Tokyo: My System Is Too Involutional

The beginning is a bit depressing to read, and the plot is actually okay, but I really don't like the basketball temporary experience card part. Now you have to either give the experience card the corresponding ability after finishing it, or don't give it to such a powerful one.

Don't let the protagonist play Naoki Hansawa. Isn't this just for fun?

It was okay at the beginning, but in the middle, it started to show off the lack of subscriptions to make money, either with continuous lyrics or script content. Write scripts, film movies, sing and produce records. Sports now account for a very high proportion, and the content described is almost the same as sports articles. Do you want to please the readers of the sports department? The beautiful young lady who appeared earlier was inexplicably missing from the camera later on, which was anticlimactic. My strength persuaded the last reader to quit, I was really stupid, I just decided all the money, and it was a huge loss. Didn't the King of Bad Ends talk about it? Do you know why there are no readers' comments later? Because the remaining few have been persuaded to leave, they left messages and raised issues, but nothing changed, and they even got worse. I read the last one today because I didn't want to waste Quan Ding's money. I left a message to complain about my tens of dollars before abandoning the article. Bye-Bye.

This author gives me a sense of familiarity. Have I read your book before? He plays football.

You're playing football like this and you're back to your old ways. You have a stick here and a stick here and there. It's a mess. It's better to reach the pinnacle of a sport. You have a low number of words. I won't watch it anyway. I'm so disappointed.

The draft box alone has 100 chapters in it, and I can't write less than 1 million words. Feel free to follow it, I hope you all will follow it every day, thank you!

This name seems familiar. I clicked in and saw that it was indeed you. Don't be as bad as the last two books. Write slowly.

I don't understand why I always start in debt...

My personal suggestion is that if you want to draw comics, then draw comics. If you want to play basketball, go play basketball. If you want everything, you will have nothing.

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What about today's third update? Please add another chapter 🙂

Three updates will be resumed on Monday and Tuesday, because it is recommended to follow these two days, so don't forget to invest.

I read light novels for the love story, but you don't have that at all. I'll have to consider reading your books in the future.

Is the author not considered a newcomer? Why do you still make such a stupid mistake? In the beginning, either write the cool points of the system to attract readers, or create a dazzling character for readers to remember. But at the beginning, the system didn't even give you a gift package for newbies. It just gave you 3 points of attributes, which was somewhat useful but not very useful. It didn't feel good at all. The next thing is being asked for debt. As long as the 3 points of charm you just added are used here, I won't feel so aggrieved. Okay, then it's time for the heroine to appear, right? No, how many chapters did you write about the passerby Maya Moe? Is she the heroine? If it's not the heroine, what's the point of spending so much writing on it? Author, do you think readers will like reading these?

I went to film a drama again, I was really speechless, just one word

What are you writing about? I want to watch an emotional drama. What do you mean, a romantic drama? It's not interesting at all. Who wants to read it? What's the difference between writing a drama and a novel again and the last one? Why should we read it? If you keep writing like this, you might as well get rid of it.

If sports are good, just write about sports. Don't engage in entertainment. Sports and entertainment have different audiences. You can't have your cake and eat it too.