kid seems to be born with a ruthless spirit. When he first entered the military camp, he was still a weakling like a bean sprout. But in just one year of training, under his high-intensity squeezing training, Fu Jian suddenly transformed from a soft and weak pretty boy into a muscular man who looks thin in clothes and takes off his clothes. In fact, looking at the rankings alone, Fu Jian only ranked first in physical fitness, but he was also firmly in the top three in other categories. He is a rare all-around genius who is not partial to subjects. The other two people, one is Chen Zhongying, who was born in the military. He has received military training since he was a child. His physique is much stronger than that of a genius like Fu Jian. In close combat, no one can resist his three moves if he catches the opportunity. The other is a girl. Xiao Qiang. As one of the few girls in the training camp, Xiao Qiang's shooting talent can be said to be unparalleled. While others were still spending a lot of bullets to develop their gun sense, Xiao Qiang could already achieve a blind shooting hit rate of 97%. She ranked first in the shooting rankings all year round, beating Fu Jian, who was ranked second, by more than 200 points. The tactical boots made a gentle friction sound on the stairs. Fu Jian limped to the fifth floor, turning a blind eye to Huang Yuchen who was slumped against the wall. He reached out to put away the sniper rifle on the ground, and turned around to find the next sniper point. "Fu Jian!" Huang Yuchen called out to Fu Jian. Fu Jian looked back. Huang Yuchen winked at him and reminded: "As a friendly reminder, I took this gun away from Xiao Qiang, and she is nearby. You'd better be careful, don't lose in the hands of a girl." Fu Jian nodded silently. Xiao Qiang, it is indeed a bit tricky. If he were to compete purely with her in marksmanship, Fu Jian would not have any idea of ​​winning. If she was not in good condition, it would be a draw with her. But now it is a simulated shooting competition, which can also be said to be a real CF competition. The competition is not just about marksmanship. Suppressing the tingling sensation in his left leg, Fu Jian carried a sniper rifle on his back and walked towards a smaller but connected building complex diagonally opposite the building. If nothing else, someone should be rushing here by now, just in time to wait and wait. After entering the room and cleaning up a little, Fu Jian lay on the window sill on the third floor and stuck out the barrel of the gun. The position he chose was definitely not as good as the one chosen by Huang Yuchen simply in terms of field of view, but the advantage here was that there were enough distractions and sniper positions, and he could still maneuver among the buildings if he was discovered. It would not be possible to be discovered and killed directly like Huang Yuchen. If I had been as powerful as I am now, maybe my parents would not have died. Fu Jian's hand clenched unconsciously, and his fingertips penetrated deeply into the flesh. He would never forget that afternoon. His parents died in front of him, but he was powerless to do anything. Blade beast! A figure appeared in Fu Jian's peripheral vision. He instantly suppressed the anger in his heart and looked at the person through the sniper scope. Xiao Qiang! ? (To be continued)

The scorching sun in the early morning cast golden rays of light on the boys and girls sweating profusely on the training ground. The cold wind blows away the impetuousness and brings a little coolness. Fu Jian and Huang Yuchen stood under the sun in full gear for an hour before the instructor spared them once and ordered them to rest where they were. Huang Yuchen felt relieved and took off the tires he was carrying, and then took off the vest wrapped in iron, sweating like rain. "It feels so good... It feels so good~" Huang Yuchen seemed to have been spoiled, he collapsed on the ground and let out a moan of ecstasy. Instructor Du Kai looked sideways, his eyes full of disgust and warning, as if to say that if you continue to practice these evil ways, I will train you for a while. Huang Yuchen sneered and made a shut-up gesture. Just as he was about to lie down and rest, Fu Jian stretched out his hand and pulled him up. "What are you doing?" Huang Yuchen looked at Fu Jian in confusion. "You can't rest now. If you don't relax your muscles, you will be very sore in the back." "No, no, I'm too lazy to move a finger now. Leave me alone, I'm just going to lie down." Fu Jian was unmoved, and directly picked up Huang Yuchen, who was like a dead fish, and carried him towards the place where the boys were resting. Huang Yuchen was walking half-pushed, and suddenly saw something. He rolled his eyes, stood up straight in an instant, coughed twice, and muttered in a low voice: "Look to your left, quickly." Fu Jian turned to look. A girl wearing camouflage training clothes is stretching her waist. Under the sunlight, the girl's beautiful curves seem to be shrouded in a layer of light, which is particularly eye-catching. Many boys are looking at this side quietly. Xiao Qiang. A blush appeared behind Fu Jian's ears, and he subconsciously wanted to look away, but a pair of hands blocked his head. "She is your girlfriend now, what's the point