A Minor District Official in Chang'an During the Zhenguan Era

I don't know what to say. Maybe my thoughts are too feudal? The male protagonist becomes a noble and distributes things to common people. The common people of that era didn't know what a noble was and dared to ask for it directly. Then when Li Shimin asked at the court meeting later, the male protagonist directly said, "Hey, is it too weird for the court meeting to be an official place for handling government affairs? Maybe I am too feudal?"

Many chapters are incoherent. It feels like the previous chapter didn't finish the story, and the next chapter talks about another thing. It's really uncomfortable to read, but at least it carries on! There are also many popular science notes that can be placed at the end of the chapter, not all in the middle.

There are too many science popularizations. Basically everything I encounter needs to be introduced and extended. Once in a while, I can accept it. It has always been like this. Things, things, and people have to be introduced in various ways. You can't write anything in one chapter.

Uh, I don't know how to evaluate it. Tell the truth. I am afraid that it will affect the author's income. If I don't tell the truth, I will feel panicked. Looking at the many comments in the book review area, I will talk about why many people say that the story line is not good. This book, technically speaking, has a form but not a spirit. The form is a very good one, including textual research and so on. It is like a beautiful puppet. But have you immediately forgotten the plot after watching it? It seems that the protagonist has done a lot of things, but also seems to have done nothing? Historical articles, writing history is correct, but writing only history is going too far. The protagonist of this book, and the tone of the entire book, lacks energy. Reborn in the Zhenguan era, what does the protagonist with great luck want to do? Even if you can't do it without doing something, can you post it for readers to see? Taking a step back, being a sycophant is not a bad thing, and writing about it is also very brilliant. When a man dies, a bird looks up to the sky. If a man can't eat with five cauldrons, then he will cook them with five cauldrons. Now comes the problem. If you only write about positive things, it will be boring. Of course, as a manager of Vanke Property, if you can write about romantic affairs, that is your ability. If Fangzheng is just a stepping stone, it would be better to call the book "Starting from Fangzheng". To sum up, this book is okay, but its intention is not high and its structure has inherent deficiencies. I don't really agree with it. But I am looking forward to the author's next book.

First of all, you use historical data to increase the number of words. Secondly, excluding those historical data, the dialogue is really boring and tasteless.

I want to be a literary youth, but I can't even write basic compositions well. I can't hold on to the loose prose in the first few chapters. I can't write with the atmosphere of the city. The comparison in the temple is incomprehensible. I heard that I haven't gotten to the point yet in the ten chapters, so I feel like I should review the Chinese textbook first.

It can be seen that the author has put great effort into various historical materials, and his writing style is also very good. However, writing a novel is not just about quoting classics. My personal opinion is that the content of quotations from scriptures should be condensed as much as possible and expressed in terms that are easy to understand without losing the ancient style. Of course, this is indeed quite difficult, but judging from the author's writing style, it should be easy to master.

It's a daily novel that travels back in time to ancient times, so save it for reading when you're bored.

I have read Chapter 10. To be honest, I am confused. I don't know what the main point of the story is. It is unremarkable and it is spoken in plain language. Can you translate normal conversations? To be honest, I have no desire to watch it!

Being neither civilized nor military, he was a waste in the Tang Dynasty