Begin as a Hokage and Become a Visionary

Naruto's combat power system is too stretched. Let alone a dreamer, an angel can be invincible.

Why do I feel that Tsunade is not a big beauty, but has bigger breasts? Is there something wrong with my aesthetics😭? If you don't like the brothers you just accepted, please check in. I'm not abnormal, right?

I feel that the author did not write about the horror of the mysterious audience. The mysterious audience is not particularly good at fighting in the early stage. He usually borrows strength like a wise man. For combat, he usually avoids direct combat because he is just an audience. The audience can guide, but try not to expose his own strength. Existence, if I can't beat you if you make enemies with others, then I will directly let you make enemies with some strong people or announce that you have obtained some treasures to make it obvious to you. When I am ready, I will directly find a way to make them beat you in groups, and you don't know that I did these things.

The pressure is so severe that even a person under hypnosis would have to breathe for a long time.

I feel that the protagonist's sense of participation in the drama he directs is too strong. The audience can be the director behind the scenes, or he can act as a promoter in the drama, but it is not necessary to be the absolute protagonist. The last dozen chapters feel purely to let the protagonist show off in front of others.

The timeline doesn't match up, Obito was a genin of five or six years old? Are you kidding? I thought it was a good idea, but when I saw this, I was immediately persuaded to quit. Adaptation is not random editing. Even if it is changed, it must be logical. Alas, it slipped away.

Obito became a genin at the age of five or six? The protagonist San Magatama fights Uchiha Hikaru, Tsunade checks the sealing location of Uchiha Hikari and is directly controlled.

Although I originally like Naruto very much, the combat power of the Lord of Mysteries is just a little bit inferior to that of Naruto, okay?

I really like the author's idea. It's a good idea to add the mystery system to the Hokage system. It has a good starting point. The layout in the early stage is quite satisfactory. The occasional nonsense is not bad, but the plot of the Chunin Exam is too nonsense. The protagonist is so dazzling to the audience. The protagonist is the audience, behind the scenes, not the protagonist of the Naruto world. The power system and its application in the actual plot are very different. I suggest the author think carefully about it and write the plot better.

I saw this book while scanning the rankings. How should I put it? I suggest new readers not to read the post and comment section. First read the ten chapters before deciding whether they suit your taste. This book does have many subtle flaws, so I won't list them one by one. But I personally feel that they are far from toxic. As for the problems pointed out by many people in the comment section, many people actually just think that the protagonist's The behavior is not quite what you want, which is really a bit picky At least in my opinion, this book is already better than some of the books on the list. It is true that it has been buried. The plot is pretty good so far The monthly vote has been fully voted. The author can add some details to let new readers see

I found it in other book reviews, I think it's okay 😏

I really laughed when I saw the plot of Dragon of Fantasy, and after Bai Jue changed his path to Sun Sequence 2, and wrote it into a pile. The plot of Dragon of Fantasy belongs to the self-righteous Riddler. Later, Bai Zee's kind of thing can be promoted to Light Chaser. It really made me laugh. If you are planning a promotion ceremony, why don't you think about the ceremony of Light Chaser?

The protagonist is sick, right? Itachi, a newborn, white-eyed wolf, and a filial son, is it necessary to waste time on treatment? Direct humane destruction would be an advantage for him 😰

Stop engaging in conspiracy theories. As far as the third generation is concerned, no matter what, he loves Konoha. I hope that Konoha will become strong. I believe this. As for the lack of ability, that's one thing.

Write a novel that is full of judgments about various characters. Readers don't want to read your judgments at all. Just write the story. You just judge and judge, who wants to see your judgment? ?

It feels like you want to cheat but are afraid of collapse and are always under pressure

Has the five- or six-year-old Obito entered school? It's been a long time since I graduated. Quite funny.

The Sharingan is only useful for low-level users. When it reaches the level of the Demigod Sharingan, it becomes useless. When it reaches the level of the Angel Sharingan, it becomes useless.

The audience's God-Becoming Ceremony is not difficult at all in the world of Naruto. You can do whatever you want from the beginning of the sequence. By then, you only need to have the skills to complete the God-Becoming Ceremony.

I really wanted to watch it, but it turned out that Uncle Snake was shocked when he was pulled up for the first time. Fans can't be so OOC. Even if he was surprised, he didn't show it. He was too pretentious to emphasize the protagonist and bring down the original character. So why write a fan and write something original?

You can quit after reading chapter 16. At the beginning, I was barely able to accept Orochimaru joining the club. At the end, Kurozetsu was directly chased and beaten by Fugaku and half of the cells were sealed by Orochimaru. He was speechless. He also went on to say that he did not want to spoil the plot and should follow the original work. Do you think you are a reader with a conflict between the left and right brains?

1. The starting timeline is a mess. Obito was a genin of five or six years old, but the author later changed it to a teenager. Later, it was written that Sakumo had just committed suicide. 2. Organized a Twilight Hermit Society, dragged Orochimaru in, and said something casually, and Orochimaru believed it directly 3. The biggest poisonous point: the character design of the female supporting character was a mess, the protagonist started to lose his wits when he saw a woman, and the character design immediately collapsed. Tsunade flirts with the protagonist like a chicken, Uchiha Hikaru turns into a yandere, Mikoto acts like she's in heat when meeting the protagonist, and Kushina doesn't let him go, insisting on getting married. Danzo even changed into a girl and was fucked directly by the third generation. 4. After it was released, the plot was even more outrageous. He didn't know how to write war plots, so the fourth generation of Lei directly destroyed the Kumo Ninja frontline alone. Uchiha had no ability to resist at all and only knew how to run away. Come on, this is during the Third World War. Is the fourth generation of Lei so awesome? Obito's plot is even more sloppy. Uchiha is such a waste, why should the third generation be so worried. The Uchiha clan has no ability to resist at all. If the entire Konoha comes over, they will be slaughtered by the Fourth Raixiang like a chicken. Currently, the protagonist's performance is almost at the top level. The fourth generation of Lei is so awesome, and the third generation of Lei cannot surround and kill the protagonist together. I can't stand it anymore after reading this, so I reluctantly wrote the full text.

I feel that it would be quite interesting if the main character traveled through the Dragon Clan and Goldfinger was a mysterious audience. He was a hybrid and could compete for the position of the White King. Using mysterious characteristics as divinity to balance the tyranny of dragon blood would be quite interesting. I don't know if there is anything written about it?

A eunuch? Just wanted to catch up on the update. . . .

The part about Black Zetsu was so poorly written!

I mean, I don't know what it means to have multiple female protagonists. I don't know how to write about multiple female protagonists.

It's a pity, I really wanted to watch it.

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