of being embarrassed to see." Huang Yuchen said coquettishly, pushing Fu Jian behind the waist, "Come on over there!" Fu Jian felt a burst of strength from his waist, staggered a few steps, and then he came to the center of the area where boys and girls rested separately, just looking at Xiao Qiang. Xiao Qiang has been peeking at Fu Jian and Huang Yuchen from time to time since they were punished by the instructor, but her expression has not changed much, making people wonder what she is thinking. "Huh?" Xiao Qiang straightened her pretty little nose and hummed softly, her eyes full of exploration. At the bonfire party last night, she remembered very clearly that Fu Jian, a slender man, not only did not respond to her, but also made the matter known to everyone. What kind of trouble is he going to make when he comes here? Do you formally reject yourself? That's okay. Falling in love with such a tall-headed guy would be boring anyway. I'm just a little curious, so I want to find someone to give it a try. It doesn't matter if I can't succeed. I'm so beautiful! Damn your brain, think quickly! Fu Jian seemed to have a calm face, but he was panicking in his heart. This was not the case when he and Huang Yuchen were chatting yesterday. He just said that he would find time to explain to Xiao Qiang how he was being pushed over in front of everyone. He didn't know what he was talking about. Subconsciously, Fu Jian turned his attention to the instructor Du Kai who was watching the show. The instructor had just married the instructor Liu Yuqing next door. He must have experience. Du Kai noticed Fu Jian's eyes asking for help, and the aunt's smile on his face suddenly stopped. He looked heavy as if he was thinking of a solution, but in the end he just gave Fu Jian a thumbs up and said two words silently: "Come on!" The instructor couldn't count on it, and Fu Jian had no shame to say all the love words Huang Yuchen said. He was silent for a moment, and said with a red face: "Xiao Qiang, I like you!" Xiao Qiang, who was prepared to be rejected, was stunned. Huh? Is Fu Jian enlightened? (To be continued)

After playing and having fun, Fu Jian's roommates also knew the appropriateness, and they laughed and joked for a while before moving on to the next topic. Only Huang Yuchen sneaked up next to Fu Jian. Fu Jian looked at him with disgust. Huang Yuchen didn't seem to notice Fu Jian's unwelcome towards him, and whispered with a shy face. "Are you two not sure about your relationship yet?" After hesitating, Fu Jian nodded lightly. Huang Yuchen's eyes rolled, and he suddenly asked: "Do you think Xiao Qiang is beautiful?" Fu Jian didn't know what Huang Yuchen wanted to do, so he nodded at the urging of his eyes. Entanglement is entanglement, Xiao Qiang's beauty is inevitable, otherwise Fu Jian would not have seen countless looks full of heartbreak and resentment at the bonfire party. "Xiao Qiang has a good personality?" Fu Jian nodded. "Are you comfortable getting along with Xiao Qiang?" Fu Jian hesitated for a few seconds, recalling the brief contact between the two, and muttered: "When I was with her, I always thought about how to defeat her. Is this comfortable or uncomfortable?" Huang Yuchen rolled his eyes and slapped Fu Jian on the head. "Are you stupid? Huh? You yourself think she is beautiful, you think she has a good personality, and getting along with her is, well, quite harmonious, so what are you still thinking about?" "Blade beast." Huang Yuchen got stuck in his shell, and then he got angry and was laughed at by Fu Jian. "What's wrong with the blade beasts? Because of the invasion of the blade beasts, they don't fall in love, get married and have children? According to your idea, before the blade beasts wipe out all humans, humans themselves will have no future generations." "Look at Instructor Du Kai and Instructor Liu Yuqing, they are not familiar with each other, they are still with us Even if they go to the battlefield before us, are they ever afraid? " "It's good for you, just because you are worried about the so-called blade beast, you would rather let down the girl's heart. You are a coward! You are a coward!" Huang Yuchen's words hit Fu Jian's heart like a heavy hammer. Beep—— A quick and long whistle sounded, and the instructor's shout came from outside the dormitory. Huang Yuchen took a deep look at Fu Jian, turned to the door, turned off the light, and got into his bed. He has already said what needs to be said, and the rest is up to Fu Jian himself. In the quiet dormitory, Fu Jian slowly lay down on the bed, Huang Yuchen's scolding words echoed in his mind, and his thoughts surged like ocean waves. Huang Yuchen is right, he is a coward. He actually never thought about destroying the blade beast, but instead closed himself pessimistically, as if this way he would not have to face the joys and sorrows. When did he become like this? It must have been after witnessing the death of his parents. Dad, Mom, I miss you so much. What should I do? Early the next morning, the rapid and harsh whistle sounded in the dormitory corridor, followed by the instructor's roar urging them to get up. Fu Jian opened his eyes and was stunned for a moment. He felt something cool on his face. He wiped away the tears from the corners of his eyes with his hand and