The Golden Crow’s Tale: A Mortal’s Journey

The relationship scene is too awkward. The author has never been in love, right?

The top true spirit is the Golden Crow. It is difficult for humans without the blood of the Golden Crow to follow the path of the true spirit. Unless you find a spiritual world where the world was first opened to find a place where chaos breeds laws and innate true spirits. Select the true spirit of the law to capture, devour, and re-conceive the true spirit~

Where is your Golden Crow? Golden Crow Kung Fu, spiritual pets, elves, everything is fine! Also, you are a time traveler who doesn't know the plot, you might as well write about indigenous people. It's too cumbersome.

I don't understand the name of a first-level or second-level monster like Blood Snake, but I still managed to knock down a Nascent Soul cultivator while returning snake eggs? The protagonist's consciousness cannot be seen clearly? It can also directly overwhelm the protagonist who practices the Demonic Power of Heaven and the protagonist who has a powerful soul! It's more poisonous than Han Li's green liquid for feeding monsters! I wrote this on purpose to get into Guiwu. It's so poisonous. If I hadn't subscribed, I would have almost quit! You write about level 9-10 monsters, such as level 9 poisonous scorpions or poisonous dragons, plus the dispelling powder for the soul (otherwise, it is impossible for the protagonist to be directly poisoned, and even the Nascent Soul cannot escape! Even the mana cannot be mobilized) , plus the magic spell of the devil world, I can at least accept this writing! What blood snake? This kind of low-level monster can directly defeat the Yuanying monks. If others are poisoned, they can at least be suppressed with magic power. You can't mobilize your direct magic power, and the soul can directly defeat them! The original green liquid was administered to Feng hope, and he couldn't move. He could only use magic to suppress it. Feng hope couldn't even be beaten by Han Li! Is it possible that the Bird Blood Snake is stronger than the Towering Creation Liquid? The author should change it quickly. This kind of thing almost persuades him to quit.

The beginning of "Chaotic Star Sea" is quite novel, and the single female protagonist is not bad, but every time I am persuaded to quit by the plot of Zi Ling. Actually, I like to watch whether it is a single heroine or a harem, but the author uses a lot of pen and ink to describe Zi Ling, and later introduces Zi Ling to Han Li, which involves giving up a daughter... A bit poisonous 😥 I have written so much, just want to ask if there are any spoilers, and how Zi Ling will be dealt with later? It's okay to have a single heroine or a harem, but the protagonist always wants to give up the purple spirit to Han Li, which is very uncomfortable.

When I saw Chapter 19, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I just subscribed to a chapter to leave a comment. The biggest drawback of this book is that I haven't read The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality before. It feels like an indigenous novel, and the encounter with Han Li always seems reasonable. There are also a few bugs. Zi Ling's mother seems to have died together with her father. The animation explains it very clearly. It suddenly says that he is not dead. It feels not very good, and it feels like a forced cut. The feeling of the plot, and the protagonist's breakthrough is so smooth, without the feeling of being a mortal. In the book, I made a breakthrough in Mortal Scientific Cultivation to Immortality and felt like a mortal. I have thoroughly understood every realm, and I feel that this has the influence of a time traveler. The protagonist of this book looks more like a native than a time traveler, and the substitution is a little bit worse, but basically free chapters can be read, and the emotional scenes are also uninteresting and too bland. The main reason is that the protagonist is so smooth, and there are no setbacks except Jin Dan and Nascent Soul.

The further I write, the more indecisive I become. I have to take care of this and let go of that. Why don't I just search for my soul? Why do I care so much about other people's affairs? It doesn't look good at all after arriving in Tiannan. I feel hesitant.

After reading a few chapters, I have to say that I am a bit out of ink. The Fire Release Fire Dragon Sings is here, the magic weapon, Qingyang Whip! You won't be able to copy so many Chinese fantasy novels! … The name of the exercise is, Yan Yang Baodian, which is no better than your Purple Yang Kung. Magic weapon, Sunlight Mirror, Sun and Moon Jing Wheel, Lifting Flame Flag, which one is no better than Qingyang Whip, Golden Crow! The flying body technique cannot be called the Rainbow Transformation Technique. If you have nothing to do, check out the list of gods. You can learn from the magic weapons, supernatural powers, and spells in Honghuangliu novels. Otherwise, the names of the skills and magic weapons will be stingy. The Yanyang Collection, during the Qi training period, has a chapter on molten fire, a spell formed by absorbing spiritual fire or animal fire, and the Yanyang Protective Curse. The more molten fire, the stronger it becomes. Chapter of Foundation Shaping, spells, sky fire meteor, (group attack spell) body technique floating light and shadow (the refraction phantom of light is also a speed movement technique). Golden elixir stage, magical powers, Yanyang Aurora, Rainbow Transformation, Heavenly Fire Mahamudra, Look at the magic weapon for yourself. In the Nascent Soul stage, the magical Donghuang Faxiang (Yang Shen Faxiang) has a flaming flag above the ground, a sun mirror behind him, a sun and moon essence wheel in his hand, and a sky fire escape lock (chain) This is what I thought of, and I can also learn from it. Author, you can try

Zi Ling is described as unpleasant, cumbersome, and unclean by you. Never arrange for the protagonist to collect purple spirits

I feel like no one is watching it. It has been there for so long and there are no people watching it. The plot is too bland!