We've All Entered the Reincarnation Space and You Don't Know the Plot?

There are so few reviews. I have to say it This book can be called a high-end book. I barely read Temari after reading the latest chapter. Not brainless and not guilty. These two points are the criteria for passing the standard here.

It's no problem to go to Bucky's boat, he's a finalist

The little fat guy in the early stage was so stupid. I hate the poet. He was a typical clown type character.

The protagonist of One Piece must be Big Mom. First of all, Big Mom is a pirate. The Second Pirates thing is obviously a Western product. The aunt is female, fat, older, and her body shape is obviously that of a heterogeneous human, and she is more LGBT. And it is said that Big Mom's dream is for all races to live happily together. In a world full of discrimination like Pirates, having such a dream is obviously the protagonist.

The author personally doesn't like the original heroine. Firstly, he doesn't like to make something out of nothing. Secondly, there is no anime plot. He doesn't understand her various abilities and they are not shown in the anime. It's like people know Tsunade's appearance and figure, and the same goes for all her abilities. They can just see them.

If the author diligently updates 100,000 words every day, then the traitors will retreat in fear, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of millions of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie has no way to earn royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference! Those authors who updated less, delayed updates, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

There are too many psychological activities of supporting characters. The author should not get caught up in his own fantasies. What's more, just write down the attributes of a piece of equipment. You also write a 100-word analysis and explanation of each special effect. It's too watery.

The content is good, but the writing style really needs to be improved. Write it clearly before writing.

This way of writing is still the way it was written 6-10 years ago, when Infinite Streaming first became popular.

I hope there will be more women and don't write the male protagonist as a eunuch who is not interested in beautiful women.

It does no good for the male protagonist to mess up the plot wantonly. How can he make a fortune if the plot is messed up?

As long as the dungeon is repeated enough, everyone will know who pooped in that place, let alone the protagonist.

I just read Chapter 54, and I just want to say one thing. Without the chakra of Asura and Indra, even if the two races are mixed, the Rinnegan cannot be synthesized, and the Rinnegan and the Mangekyo Sharingan are not superior or inferior.

Some plots are cliche, and some plots are protracted and the writing style is not very good. The advantage is that there are no poisonous points and it is considered solid food.

It's a pity that Temari's potential is a bit low, and her appearance and figure are not top-notch. It can be seen from the original book. After all, Naruto is the supreme strength of blood. Temari has almost no Otsutsuki clan blood, but space can solve it.

Devil fruits are soul equipment. Not counting blood

The author writes a Japanese comic, but the ending is not very good. The combat power of Japanese comics collapses too easily.

The writing is okay, but it would be better to write less emotional lines.

I read the previous replies, some said there were many women, some said no. . . . Single female Temari? Don't charge others?

Liangcao, the plot arrangement needs to be more detailed. After all, the author is not very good at writing action battles.

I really scratched my head when the author wrote the fight 😆

I was so disappointed that I actually cut it 😭

Let me know when the author will publish a new book. I originally felt that your book was already a masterpiece among similar books, but the results seemed to be average. I have been waiting for you to publish a new book for so long. Don't give up.

The content of Chapters 160 and 161 on Qq Reading is duplicated. Author, please contact the editor to correct it. QYue is also genuine, right? How could this happen?

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You haven't opened a new book for so long. Have you changed your account?

The reason why it's not popular is that the ones you write are all about Japan, and there are no Chinese comics to write for you? In the Qin Dynasty, the sword came, mortals, bad people, and puppet theater