put on his training clothes in silence. When passing Huang Yuchen, Fu Jian stopped, looked at Huang Yuchen's eyes seriously, and said sincerely: "Thank you, I have thought it through." Huang Yuchen raised his eyebrows. With lightning speed, he moved his head over and asked: "Tell me?" "I just agreed." What the hell, why do you feel so uncomfortable after getting together with this guy? "Ouch, I just agreed~" Huang Yuchen said angrily, and gave Fu Jian an annoyed look. I regret it, MD. I just gave this guy a rude look on his face. He didn't change his words last night. "You must treat me to a big meal, one meal, no, no, three meals!" "I will directly provide you with meals for a week, and you can swipe my meal card to eat whatever you want." "Oh no, where did the meal card come from? You kid is playing this trick!" Under the scorching sun, the energetic teenagers laughed and laughed out of the dormitory building, showing off their youthful vitality. Then I would like to mention two sets of the instructor's heavy-duty military posture package. (To be continued)

After reading about chapter 150, let me talk about your thoughts after reading it. Let's talk about the advantages first. First of all, the pace is tight. As a human being in an environment that is close to the end of the human race, the plot arrangement of this book is relatively reasonable. The protagonist and the enemy are not found to be slow to react, not smart, or tactically contemptuous. All the decisions seem to be reasonable and traceable. To put it bluntly, there is no plot to subdue one's wits. The second is the emotional drama. The emotional development between the male protagonist and Ling Tong, the main female character in this part, is relatively flat and gradual. It should be considered not toxic, I don't pay much attention to emotional scenes. But so far, I think the emotional drama in this book is above average among fantasy novels. It's a joke again. The author can arrange some small ideas in the plot from time to time (or speechless points in the eyes of some readers), and the book friends mentioned in this chapter are also very cooperative, resulting in a lot of interesting comments. The reading experience is relatively good. The more obvious advantages for me are basically the above three. The following are the disadvantages, or the poisonous points in my eyes. Actually, the way to suppress the combat power is inappropriate, which leads to the appearance of a deus ex machina plot. The background of this book is to travel through tribulations and overhauls to travel through other worlds. It is reasonable and necessary to suppress the combat power. Otherwise, it is easy to fall into the dilemma of either having a hasty ending or changing the map frequently to make people feel uncomfortable. Many excellent works with eye-catching early settings ended up unfinished because of poor control of the rhythm. But there is also a method to suppress combat power. (The following may contain spoilers, so don't read if you don't like it) The way this book suppresses combat power cannot be said to be unreasonable, it can only be said that it does not suit my reading habits. In the book, the protagonist's own cultivation level is not improved very fast, which is normal. After all, it is time travel and not reconstruction, and everything must be done step by step. But there is much more to say than cultivation. The common people talk about "three hundred and sixty practices", and it is "possible" (I think it should be) to cultivate immortality with "hundred arts of cultivating immortality". Not to mention some niche skills, just talk about weapon refining, alchemy, Gu refining, soul refining, poison refining, escape techniques, formations and other techniques that are commonly involved in immortal cultivation novels. As a tribulation monk, the protagonist should have considerable attainments even if he has just dabbled in certain items. This should have been (in my eyes) an effective way to solve the problem in the early stage when the cultivation level is still too low to confront powerful enemies head-on. However, in the face of the ensuing crises, the protagonist's response method is to use certain means to forcibly improve his cultivation level to overcome cleverness. This method is actually reasonable when combined with the identity and background of the protagonist, but it has an obvious flaw, which is that when the combat power gap between the enemy and ourselves is huge, it will give people a sense of powerlessness and even despair that is difficult to conceal. How should you solve the dilemma when you are accustomed to using force to defeat cleverness when you encounter violence that is unattainable in any case (based on the current plot setting)? The author chose to add temporary settings to give the protagonist a way to overwhelm the enemy's power. I discovered this when I saw the climax of Chapter 150 or so. In the early stage, there were also plots where the protagonist solved the problem through some methods, but these were basically explained in advance, supplemented by the protagonist's inner activities to show that the protagonist still had means. But by this plot, the protagonist's methods explained earlier have been exhausted, and the detailed description does