Mythological Heraldry

I think this book is really well written so far, and the characters are well drawn. It is neither a mindless novel nor a literary youth disease. For example, I think the passage in Kanlai's Notes is very good. It describes the helplessness of a lower civilization being destroyed by a higher civilization, and the process of trying to grasp hope. It is very touching. The protagonist is a fake licking dog, and the logic of approaching the deer is no problem, and the transformation of the deer is also well written. It's just that the rhythm control is a little bit worse, but it's only a little worse than those particularly good masterpieces, and I feel that the author's rhythm control is obviously improving in the following content. I really feel that not every book has a protagonist who will dominate the world as soon as he appears. If you like Long Aotian, it's no problem. Everyone enjoys reading the book, but you can't require every book to be Long Aotian! I never write long reviews, but I really can't bear to see some self-righteous readers in the comment section, and I don't want a good book to be buried. The author should not be influenced by those comments, come on!

The concept is good The main character's attitude towards being a dog licker is not bad, but the treatment of Xiaolu after entering the next trial and Xu Ran's explanation in the first few chapters why the attitude change of being a dog licker is a bit unsmooth. After the next trial, the little deer's transformation should not grow up all at once like others, it is not a love brain. Following the protagonist to conquer the world, it can be smoother. It feels like Golden Finger is a bit like a behind-the-scenes group portrait, which can create countless virtual gods. The god-killing plan should be something like Taru. Wouldn't that mean overthrowing the existing order? Create your own faith?

In the first few chapters of Gaga Poison, the male protagonist licks the dog, so be careful if you don't have strong poison resistance.

Cheers to the author💪, the writing is great and the chapters are well done 🔪💔

After reading it, I feel that the idea and creativity are very attractive to me, and I hope it can be written well. However, I think there is something wrong with the introduction. Zhu Rong, the God of Fire, does not match the other two at all. They are not in the same style. If you write Loki, the God of Fire, the painting style may be more suitable. After all, Zhu Rong's status as a witch in our world is greater than that of a so-called god. Finally, I felt that the main character was written in a teasing way, which made me feel a little uncomfortable.

Because of the introduction, I was rejected three times. I suggest the author change the introduction.

I finished reading the latest one, about the disappearance of a childhood sweetheart. I personally feel that the author has written too densely the conflict. There are so many plots that suppress the conflict in the book. Now after it is published, it is difficult to kill the surname Luo. His father is unwilling. This main line is enough. Another childhood sweetheart disappears. (Although it is speculated that the disappearance of the childhood sweetheart is most likely related to the father, in order to lead to the conflict with Luo's father later), but it feels really unnecessary. The conflict is too dense. My humble opinion.

Ga, at least give it a squeak. .

It's relatively abstract. Maybe I just read the previous part to highlight the system, or to highlight the darkness of the background society? The last second the protagonist was being beaten, it was like a low-class resistance drama, but as a result, the energy of the system was activated and others exploded.，，，，，， It gave me a way that I have a plug-in, but it has nothing to do with me.

Eunuch, I should at least post a chapter and talk about it. If you don't say it in the comment area, I'm most annoyed by people who don't say anything and don't update. I originally supported you and kept up with the latest chapter, but no matter how much you like it, you won't continue it.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Away, the author's writing style is good, but the beginning of the male protagonist being a licking dog for the eldest lady will probably dissuade many people. The opening scene sets up a male protagonist who is willing to compromise in the face of reality. Most people who read novels will basically withdraw after reading this point. After all, I am depressed in reality, and I am still depressed when reading novels. I am not reading novels in vain. 😜 I don't understand what the author was thinking about the part where the male protagonist's Golden Finger awakens. The God-Slayer plans to change his hands to a Vulcan human body (could it be that saying that the God-Slayer is a god is a new trick 😏), and it's a bit inexplicable when it comes to the excitement. , If Xu Ran's inner unwillingness and anger were added to that paragraph, and then she was allowed to choose whether to accept this power, and the price of accepting this power (becoming an enemy of the world 😎), this writing would feel less abrupt and the transition would be better.                                     The trial in the lower world between the eldest lady Xiaolu and the male protagonist seems to be nothing at first glance, but if you think about it carefully, there are still some logical loopholes. Will such a dangerous trial safely allow the children of a big family to go alone without safety measures? Maybe her parents are a little too arrogant, or maybe I didn't see what the author wrote later, after all, I only read about twenty chapters. Another thing is that I don't understand why the male protagonist is confident that he can successfully pass the assessment by teaming up with Xiaolu. I have not considered whether Xiaolu will listen to the male protagonist's suggestions and whether the two of them can survive. Is it all due to the protagonist's aura (Protagonist's aura: I took it all 😢). I think the second-generation brother is right. Although he said it was for his own face, I hope the author can think more about it and not choose to be brainless in order to create opposition. This book has some writing style and ideas, but the writing method may not be too thoughtful. This is just my personal opinion. I may have considered it immature and did not teach the author not to criticize when writing a book (a dog's head saves his life). Finally, I wish the author better and better, come on 😡

Let's change the perspective. A bug that cannot quickly become invincible to the mortal world and forces the gods to die in person. So what if you can absorb divine power? As an indigenous god, and with the support of mortal forces, I will crush you to death, which is no different from crushing an ant to death.

Hard-headed, right? Write about the passion of young people at the starting point?

I feel pretty good after reading it. You two have such high demands and are not saints, so it feels real. Not everyone is Long Aotian in the beginning. The protagonist is not ungrateful. Just have a bottom line. Everything else is not important.

Why haven't you updated it after so long? Didn't you say you don't know how to be a eunuch? ? 😐

Let's talk about why the eldest lady didn't even have any protective measures during her experience in the lower world. A young son of the Luo family has a guardian spirit following him.

The writing is too tedious. I suggest changing the first three chapters to make less settings so that the golden finger can appear sooner. You don't need to write many irrelevant details, but it's important to be detailed appropriately. It's almost time to enter v. The first copy has not been finished yet, it's too watery.

I'm sick, and I stopped reading at the end of January. I started reading it in mid-February, and I subscribed him to the latest chapter... I'll have to check the latest update time of the catalog in the future 😭 I'm also sick, and the eunuch's novel is included, which is disgusting

I saw a big problem before it was put on the shelves, that is, the protagonist was rescued at the last second every time, which made the senses of watching a bit blurry, and almost every time it relied on luck... But the overall plot development was pretty good.

The character design of the protagonist doesn't feel comfortable enough, and the whole process relies on the protagonist's aura to survive. But the story is still interesting, and the world view is also interesting, but the details lack logic.

After reading the first chapter, I felt something was wrong. This was completely unlike a lv1 novel. There are no superfluous words or bad sentences. Honestly, whose trumpet are you?

Hey, it's been a year and I'm still reading it. It's a really good book.