Pirates: Obtain the Meat Ball Fruit at the Beginning

This book is very good. Now the story of the intelligence bear is well known. I hope the author can give the bear and Pony a bad story line and ending.

It's a pity that the revolutionary army in One Piece is a joke. When one of your own has a problem (the overall situation is too important to save), something happens to Luffy (if something happens to the eldest son, hurry up and save him).

Although the protagonist is named Jack, I thought the protagonist would be Captain Jack, and with the golden compass and the ability to replicate the meat ball fruit, I became slightly more interested in reading. However, after reading it, I realized that the plot was unattractive to me and the content was boring. The various operations of the protagonist are very confusing. He has no ideas of his own. It just feels like what others say. There is no clear route. I don't know what the protagonist wants to do, nor some of the protagonist's thoughts. I can't see the protagonist's brain. I just feel like I am reading "Italy Mixes No. 42 Concrete" In the first chapter, I don't touch up the knife, wait for the gangsters to trick him, and then join the revolutionary army as a killer. I am convinced. What kind of time traveler is this? This is from Zhanchi, right? Don't you have any brains? If you just say that Sabo is alive, the king's legs will go weak. You are so powerful😒

Isn't the Revolutionary Army a joke? If they only know how to destroy order and do not establish a new order, what should they do? How funny would it be if the Revolutionary Army was really just waiting for the Nika Fruit to awaken? You really don't deserve the word revolution. If you really want to make a revolution, why don't you do it yourself?

Garp was so scorned by Oda's writing, and the author is still here to lick it? The version is updated, okay?

Seedlings, Goldfinger was praised in the first chapter. Even in terms of luck and acting style, it is far better than Garp than Dorag, the Sweating King. The meat ball fruit ability can be regarded as the fruit setting that Oda messed with at the beginning, hoping to create a little different fun 😁

In fact, the world government and navy of One Piece are not bad, but the fault is that there are Celestial Dragons. Without the Celestial Dragons, the world of One Piece would be much more peaceful. The revolutionary army just wants to rebel.

Please read it! Please read! Still want to pursue reading! Follow-up reading is very important for new books, and it is related to many things such as exposure, traffic, recommendation position, etc. Many books are kept and lost because of pursuit of reading. I ask all readers, emperors, generals, and Shichibukai, to turn to the last page. Then what empress... Wait I will spend the best night with you...

Pawnee

The plot is quite boring, and it's a bit secondary and awkward to watch.

The plot of the gangster at the beginning is really poisonous. I don't understand the meaning of which plot to write. Before time travel, various movies and TV shows have various examples of cutting the grass without eradicating the root cause, and the whole family will meet in heaven. The first time the gangster looks for trouble, he still doesn't root it out. They all know that they are wearing pirates and they are not in the age of peace. Generation, he also let them go. The key point is that letting them go the first time is okay. You are not a sandman fanatic, and this matter is not a sandman. The most disgusting thing is the second time. The little gangster has found someone to try to steal you. If he hadn't scolded the protagonist before leaving, the protagonist would definitely want to let the gangster go again. I don't know what the purpose of this plot is. If you want to ruin the plot, don't be so cowardly. You've already made trouble and you're ready to let someone go.

There is no technique, the writing is very rubbish, very blunt, and the plot is average.

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Betty

The Revolutionary Army is just a bunch of thugs in the world of pirates, wreaking havoc everywhere and not knowing how to restore and build. They are just a group of thugs enjoying themselves, 🤭

Well, this doesn't count as gm military writing, right? Even though it's undercover, it's written in the same way as naval writing, and it's not interesting.

Why did you suddenly arrange this plot? The logic is reasonable, but it feels abrupt.

Ba Tang is definitely not the same as Armed Color. If it is the same, Ming Ge, Qingjiao, Barrett, why wouldn't the Empress

The author took advantage of it and killed too many original characters. In fact, it was good to arrange a few funny characters without killing them. The first part was fine, but the last part had to be killed.

It's 2024, and all your wishes come true!

The revolutionary army, the pirates, the navy, the world government, just take them all and it will be over.

There is no development of fruits; there is no creation of Celestial Dragons; there is no resolution of difficulties; several highlights of One Piece World are only marginal, and in the end the fifth emperor is gone...

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

After reading some chapters, I personally feel that the author's writing is not very good! The author pursues too much details in the plot of the novel, but the fact is that most of the readers pursue the plot of the novel. Although a detailed plot can add points, it will give people a feeling that the word count is crammed. Contact the author to omit some detailed descriptions appropriately so that the protagonist can upgrade faster.

If the Meatball Fruit is paired with a psychic ability similar to that of Professor

The thunderous fruit won't work. The meat ball fruit is for acceleration, and the thunder fruit is also for speed. The impact of the bear's paw is also powerful enough. I should eat a control type devil fruit.

I remember reading a cartoon where Im took off his gloves and the meatballs leaked out of his palms. There was also a cartoon where there was sea water or something around the palm of his hand. He had the power of double fruits😓