The Zhenguan Magistrate of Xinfeng

I guess I know why there are no comments and no one reads it. The writing style is pretty good, and you know a lot about history, but if you write a novel, it is not an archaeological article or a lesson plan. The whole novel is popular science. Are you doing popular science readings about the Tang Dynasty? Either show off your knowledge less, or write something that everyone can understand without the need for popular science. A bit of a historical literary youth!

It's not how you write the article, big brother. Being demoted to the border is obviously a hot spot. Or on the eve of your release, you write about his father fighting for him, about those who have friendships, about Pan and so on, who left home to follow. Write about the common people sending each other off even though they are ten miles apart. There are clearly 10 chapters to write and the plot is spot on. When I read it earlier, I thought that this book was pretty good, except for the dogma and the fact that my grades shouldn't be bad. Huh! It turns out that this steamed cake was bitten by a dog. It has a head but no tail, and a tail but no head 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

First of all, let me state that I personally have no objection to popular science, hard-core writing, and emphasis on authenticity over coolness. Sometimes I even like some popular science writing. These are not shortcomings for me... But the author's writing is really too slow, and the narrative rhythm gives me a headache. What is the relationship between the hero who assassinated the protagonist and Liu Weidao and Liu Shuode? How is the protagonist determined? I was baffled by what I saw. Liu Shuode's family was suddenly deserted. After reading the story, I found out that the protagonist did it. I don't know exactly how he did it, but I just knew that Jia's medicine was used. Is this protagonist the protagonist? Why does the protagonist not give the reader a perspective on anything he does? I did a lot of things out of nowhere. I didn't know what I was doing or what I was thinking. I mentioned it in two or three sentences afterwards. As soon as the page of the book is turned, the protagonist goes to guard the border; as soon as the page of the book is turned, the protagonist goes to the hot spring of the Sui Dynasty and his princess, and he is a spy, and he is almost matched with a girl named Aman. I don't know the whole process or details... It makes me doubt myself. Did I miss it? It has no beginning and no end. How should readers read it?

To be honest, I have been reading this book since I finished reading it. I really like this style. It means starting from a small character and struggling, and it is not the same as making friends with Cheng Yaojin, making amazing words and being admired by Li Er. The Tang Dynasty literature that I read in the past was basically either a clan, or birth to nobles, or befriending nobles at the beginning, or commenting on how Li Er was shocked by Li Er at the beginning. The routines all started from the top. When I saw the author's writing style, my eyes really shined. From the bottom, a small person, relying on slightly different insights, and then gradually getting promoted without changing much history, it can be regarded as a daily article about promotion in ancient times.

There are two types of novels, one that readers like to read, and one that the author likes to write. The author of this book is obviously the latter, which is understandable. After all, you are the author! But because readers don't want to read it, don't complain. If you want more people to read it, then at least you should write it in a simple and easy-to-understand way, and don't suffer from literary youth syndrome.

I fucking thought Xinfeng came over to write a historical article 🙂

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I'll give you the tickets for next month, I said so

Li Chengqian (Gao Xu): "Do you really think of yourself as a loyal minister? Our whole family rebelled! Can we meet our ancestors if we go down? Even if you make the Zhenguan reign the most prosperous era in ancient and modern times, historians will not record that you are the successor! This position. If you do it to the end, don't give it to me." What about this paragraph of the author?

Wouldn't marrying Niu Sanniang mean that she and Niu Jinda would have military exploits in the future?