Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Reborn with Destiny

Your ideas in the first few chapters are good. To deal with an enemy, why kill him? It was too cheap. To deal with Dai Huabin and the Duke's Palace, they directly arranged for ten-year soul beasts to be sacrificed to him. As long as he could reach the bottleneck in his cultivation in the future, all the ten-year soul beasts would be arranged for him. Then he would find a soul beast of the wild boar race and turn the white tiger martial spirit into a pig martial spirit, so that he would know what it means to kill people and kill the heart. Also get in touch with the friends you met in the past life. If they are on your side, give them some resources to make them stronger. If they are stubborn and ineffective, you must be hostile to the protagonist and arrange a ten-year spirit ring for them. After all, the friendship in the past life belongs to the previous life. You don't know how those old friends will treat you in this life. If you are an enemy, you can be appropriately forgiving the first time, but you can never do it again. If you really bite the nose in the face, you will kill him directly 🙂

I feel like this book could actually do without a female protagonist.

Very good, as I expected, I can only take the guarantee... Hi... 🙄 But the updates will not stop ()😏 The writing is not good, but I am very encouraged if someone can read it.

Huo Yuhao was okay in the early stage, but almost as good as Xiao Zha San in the later stage.

Do you know why the results are not good? Just because of the plot between Wang Dong and Rui Shou, the previous life was the previous life, so don't keep messing around.

The brain is good, but the writing is poor The main reason is that there are too many things you want to write, and you can't write anything even if you want to. You have written it now, but there is a huge problem with optimization. It's just like code, it can run, but what runs can't be written. Same The whole article has a strong sense of fragmentation, and some editors in the comment area also said that after reading it for a long time, I couldn't understand what was said, and it felt like looking at the mountains in the fog In short, the above are the problems I personally feel. I just voted for the monthly vote, I hope it won't be cut, and it will be optimized.

Day by day, don't look at your new book rankings. They may be high or low. What's the use of looking at them? 🤔 Update! Did you hear that? Go away and code! 😡

There is a saying that it is really disgusting to change your surname when you go to the God Realm to recognize your ancestors and return to your clan. You have no backbone at all. You can't just break off the engagement like Xiao Yan. It's okay for me to be Huo Yuhao as the son-in-law. Also, my name is Huo Yuhao, not Dai Yuhao. All my strength is given by Tianmeng, Ice Emperor, Electrolux, Moon, Xuan Ziwen, Snow Emperor, Poison to Death, Qiu'er, Evil Emperor. It was not given by your Dai family. Your Dai family only gave me a pair of hatred. It was only childhood discrimination, beatings, abuse, and humiliation. I was beaten black and blue by Dai Huabin. My mother was beaten to death by Dai Huabin. I can't forget that day. If this happened to Tang San, he would have slaughtered everyone. He still wants me to forgive. Even if my mother asked me to change, I would not change. Even if I am hated by my mother, I will not change my surname. Otherwise, I will not be able to afford myself. If my mother does not agree, she insists on letting me change my surname. I can only cut off the flesh and bones like Nezha to repay my mother. If I am forgiven, my revenge is a joke.

The ancestor of the Tang Sect, the genius soul master, the supreme god king, the compassionate Buddha... These are the status and prestige that the protagonist of my fate has had. One is stronger than the other, and each has a higher status and official position... My name is - Tang San The strongest person in Douluo Continent, my soul power and martial arts have continued to grow in me since I traveled through time. Even though my magical power is only as powerful as the long bow of Son of Light. Comparable? Snort! Maybe my current strength has far surpassed that of my senior! And in order to ensure that I always have invincible power, I will do whatever is needed to do whatever it takes! In addition to dealing with all those who disobey me, they must also give me whatever they can help. If someone disobeys her, I, Tang San, will not let her go even if she is my daughter. Because this is my way, my way. Maybe some people don't agree with me. But when the vast majority of gods or people in the world trust me and think that I am the most noble king of gods and the greatest Buddha, how could I be wrong? Even if it's wrong, it will only be Wuhun Palace's fault, the soul master's fault, and the soul beast's fault. Because without my wisdom and great power, they would still be living in the painful world of war. So, all people or gods who do not want to die or suffer pain should love me, be loyal to me, and worship me! Appreciate me, the founder of the Tang family, and swear to death to be my genius soul master, my supreme divine king, my compassionate Buddha, I, I, I, - I, the third young master of the Tang family! --Roar! God of Emotions, Master of the Spirit Pagoda, Ice Spirit Douluo, Disciple of Zhou Yi …These are the identities and statuses that I, the Son of Destiny, once had. Some fates that I don't care about but can't get rid of. ... Others call me Huo Yuhao. A person who has been plagued by worries and missions all his life. ... In order to bring peace back to the mainland, I did things I didn't like, fell in love with Wang Qiu'er, who I shouldn't have fallen in love with, and trusted Tang San, who I shouldn't have trusted: causing the mainland to suffer for thousands of years... The word failure seems to be linked to my destiny. Even if I got master Electrolux's true inheritance and peerless magical skills, I still missed an opportunity to escape from Tang San's control. … It made my master Electrolux make a fatal sacrifice and give me the final element of victory. Leaving behind a holy shrine of the Necromancer, Brother Tianmeng said that facing Tang San was a must for me, a destiny that I could not avoid... But... I just didn't believe in fate. Even if some of the predictions came true, I still convinced myself that they were just coincidences. Something that can be figured out with wisdom and patience. I will not intentionally do the opposite just because of misfortune. Even if I am unlucky, I will not deliberately do the opposite. No matter what God's will, fate, fate and destiny are, I, Huo Yuhao, will only do what my reason tells me is the right thing to do. If you ask me to lead, I will lead. If I need to lie, I will lie. If my life allows the existence of love, I will definitely love. No matter what other people say, regardless of whether they can preserve their true self, I, Huo Yuhao, will do the right thing. Fight the right battle with Tang San! Fight for Wang Dong's safety. Fight for Di Tian's ideals and avenge my mother. Fight for my master. To fight for my son. Fight for the people of the mainland, regardless of whether they understand it or not! Fight, fight—fight! Today, the son of destiny will fight his last battle! ! !

How should I put it, author, your writing is so abstract. The plot feels too fragmented. A bunch of things are written together, but you can't make the plot coherent. It feels like each chapter or every few paragraphs is a separate unit drama, which is too abstract.