When Humans Are Summoned to the Abyss by Demons

Well written, but the writing style needs to be improved. I read it slowly, so I found that the plot was very fast-paced, and some paragraphs were very disconnected from the next paragraph. There was a sense that it was taken for granted and I couldn't read it carefully. It was considered a fast-paced novel, and there were still too few updates to read. Well, my suggestion is that the author sends me 100 chapters, and I will help the author check for any gaps. I hope the author will not be ignorant!

My evaluation is worse than no evaluation at all

First, let me explain why the demon inside has such a low IQ. The race is a demon, and their brains have a beauty that has not been tainted by knowledge. They are more inclined to fight and have a straight mind. A few demons may know some magic, but the abilities of these magics are also geared towards certain purposes. They rely on their strong strength to communicate with people. Their strength tells their brains and they can defeat them with their fists. On the contrary, the protagonist is an ordinary and weak human being. After years of testing, under the training of capitalists and the training of the human society, a new race was born. They are called devils, and they are more inclined to use their brains.

A local human being was summoned to the abyss, and a clan of devils appeared.

Recruiting a Doom Slayer will make you happy😁

"When the first human being was successfully summoned by the demon..." "How about it?" "When the first human being was successfully summoned by the demon, the demons mastered this summoning technique. From then on, the demons have endless food!"

I feel that demons should all have very, very, very high IQs. If you don't have a high IQ, how can you survive in that environment? You have to start working hard as soon as you are born, and now many novels turn the devil into a reckless man? ? ? I don't quite understand. Regarding that environment, do you need me to say anything more?

Hey guys, not a single comment? The writing is okay

At first glance, it seems quite novel. After looking at it for a while, I realized that it was the workplace demon that had changed. It's hard to describe in one word, come on, author.

I feel like this is a story about the protagonist being scammed to northern Myanmar and then tricking the local army into becoming the king of scammers.

The author needs to promote it more. Find other authors and ask them to promote it too 😭 This book still lacks operation, but it still has its own strength.

Qidian has recently been reading a lot of books that only push a little bit of the plot in ten or twenty chapters. This book by the author is simply a breath of fresh air. I finally washed my eyes. What happened in a short period of time can fill you with more than ten chapters. The plot does not advance at all. After it is put on the shelf, it is even more watery. It is good that the author can maintain the current speed of plot advancement.

The writing is okay, but I don't know why it's lukewarm. The problem with the cover is still the problem with the name and introduction.

Put the author into a small dark room and write a book severely!

Flattery and intrigue are boring.

Lillie is slowly being dehumanized. How can the protagonist abduct Lilia if this continues? V: I am 50. I will kick the Sun God offline so that Lilia can regain her humanity and then fall under the protagonist's rhetoric 🤓

From the beginning, I was attracted by the plot of an unscrupulous social beast slapping pig's feet, but the plot gradually changed from a funny workplace style to a serious alien style, which is meaningless. Author, don't you think that if a comic with pure love as its selling point had an NTR or harem plot later in the plot, what would be the reaction of readers who follow the comics?

Fuck, I'm so embarrassed reading this comment section 😎

The tauren summoned humans for the first time. Senior, "Senior, why did the ancient minotaurs only eat grass and not wear clothes, and their children had to be raised intensively" Senior, "Senior, because before humans appeared, those ancient minotaurs not only ate grass, but also ate soil and scum. They didn't understand anything about clothes. As for the children, they didn't know which child was theirs."

These demons are all idiots. I really don't understand. I listen to whatever the protagonist says. Is this hell? I believe it when you say kindergarten.

I have seen the funny workplace to serious alternate world under the introduction, and the previous article is really good, but no one told me that Chapter 155 will become the fourth natural disaster! ? To be honest, it's a bit painful, so what do the first 155 pictures count? Preliminary summary? Prequel? It's not that The Fourth Natural Disaster is bad. It's disappointing that you took so long to prepare it! Author, what on earth do you want to write? And the way to change the map is also a mess. The basic plan laid out in the early stage exploded I really vomited.

It's really good. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. It's just a social beast who goes to another world to become a capitalist. Exploiting demons is okay hahaha

At present, the plot is basically a contest between high-level combat forces. The level of the Sun God should not be low in the god level, so the demon lord is tentatively classified as a weaker god level At present, there are very few descriptions of players, magic props and weapons and equipment. It allows readers to create something else, and by the way, it can expand the world view. If the subsequent plot is devolved to grassroots combat forces, maybe some points can be used directly here (

How many chapters have the player part ended? I want to read it but feel a little nauseous and want to skip it.

Quick update

I just read Chapter 6, and I'm relieved to find out that it's still being updated It's beautiful!