Part Two: Starting with Revenge

When I look at the character list, one of the protagonists is male, and the others are all female 😠

Author, just write in the prologue that a female teammate is influenced by an enemy with corrupt or lustful abilities to rebel, otherwise many people will give up in the prologue.

I feel that if I write this way, the second episode will still lead to the ending of the first episode. Although Shura Field is happy to see it, but I can't bear to be written as a yandere around me. Moreover, the revenge mentioned in the title of the book does not see you doing anything to take revenge. Apart from having a bad taste towards the female knight, aren't you still frantically saving people? What's the difference between this and a weekly program?

190,000-Word character list, 12 characters, 11 women?

From the current point of view, this novel is just a traditional brave novel with revenge. The male protagonist's character has not changed much after his death. Except for becoming a little crazier, other ways of dealing with people have not changed much. He has not realized where he went wrong at all, and is still following the same old path of Zhoumu. This is simply selling someone else's meat, and it is not a revenge novel at all.

Hello, readers. I am a newcomer who likes fantasy stories, and this year I am still writing Shura Field + original fantasy + finally accepting all non-stock trading articles. First of all, some elements of the setting inspiration of this book are based on Nikkei's "May You Hold Happiness in Your Hands". Inspired by this work, it is also one of my favorite Japanese fantasy, but I can guarantee that I will never plagiarize this work Similarly, this book will also have some elements that pay homage to "A Song of Ice and Fire" and "Goblin Slayer", which is a bit careful. My friends will probably find that the writing has a bit of the flavor of "Dragon" - who asked me to write about the coquettish poppy flowers of Dragon tribe fans in the early years Therefore, if you like this type of work, then please allow me to promote it in a self-proclaimed way. Hurry up and read it The last thing I want to say is that this book will be released soon. Friends who like it, please go to the latest two chapters and read it all the way to the end every day. Only in this way can it be considered as an effective follow-up. Only by following up on this book can you get results. I really appreciate it!

Elena character design

After reading it, I will write a brief review of the book for future friends to read It is currently up to Chapter 47 of the second volume. First, can I watch it? How about The answer is that it can be seen, it is above grain and grass, and the writing is good. It depends on the situation whether it can become a fairy grass The second is whether it is poisonous or not. Answer: Until now, there are no poisonous points. The protagonist is reborn and has a more cautious character. He solves troubles in an orderly manner (there may be some accidents) and meets partners. Question about the third heroine Answer: All harems included At present, this Western fantasy style novel is no problem and can be read. The only problem is that the author is a newcomer, and you can see that the author likes his work very much. You can also see the author's emotions. Some of the paragraphs expressing emotions are also good, but I almost suffered from ptsd. I have seen many new authors suffering from literary youth syndrome, which makes me a little scared. You can be more tolerant of new authors, and the author's serious attitude will change the problem.

Revenge is just incidental, getting back your yandere girlfriend is the most important thing

There are many female protagonists, I accept them all, the writing is pretty good, I gave you the vote

Come on, author, there are so many dragon elements, I like it so much, this is the feeling

Character coloring: Antoineva - a mysterious character who has not appeared

The second episode starts with revenge, I thought you were a stick warrior 😏

Like it, have recommended it, but unfortunately I have too few fans on other platforms

It's well written, but not many people read it.