not show that he has a complete plan. As a reader, everyone thinks that the protagonist is in a desperate situation, which makes people feel a strong sense of depression and there is nothing they can do. In order to solve the dilemma, the author had to let the protagonist come up with a temporary method to further improve his combat power. This kind of deus ex machina plot is annoying and unpleasant. It is not extremely unacceptable in itself, but combined with what has been said above, the protagonist has multiple extraordinary methods to improve his strength but basically do not involve "cultivation of immortals and hundreds of arts" (only simple weapon refining and soul-related methods are mentioned in the book). When faced with crises, he can only choose to use force to overcome skill and even mechanical deity. It still makes my reading pleasure drop again and again. I regret that I put down the book at this plot. To give you an example of a clever way to deal with combat pressure in my opinion, I won't mention the title of the book. A certain novel is also in a similar situation. It is also the background of the end of mankind. The protagonist has a traitor, and it is a very powerful traitor. He can improve his cultivation and combat power through some actions that ordinary people can easily do, and obtain resources, etc., And the combat effectiveness is improved considerably. In this case, the author has set some "features" for the protagonist's cheat (which in my opinion cannot be considered defects). Under the restrictions of these characteristics, the protagonist has to give up some or even all of his normal human nature if he wants his powerful cheat to reach a super high limit. Therefore, under normal circumstances (the foreshadowing chapter), the protagonist can integrate into the plot with a level of combat power that exceeds that of the surrounding supporting characters. When the crisis seriously intensifies (the climax plot), the protagonist will not be trapped in a desperate situation by relying on his plug-in, and can even fight back. In other words, the storyline is not depressing to the point of despair. When encountering a crisis that cannot be solved by conventional means of breaking the situation, abandoning humanity in order to increase combat power may not be accepted by some readers, but it is completely considered a reasonable development of the plot and will not lead to a deus ex machina situation. To sum up, it is a pity that I thought I found a novel that suits my taste, but it turned out not to be the case.

I forced myself to read nearly 400 chapters through the filters of 90% and Renxian and I couldn't stand it any longer. The following comments are only some of what I have seen, and are based on the platinum level. Let me talk about the good points first. The character creation is as stable as ever. The important characters except the protagonist are all standing up, and they are worthy of the platinum status. But the protagonist is the only one who is very awkward. His behavior is logically confusing and he wants to mess around. In fact, he is in charge of all major events. The human army Fang Chunchun is lying down to win the dog The theme of "huddle" is gone, and "alone" has to be stabbed in the back. From what I have seen, the cultivation methods have been gradually taught. The protagonist seems to have a plan for one person to obtain the Tao of chickens and dogs and ascend to heaven (only a guess, hope for correction) In terms of settings, in order to cater to the theme of doomsday, the way of immortality has been greatly reduced, resulting in many settings and plots about cultivating immortals that feel very casual. The Mahayana period with a life span of three thousand years is considered rare in the world of online literature. What is even more humorous is that the Mahayana monks in this work cannot survive the upper limit of spiritual practitioners who only have the strength of the God Transformation stage. (The youngest spiritual practitioner lived 18,000 years) For this kind of Water Mahayana, it took the protagonist a hundred years to cultivate it before the story began, and in the end he has not succeeded in ascension. It is really difficult to believe It is like the genius NPC in other online novels. He has some ability, but is just a pack. Among all the extraordinary protagonists, the conditions of the protagonist of this work are at the lower end. In short, most of the problems in this book lie in the protagonist and the setting of cultivating immortality. It is difficult to imagine that this book was written by a mature old Platinum. (It exactly corresponds to the author's mentality when writing the article, Ningba) (If you are a loyal lover of immortality writing, I suggest you not read it) By the way, finally, the author has mentioned many times that he does not want to stay in the comfort zone and wants to try a new track. I wholeheartedly agree and express my understanding, but this is not a reason for readers to pay for the cost of trial and error. Honestly write a light-hearted and joyful fantasy novel that readers love to read. The author himself can make some achievements, so why not? As for other themes, can't you practice writing in secret and then serve them up for everyone to eat?

