I Will Practice More in Tokyo

Those who have been persuading the author not to write monsters are true. The author has already written about monsters in the introduction. Not to mention that listening to your suggestions is equivalent to changing the outline. It is also right for others not to listen. I have been reading books at Qidian for so many years, and most of the readers who changed the outline have died violently. And have you ever thought about it, most people who read this novel will still click on it when they see monsters written below. Those who read this novel are not those few Crimson King. Is it worth it to delete the monsters and drive away some people who like to read monsters, and then drive away some people who don't like the author's random changes?

There is a problem when you join Chaofan. Why can your protagonist gain statistics in the sports field by relying on high attributes? There are no other extraordinary people entering the sports class. How else can you be a tennis prince or a football player from the beginning? Joining Chaofan after writing for a while is completely self-inflicted.

The mother of a classmate, the neighbor's aunt, the school student union president, the new music teacher, these elements can be added

The author really shouldn't have chosen this kind of track. It has completely become a Japanese-style story. The protagonist is aimless and improves for the sake of improvement. The author may have wanted to write a stream of consciousness, but it is a disaster, so far. He is a very uncharismatic protagonist with no passion or enthusiasm. There is also a kind of arrogance under the casual surface, contempt for hot-blooded idiots in football, and the choice of school is all inexplicable anyway.

There is a sense of gap. When I wrote about football earlier, the protagonist was Superman killing everyone. When the kendo club begins to have extraordinary monsters, the protagonist loses any advantage if he doesn't stack up his armor well, and the story changes from an invincible and cool story to a normal urban monster story.

The writing is good, but I still have to criticize your work 😆. The product is not right. I read this novel for the purpose of spiritual practice, monsters and love 😍. It turns out that there is too much football content, just like the picture on the packaging is a bitter black coffee. Coffee, it tastes as sweet as hot cocoa with milk 😫, which is not suitable for my needs at all 😆😆 Although, the football part does have some points that make me happy, and those who meet the needs will probably like it.

The plot is very well written so far. I feel that the plot is very real. I hope it won't be about monsters, otherwise I won't have the same sense of immersion as I do now.

After finishing writing about football, I feel that the author's enthusiasm has dropped a lot. Although I don't understand football, I feel that the first part of the article is very graphic, but the later part does not have the same feeling.

In fact, I will try to write a hybrid style of Noragami and Natsume's Book of Friends, combined with kendo battles. It is not a universal superman, but a small and fresh Japanese romance, different from other spiritual recovery themes.

Too much sports content will dissuade too many people who don't like watching sports themes. . .

Now this book faces a choice (the extraordinary world) or (the only method) (the only method). When this book is written, there is only one fox, a female classmate, who is suspected of being extraordinary. I see that the comment section is saying that the author writes well every day. If the author does not want to lose this group of readers, (to be honest, it is not a threat), the signs of the extraordinary world in the front can be stopped directly, and the only method is the end. (Extraordinary World) If this world has had extraordinary powers since ancient times, then the sports world should no longer be called sports but should be called competition. As the old saying goes, a good hero breaks the ban with force. There will never be ordinary stars like Messi and Ronaldo in this world. There will definitely be those kind of super humans who can run 100 meters in 5 seconds. In this case, if there is only one extraordinary person in the early stage who is the protagonist and earns statistics in the sports field, others will be surprised. Do you really think that all extraordinary people are great saints, not for fame and fortune, and don't like to be famous?

I can't understand what you posted after it was put on the shelves. It all jumps to the Kendo experience copy, but have you considered one thing? Do the people you attracted in the early stage want to see these? Author, you have a problem with the reader selection.

After reading the whole football article, I found that the author is a half-hearted football fan. He probably doesn't even understand the rules 😅. I hope to correct the bugs in the previous games...

If there are monsters, it will feel like the protagonist's full movement dominance is like a clown. Jumping in front of the stage. It's good to have my own way

If you don't like monsters appearing later, please leave a message and I will consider it carefully and decide whether to modify the outline later. Is it better to play professional football or play in a band in an island country?

Don't write about being extraordinary, you won't be able to please both ends.

The football chapter is particularly well written. Even though I never watch football, I still find it very interesting and passionate. When I entered the Kendo chapter, it suddenly lost its flavor, as if the author's enthusiasm had faded. Don't let the flame go out!

It's so confusing after writing about extraordinary things. .

There is a saying, writing about monsters is indeed not as exciting as writing about sports alone. Maybe it's because there isn't enough tension to express a monster like you. It's more like a person wearing skin than a monster. Of course, it would be better if you could write about that taste. However, it seems that whether it is competent or not still needs to be improved!

Guys, are there any novels about sports in Tokyo that are similar to this one? Please recommend 😁😁

It was okay before football, but it was really boring after that, just like a running account. The protagonist doesn't even have a goal or an upgrade path, and his emotional line is a blank slate. It's not everyday, it's not relaxing, it's not heartwarming, it's not artistic. There are many elements and it's a mess.

I really feel that the football part is well written, but the choice of the supporting actress is a bit strange. There is no big event to back it up, so I fell in love with it. Moreover, the sports are pretty good. Although Xuanhuan's writing is okay, the transition between the two is a bit fast.

Don't you want to write anymore? Say it, it makes people look forward to it 😰

It feels like it won't look that good once it's on the shelves. The main character has a high IQ and doesn't go to a good college, so he goes to a crappy college for fun. That feeling. This kind of author has been read a lot. Before it was put on the shelf, he wrote the book with a serious and grateful heart. Now that it is on the shelf, he is free to write whatever he wants and respect the readers at all.

Don't you want to write it down? Personally, I think the writing is okay.

Is it possible to play football, baseball, basketball, and kendo professionally for one year each?

A souvenir

Emmmm, I have always wanted to post a review of this book, but I kept putting it off. The style and content of this book, as far as I am concerned, is a book written by a certain voice actor➕Crow. The plot is OK in terms of interesting points, but the character creation and transition are very stiff. However, this is also a common problem. Either the writing is good on a daily basis, but the plot will escape from blandness, be too exciting, and conflict with the style. , Come on, download this book

The first ticket in March