Please Help Me Practice!

You have to eat people to practice, so where are there so many people?

The training system is quite interesting so far, but I disagree with the plot. And it is obvious that the protagonist is suppressed. The god's clone has indigestion after eating so much food for such a long time. Everyone knows that he has a golden finger, but he is not greedy. The old man arranged next to him is just a drag.

First of all, your foundation lies in your hanging. Because of the existence of hanging, the foundation of your practice and your future practice in this world are fundamentally different. You can only analyze the essential meaning of each stage of practice in this world, combine the theory of hanging and past lives, and walk out of your own way. Therefore, the meaning of the old man's existence is to let you have an understanding of each stage, and you cannot follow this direction. Otherwise, in the end, you will not be the descendant of the way of practice in this world. How can you face the Taoist ancestors and defy heaven and earth! The current plot overemphasizes the old man's guidance and the Tao of the world, without making good use of his own subjective wisdom. Everything is arranged and guided! Departed from the introduction!

As we all know, it is really important to follow up on the new issue of Qidian. Can you recommend it? Can you read the latest chapters after writing? So for those of you who are troubled to read, please stop reading. Try not to read. It will really kill you. I didn't want to say it at first, but I was looking at single-digit reading every day, and even trying to test the water was slim. I was really stuck in Bengbu 😭 I really want to write a long and good book, so: Please help me practice!

I can see that there is nothing awkward about it now, and the plot is generally well written and told. Personally I feel pretty good.

Come on, Master

I saw the third one, which is a bit interesting. It's a bit similar to the Vatican monk. I hope it's not a Madonna novel. That one is too Madonna.

The cultivation system in this book is divided into 432 realms in total.

The setting is very good, and the writing is strong, but the plot still needs to be polished. The highlights are not bright enough, and the special advantages of the pig's feet are not obvious. However, how to continue to repair the shortcomings is a big problem. There are also a lot of typos. Full order on shelves

Typos aside, this book is OK!

The plot is too stiff, but try the writing style of Zhetian, and relax first : Pleasant foreshadowing unfolds, and you don't have to face powerful enemies out of nowhere, or provoke enemies out of nowhere. For example, the first twenty chapters can be turned into fifty chapters. First, a five-chapter plot of repression and endurance is described, and the character of the protagonist is portrayed. I just came through time, observed the environment, and endured the birdiness for the first time. You can also describe the situation when you discovered the golden finger, or write it down in your memories. After you came into contact with the corpse, you saw a coffin, and your secret was discovered by the people around you during the experiment. In order to prevent the secret from being leaked, in line with the principle that I would rather betray others than others betray me, I killed five people in a row and kept it secret.