Immortality Begins by Taming Elephants

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A martial artist who can throw tens of thousands of kilograms of stones is afraid of an elephant with the same strength of tens of thousands of kilograms. Is his martial arts training in vain?

The logic is a bit strange at the beginning. The Zhu family is just an ordinary rich man who raises a gold-eating beast that he cannot control at all, and has no immediate combat power. It is best to have his family destroyed and join the enemy, and then have to draw blood to supply the elephant and the protagonist. Is this a tool man who doesn't need any brains at all and is dedicated to the protagonist?

Have you ever raised an elephant? You just write, some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

The protagonist is a rat in the gutter. What's the use of upgrading for a long time? A waste in the eyes of outsiders.

The elephant is the father of the protagonist, give all good things to the elephant. Including true spiritual blood, fourth-grade Tianzhuan and so on It really makes me sick.

Average, a bit classic. The whole world is safe, but the protagonist seems to exude a faint aura of ridicule all the time. In addition, he likes to be nosy and has no vision. He can sketch life and death in a small place.

Why don't you learn weapons? Like a knight, he is also a knight! Elephants kill people every day while you watch, even if you shoot an arrow!

You can even ask the author AI. Mammoths live in a cold environment and feed on grass and moss. They don't like water at all, and they don't eat fruits. The most likely reason is that they don't know the fruits they feed. Since you are writing about mammoths, you should at least justify yourself and write it as soon as you hit the head. The preface does not match the follower.

The novel actually becomes more and more exciting as it goes on. But the golden finger has basically disappeared now, right? In the past, I relied on brushing various professions to increase experience points and promote martial arts cheating. But are there new careers now? The golden finger has almost disappeared?

Not bad, not bad. The beginning gave me the feeling that the protagonist can also be a man and a dog 😁

The plot always jumps to other places, a few times is fine, but it always makes the reading inconsistent.

This opening is quite innovative. This is the first time I have relied on pets to support the scene. The plot is smooth and makes people watch it. It is not like some novels that have novel ideas, but the plot is a mess. However, some descriptions feel not detailed enough. I feel that it may be because there are too few chapters. Keep up the good work.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing 180 pictures. I can't think about many places. If I think about it, I will find a lot of violations.

The story is good, but the author's description of women makes her blush inexplicably. Why not just write that the protagonist goes to a music studio to get a new year's salary?

The writing in the front is quite good, except for a few minor flaws, it can be regarded as good food. But it gets weirder and weirder later on. Firstly, I don't understand why the Destiny Sect thinks that just giving the protagonist a fifth grade can cause chaos in Sichuan South Mansion, making the protagonist suddenly become the enemy of the whole world. The second reason is why the protagonist suddenly breaks up with Jiufengshan. The protagonist kills the disciples of Longmen, Jiang family, Shen family, and Dianyin Sect (all of them are big forces). He doesn't tell the sect before killing, but after killing, he thinks that the sect is not protecting you, and he must make it clear that it is the traitor who is doing it to you, not the sect. 3. Since the protagonist joined Jiufeng Mountain, he has gained a lot of benefits (Wanhuayuan is also Jiufeng Mountain), including the spirit-forging pool, exercises, and protection (killing Shen Suzhen). However, the protagonist has not actively done anything for Jiufeng Mountain, and he has a sense of deja vu.

Rough, the details behind are gone, the realm is getting faster and faster, and there is a lack of plot

The subsequent plot is not as smooth and interesting as the previous weak period.

No wonder it's limited to free, the plot behind it is messy, boring, and abandoned.

It's as boring as watching a TV show.

The introduction is so bad, why is it recommended by Sanjiang? Which editor is so unaesthetic?

Shennong: I am an eighth-level martial arts practitioner...

Free viewing only. In the early stage, it is very good to struggle in the middle stage. In the later stage, it is difficult to describe it in one word.

I've been reading it for the past few days, and I'm a bit confused as to what went wrong. If you have any ideas, please share them with me. I'll do my best to correct them if I can. Thank you all.

There is no need to look at the third grade. Less than two hundred chapters

Come on, stop being a eunuch! From the plot point of view, it seems to be quite smooth now. Personally, I feel that the conflict creation is a little weaker. To put it simply, the sense of excitement is a little weaker than before. Come on, I have given it to you before this month. Come on, come on

Stop being a eunuch 😐

Why is this golden nature so similar to that of the Golden Immortal?