Strange Heavens, Martial Arts Are Rampant

I feel like success will be considered when the protagonist can survive five consecutive chapters without dying once... What is authorlevel oppression? This is called authorial oppression

Author, your fighting scenes are well written, and the weird flavor in the front is also very good. The conflict and integration of national martial arts and weirdness are also quite interesting. For a new author, it is already very good, but there are some areas that can be improved: First, the protagonist upgrades too fast. He can match the warriors of the four realms in just a few dozen chapters, and his combat power can easily collapse too quickly; Second, the pace of this book is too fast, not Fighting is on the way to fighting. I hope to describe more daily life and carefully expand the world view; Third, the plot is too thin and pale, and the characters are not rich enough. I hope it can be improved; Fourth, the last few chapters have too many jokes and Internet terms, and there is no weird atmosphere. I hope to return to the atmosphere at the beginning. After all, I only read it because of the amazing beginning. Finally, I wish the author can write better and better and not give up halfway.

Yeah, it's very well written, but the first 21 pictures feel too self-exciting. The first 21 pictures are not abrupt at all, which shows that you are completely unattractive after writing so many of them.

Ordinary people in this world can only die, right?

After reading Chapter 16, the whole process was high-energy and depressing, and there was no sense of respite. Although the protagonist could be upgraded each time, the reader's experience was very poor, and the mind could easily break if it was stretched too long.

It is recommended to change words like "should"

The writing is very good, and the price for the protagonist's rapid upgrade is several terrifying and high-pressure moments between life and death, which I think is fine. What matters is not how much time has passed but how much has been experienced. Very interesting, identified as grain

He asked the Buddha with a smile why he turned his back to the world. It is because sentient beings refuse to look back. The sea of ​​suffering has no end, but turning back is the shore. The evil obstacles of the world of mortals are the endless sea of ​​suffering. I am ferrying sentient beings. Who will ferry me? The only way is to cross by yourself! ————(Buddhism and Hinayana salvation)

The writing is good, I wish I could update more every day.

Not bad. If you keep writing, you are a master.

Copy 1: The world of Huang Feihong becomes strange, the national martial arts countermeasures, and the new methods are strange. Task one, the old method is extraordinary. Task two, find out the reasons for the mutation of the world. Task 3: The Heavenly Master is in his correct position.

Why haven't you deleted the comment section of your post?

Is it so miserable to book 10 for all?