Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Reborn with Destiny

Your ideas in the previous chapters were good. Why kill an enemy? That's too easy. Against Dai Huabin and the Duke's mansion, just arrange for a ten-year soul beast sacrifice to him. As long as he reaches a cultivation bottleneck, provide him with all the ten-year soul beasts.

I feel this book could actually do without a female lead.

Great, just as I predicted, I can only go for the minimum... Hi… 🙄 But the updates won't stop (fn=58) It's not very well written, but I'm already very encouraged that anyone is reading it.

Huo Yuhao was alright in the early stages, but later he became practically a nobody.

Do you know why the grades aren't good? It's because of the storyline involving Wang Dong and the auspicious beast. The past life is the past life; stop dragging things out like that.

Good idea, bad writing The main problem is that you want to write too much. If you try to write everything, you end up writing nothing. Right now, you've written some code, but there are huge optimization issues. It's like the code itself—it can run, but the output is the same as something that wouldn't run at all. The entire text feels very disjointed.

Don't bother looking at your lousy new book rankings, they fluctuate wildly and are unpredictable, what's the point of even looking at them? 🤔 Update! Did you hear that? Get back to writing! 😡

To be honest, it's disgusting that someone goes to the God Realm to acknowledge their ancestors and change their surname. They have no backbone at all. Couldn't they be like Xiao Yan, who directly broke off the engagement? And then add, "I, Huo Yuhao, don't want to be this son-in-law anymore." Also, my name is Huo Yuhao, not Dai Yuhao.

The founder of the Tang Sect, a genius Soul Master, an unparalleled God King, a compassionate Buddha... These are the titles and accolades that the protagonist of my alternate world has ever held, each one stronger and higher than the last in terms of status and official position... My name is—Tang San

To be honest, author, your writing is too abstract. The plot feels disjointed; you try to cram a bunch of things together but fail to make the story flow smoothly. It feels like each chapter, or even every few paragraphs, is a separate episodic story—it's too abstract.