Please Help Me Practice, Sister

The cool question that I feel is suitable for this little fairy is: picking up girls + fighting skills

I feel that it would be more appropriate to change the word "senior sister" to "fairy". After all, the protagonist will not only accept the senior sister in the future!

This brother carries him everywhere and gives away everything. He might as well give away the pig's feet to his wife.

The heroine's emotional changes towards the protagonist are so vaguely written! Or there is none at all. My personal feeling when reading it is that I suddenly went to bed with the protagonist. It was too abrupt. Although you wrote about investing in advance, when the heroine interacts with the protagonist, there is not much words to describe the emotional changes of the heroine. You cannot save the words in this aspect! As long as you write a random stroke, when the male protagonist is showing off to the female character, the female character's eyes will shine again and again, and it will not be so abrupt. Of course it would be better if you could write more carefully

It's well written, I hope the female characters aren't treated as tools in the future.

Overall, this book is pretty good, but there are a lot of female characters who like to meddle in other people's business. For example, Bai Shanshan, such as Senior Sister Fang, these people are like lunatics and have to fight against the protagonist. They are even more like an old woman than an old woman. Hmm... That's not right either, I should say the description is the same as that of Grandma Rong.

There was no update during the Chinese New Year, and there seems to be no notice.

Bai Shanshan

Why do I write about my ex-girlfriend in my profile? Shouldn't he be a Taoist couple?

Qi training master, foundation building power, golden elixir ancestor, Yuanying old monster, god-transforming junior, void refining garbage, combined ant 🙂

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That one named Lin Xue, should the protagonist go and see it? Have you forgotten that little junior sister who has always been very kind to her?

I'm going to raise it, and I'll look at it later, but then I look at it, and I'll stop updating for two days...