Pushing Martial Arts Horizontally: Starting from Predicting Opportunities

I don't know why there is so much talk about poison, but I have read chapter 200 now. If there are no big changes later, I still want to read on.

1. It's not clear what this cheat is about. It is said that it can only be used after 8 years of death. After 8 years, the effect is like eating a stone. Then don't you have to be careful when using it in the future? If it is stuck for another 8 years, it will be useless. It takes 8 years to search 30 kilometers, and only 10 days to find a sister across the country. You don't even understand this setting. 2. Write a mother, and the character you portray is annoying. Forced to marry, favoring sons over daughters, etc. Why, those little gangsters like married women. The protagonist, a modern person, has no explanation. He married a wife when he was oppressed. Whether he can afford to support her or not, the child is definitely not yours 3. The brother-in-law's eldest brother found a gangster to molest the protagonist's sister. In the previous article, I wrote that my brother-in-law is a love brain and has better martial arts talent than his elder brother. The little gangster really fell in love with the protagonist's sister. Not only did the brother-in-law kill the gangster, he also had to go back and tell his elder brother: The way to death. The big family is embarrassed and has no brains? Isn't this kind of plot without brain?

The main character's mother is always urging her to get married, which makes me annoyed when I read it. The author's writing is very real, which makes me feel the real irritability 😎

After being put on the shelves, there are many poisonous points. The author should just sort it out and prepare to write a new book. 1. There are too many relatives, and he randomly found a wife and gave birth to children. The author's brain circuit is really invincible 2. The warriors transformed in 2 and 3 are all over the place in the second and third parts of the demon-slaying part. You can't see any of them in the front. The protagonist is so mysterious that he becomes weak 3. A protagonist who is decisive in killing often makes some witty quotes, which is very funny to watch.

The book is a good book. The first few dozen chapters are still very immature. From Chapter 49 onwards, I always feel that the author of the book has changed to a different person. The fighting scenes and the behavior of the pig's feet have completely changed. This has caused the novel to go up a level. Anyway, it is very interesting. Come on.

The background setting of the characters is really bad. Time travel means time travel. I have to deal with so many relatives for the protagonist. The father is dead and the mother is still there. The eldest sister is married, the second sister is missing and the third sister is still young. I am convinced. The father is dead and still causes trouble for the protagonist. People from the big family beat people in the street. Then The protagonist's father couldn't stand it, went to fight with him, was injured, and then died within a few years. He was really speechless. The protagonist's golden finger searched for a thing for eight years before it was completed. In the end, the thing was found in the protagonist's house. It was really speechless and extremely poisonous.

It digs a hole in the first chapter. The third sister disappears, the father is injured by a powerful man, and the eldest sister is not welcomed in her husband's family. There are too many settings at the starting point. Readers read too much, and it is easy to persuade them to quit at the beginning. The setting becomes a trap, and the writing is not brilliant, so it is easy to fall into the cliché and persuade them to quit.

My inspiration for writing this book actually came from the Romance of the Gods, such as bloodlines. I regarded the weird ones in the list of gods as bloodlines, such as the giant spirit general at the beginning, the protagonist's sky eye... If you are interested, you can use your imagination and post some interesting ones.

You can obviously write that the protagonist has just traveled to the past, but you have to write that the protagonist has traveled eight years ago. As a result, the golden finger cannot be used, and it is stuck for eight years. Isn't this setting a trap for yourself? The protagonist, Goldfinger, is a search engine. The shorter the terms you search, the wider the scope, and the more results you will get. The protagonist comes up and defines bloodline and safety for himself. You can choose either of these two words without being stuck for eight years. It took eight years to finally unlock the Goldfinger. Without using your brain, you searched for your sister directly for the second time. Can you find him or save him? Let's not talk about whether you can search for me, just assume that you can go there if you have found me? Can you save it? To sum up, there is only one definition for this protagonist - he is so ambitious and has no brains.

I can only say that it is a talent for the protagonist to be so ordinary when cheating.

I don't know why you have to write about parents. Seeing that Chapter 20 has been urging marriage, what else can I do if I have the final say. . . Hiding something or something. . . Hehe. Disgusting readers? I can't stand it anymore. . .

There are a lot of mother scenes. If it's not handled well, it's better not to write about it. Otherwise, it's okay, and I have the idea to keep reading. Just like cooking, making fried pork with chili, the standard method is to add tempeh, but many people are not skilled enough to reconcile the taste, causing the taste to be out of balance, so it is better not to add it. Just wait until you achieve success in cultivation.

What is the use of writing about the Cheng family? Originally I wrote that I didn't want to have anything to do with the Cheng family, but now I could have ignored it, but you insist on posting it. Very disgusting

If you don't know how to write about family ties, don't write about it. If you write about family ties, you'll end up hurting others.

No, why don't I just kill a pig if I don't even understand? Was he attracted? Isn't it too ridiculous to even send you to practice martial arts? Martial arts also depends on talent, and it must be very difficult for ordinary people to practice martial arts in troubled times. Isn't it too nonsense to just kill a pig with a special code and send you to practice martial arts?

What are the highlights of this novel? Waste my time

It's getting more and more outrageous. To break through Ganxuan, you have to kill dozens of Ganxuan to break through. A small county town has become a big cabbage. The original city Ganxuan only has two or three high-end martial arts, and the internal organs training is considered top-notch. It's as easy as killing a chicken like you. Bullshit logic

Are you going to break through and take a half-step to gain enlightenment? Two chapters, or one big chapter? I'm really afraid that there will be a half-step to the mysterious Dzogchen. Who dares to subscribe? In this case, you can only subscribe after feeling the mystery, which will ruin your character 🤫

Starting point: Why are there so many orphanages? Isn't it just because it's easy to write and saves trouble? Family dramas generally cannot be handled by the author. The character of the mother has been unlikable since her debut. Even if you have a golden finger, it will still be bland and have no sense of substitution, and the food will be tasteless. When it comes to word choice and sentence making, whether the sentences are smooth or whether there are typos or typos, please correct them.

Let me ask the readers here, after time travel, do you think your relatives are modern or after time travel? Can you really give your life for your sister after time travel? Can we keep our modern personality instead of letting a native seize his body and gain the memory of a modern person?

Is there any other recommendation of the same type? Please give Jingui's little finger a dd, please.

Speechless! Aren't you the author of the original novel? Why are these chapters repeated?

This kind of persona that is both expressive and upright makes it difficult to recognize people.

After reading Chapter 256, the writing up to this point is quite good, with no complaints. It's just that the update is too slow.

No, buddy, are you going to have surgery?

I'm ready to give up, always make some duplicates, or don't update them.