At present, I have seen 45%, and I have a relatively clear sense of the mid-term direction of this book. It is a pity that this book omits power and rewrites politics in terms of plot conflicts. This makes the book even at the climax of the plot, there will be interruptions in rhythm and excitement, because various negotiations and calculations are all reflected in the form of some private conversations or psychological descriptions, which often leads to the "talking before the war" pain point that is difficult to replace. At the same time, the book has been in a rhythm of continuous plot conflicts from the beginning to the middle. The whole process follows the main line. There is no buffer period and no harvest period for the protagonist. In other words, the sections that can give readers a strong sense of gain have to be omitted or even weakened due to the advancement of the main line. Improper arrangement of this part has led to a large number of comments such as "unsatisfactory" and "the protagonist has never been improved" in the review section of this book. Personally, I think the framework is still too rough. There is only a world view of multiple civilizations struggling, but there is a lack of extension to make the struggle for survival the main theme or even the only theme of the whole text. Many civilizations only reflected the cause and effect of their fall to the earth, but did not give a full description of it. Of course, it goes without saying that there are some derived problems such as characters' facial expressions and empty dialogues. The root cause of all this, I think, is the too fast pace of the main survival line. I personally think that the most important part of the apocalyptic system is the large number of emotions and human highlights of the characters when pressure breaks out, as well as the collective consciousness, sacrifice and dedication that are often included in current apocalyptic novels. Regarding the settings of Fu Jian and other half-human mechas, this part of the content has very good descriptions and arrangements. However, as the pressure to survive increases, these mortals are gradually abandoned by the main line, and their facial expressions become serious. On the other hand, after reading this book in the early stages, the setting and high-maintenance fairy dimensionality reduction attack gave readers high expectations in terms of saving the world. However, due to the too fast pace of the main plot, all the content of the book about cultivating immortals and rescuing the world has no highlights at all. It is nothing more than changing the system of the apocalyptic powers. I once remembered that when the golden elixir of Beixuan Immortal Master was completed, when the flying sword was released, the enemy forces were unable to get close with all their missiles, and the immortal cultivators were crushed once they reached the level. This kind of plot must be more enjoyable and satisfying than "the immortal cultivator is struggling with whether to become a demon (although it is just a foreshadowing)", "the immortal cultivator has no time to practice at all", and "the immortal cultivator uses himself as a bargaining chip to deeply participate in political struggles". What's even more regrettable is that judging from the author's own thoughts described in the single chapter where he gets back to business, he hopes to use science fiction as an important form of expression in this work, rather than just a simple superpower. This is probably contrary to the perception of most readers. In the early stage, it focused on describing the internal system of human beings, achieving a certain political advantage through psychic technology, and forming a crushing situation in terms of internal friction. But in just a hundred chapters, the trend has turned to "spiritual civilization" as a basis. It is more advantageous to master more spiritual secrets, and the setting of immortal cultivators has become a bargaining chip for seeking spiritual power, lacking transcendent description. In the mid-term, psychic technology came to a halt. The writing is full of balance of power, political internal friction, groundless negotiations, and increasingly double-standard views, which makes the settings of immortality, technology, etc. Dusty, and completely fails to give readers a sense of gain. In fact, the reason is very simple. If the protagonist's victory is because he is an immortal cultivator and attracts other forces' interest, and the protagonist obtains political chips and negotiates to win, then it is really incompatible with the word "immortal cultivator" that attributes great power to oneself, and cannot be substituted. As for some foreshadowings that were gradually revealed in the later period, they also lacked suspense and expectation due to the main theme of the previous article. They were nothing more than political chips before another countdown came.